Talk:Spike Albrecht

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Reviewer: FairyTailRocks (talk · contribs) 23:14, 8 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Quick-fail assessment

1. The article completely lacks reliable sources – see Wikipedia:Verifiability. -
2. The topic is treated in an obviously non-neutral way – see Wikipedia:Neutral point of view. -
3. There are cleanup banners that are obviously still valid, including {{
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4. The article is or has been the subject of ongoing or recent, unresolved edit wars. -
5. The article specifically concerns a rapidly unfolding current event with a definite endpoint. -

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Noted some issues below
	1b. it complies with the list incorporation .	Noted some issues below
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline .	Good here.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	I believe so
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	Stayed on focused.
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	Noted some issues below
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	No sign of edit warring.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as audio :
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	All of the images are licensed under Creative Commons.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions .	Good here.
	7. Overall assessment.	Not yet for now, fix some issues I have said and ping me when it's all done. Thanks! FairyTailRocks (talk) 07:21, 15 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I may start this week, and just give me a few days because I have an exam on Monday. Thanks! FairyTailRocks (talk) 06:54, 9 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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• Link "guard" and "sophomore" to its own article.
  • Although sophomore is an unusual thing to link I have done so.--
    WP:WAWARD) 04:40, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• He is playing his sophomore season for the 2013–14 team. to He is playing his sophomore season for the 2013–14 squad or lineup Avoid redundancy.
  • Fixed another way.--
    WP:WAWARD) 04:43, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• Replace "IN" to its whole name.
  • O.K.--
    WP:WAWARD) 04:45, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• Remove "see" in (see video below), per
  WP:REDEX#B
  .
  • Done.--
    WP:WAWARD) 04:47, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• Don't use currently, as that is conducive to the article growing out of date.
  • O.K.--
    WP:WAWARD) 04:53, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]

• Link "senior" and "freshman" to its own article
  • I also find these to be odd links, but I have linked them.--
    WP:WAWARD) 05:00, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• What is the meaning of AAA? I assume that it has its own article here. Wikilink it if possible
  • In high school sports, for statewide competition, schools are divided by enrollment size. States typically use one of three designation systems. Class A, B, C, D, etc; Class 1A, 2A, 3A, 4A, etc; or Class A, AA, AAA, AAAA, etc. I don't see a proper link.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:07, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• I know the meaning of MVP but some readers doesn't know it. Replace to its whole name.
  • Fixed.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:09, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• What is AAU?
  • Linked and spelled out.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:13, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]

• Albrecht had a modest role with the 2012–13 Wolverines team never scoring more than 7 points in a game before the NCAA Tournament. Can you make this sentence neutral? Seems like
  WP:EDITORIALIZING
  to me.
  • Fixed.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:44, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• In the regional finals on March 31 against Florida to In the regional finals last March 31 against Florida
  • In 2 weeks that won't even be true. That change does not even make sense.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:16, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• Following the game, Albrecht gained notoriety for tweeting with reigning Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Issue cover model and Michigan fan Kate Upton about her attendance at the game. to Following the match... Again, avoid redundancy.
  • Redundancy eliminated.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:24, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• On January 22, 2014, against (#10) Iowa Albrecht made his first career start.. to On January 22, 2014, against (#10 seed) Iowa, Albrecht made his first career start.. Add a comma, and link seed to Seed (sports)
  • This was a ranking and not a seeding.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:26, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• During the Michigan–Michigan State rivalry game on January 25 against the (#3) 2013–14 Spartans to During the Michigan–Michigan State rivalry game last January 25 against the (#3 seed) 2013–14 Spartans
  • This would add obsolescence to the sentence. In 10 months I would have to change it back. That is not a good idea. It should be clear that this paragraph is about the 2013-14 season.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:31, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
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• Minor issue on the image caption, Albrecht giving the three-point shot signal at the 2013 NCAA Tournament against Louisville during his memorable April 8 performance. to Albrecht giving the three-point shot signal at the 2013 NCAA Tournament against Louisville during his performance
  • O.K.--
    WP:WAWARD) 21:37, 17 March 2014 (UTC)[reply
    ]