Talk:Tracy Does Conan

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There are only a few little fixes that need to be made for the article to pass GAN:

  • It was written by, the series' creator and executive producer -- don't need comma.
  • it was directed by, one of the season's supervising producers -- and again.
  • Change 6PM to 6 p.m. or 6 pm, per
    WP:MOSNUM#Times
    .
  • he hasn't been taking his medication correctly -- convert contraction to "has not".
  • Liz gives the instructions to Kenneth Parcell (Jack McBrayer) who has to visit multiple identical until he finds the correct one, which will have Tracy's new medication -- this whole sentence doesn't make sense to me, from the fact that he has to "visit multiple identical" onwards. Maybe there's a word missing in there?
  • watching television at the time of the broadcast, in the U.S. -- even though it looks weird, you'll need another full-stop/period in there to indicate the sentence end.
  • Close Matt Webb Mitovich's second quote.
  • I think Robert Canning's review has been given a little too much weight;
    WP:MOSTV#Reception
    advises that reviewers' comments should not exceed about two per critic, and Canning currently has four, including the 5/10 rating.

That's pretty much it. You've got seven days to make changes so good luck in that time! —97198 talk 07:27, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Good work, and awesome new sig, by the way :) I'm happy to promote the article. —97198 talk 13:06, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment on GA review

This article may make sense to someone who's familiar with the TV series, but to someone who isn't, the storyline about Tracy's pills needs to be explained. There's no context or explanation for Tracy's medication. Is it permanent, temporary?

This sentence doesn't make much sense to me either: "Liz gives the instructions to Kenneth Parcell (Jack McBrayer) who has to visit multiple identical pharmacies until he finds the correct one, which will have Tracy's new medication." Will have? When will it have it? In what sense are the pharmacies identical? --

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