Talk:Tropical Storm Debby (2012)

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	A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on June 28, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Tropical Storm Debby is the earliest fourth named storm in the Atlantic Basin on record?

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http://www.nhc.noaa.gov/refresh/graphics_at4+shtml/152914.shtml?5-daynl#contents 71.3.48.147 (talk) 16:20, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A lot of the damage to the

2012 Tropical Storm Debby tornado outbreak - there is a tornado outbreak article, but there isn't that much additional content there. Should it be merged? --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:19, 6 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No, it is an outbreak of tornadoes and should not be included in an article about a tropical system, even if the tornadoes did come from that system. United States Man (talk) 20:30, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

But there are only 21 tornadoes. That's not all that much. And it's not like they were that widespread, nor was the outbreak that notable on its own. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 21:09, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Well they aren't going into this article. I will redirect it to Tornadoes of 2012 before that happens. United States Man (talk) 21:43, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I mean, the info on all of the tornadoes, like the one that caused the fatality, SPC info, some of the notable damage. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 22:05, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you mean a few paragraphs or something to that manner then okay. I thought you meant putting the tornado table and all into this article. United States Man (talk) 23:42, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A paragraph is sufficient. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 23:49, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, that works. United States Man (talk) 23:56, 7 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC) Per your IRC request yesterday, I will be reviewing this article.[reply]

• "The fourth tropical cyclone and named storm of the annual hurricane season, " I'd change "annual" to "2012 Atlantic" as it sounds weird the way it is IMO.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "d upwelling prevented further" say upwelling of cold water to avoid confusion.
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• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "Overall, Debby at least $210 million in losses and 10 deaths, 8 in Florida and 1 each in Alabama and South Carolina." infobox begs to differ.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• Fixed, both were wrong, actually--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "The Intertropical Convergence Zone (ITCZ) migrated northward into the southern Gulf of Mexico in mid-June. " I'd reword this to "During mid-June, the
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "However, the storm began to weaken due to increasing wind shear, drier air, and upwelling, caused by Debby's slow movement.[1]" Per above, say the upwelling was of cold water and why (because it was stationary.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "onsolidated into one well-defined low-level circulation by early on June 25.[8] D" If I you were you I'd link
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• Actually, this would be the right place for it. Instead, I just linked it in the first paragraph of the MH.--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• Any other Preps out there?
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• "nearly 200 single–family residences" why the
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• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "on June 24.[15] resulting in widespread flash flooding.[13]" comma after 24, not period.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane}

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• Make sure all units are consistently abbreviated.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• Better?--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "At Cedar Key, tides reached 6.78 feet (2.07 m) mean lower low water on June 25." "mean lower low water" should be removed IMO as it makes no sense whatsoever.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• This is the definition of MLLW.--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "Throughout Polk County, 115 homes were damaged, mainly as a result of tornadoes, and losses were estimated at $5 million.[24] A tornado in Hardee County felled several trees and damaged a tractor and barn." add an a before "barn".
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• "Following the storm, then-President of the United States Barack Obama" he is still the president so "then" is not needed IMO here. In 2016, we can change it back, don't worry.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:20, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• I wish it was Mitt Romney :P --12george1 (talk) 16:36, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• I don't.
  ^{Pacific Hurricane} 16:47, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply
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• Note - Why was this passed with the Preparations section in such poor shape? There was much more preparation than what's said in the article.
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  • It's not in poor shape, given the author's on-wiki actions, he did not indicate that there would be more preps. I'm gonna temporarily revert the passing.
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    • Okay, I see it's been expanded. I am re-passing this thing.
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