Talk:Wahrlich, wahrlich, ich sage euch, BWV 86

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:25, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Coming to this soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:25, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

• used a stanza Change to "used" to "and used" or "using"

I started a new sentence, because there's another "and" later --GA

• Who exactly was Grünwald? Can't know as it is a redlink now. (Same in "History and words")

the poet of the hymn lyrics who has an article in the German Wikipedia, - click on the little blue "de" for the person's data of birth and death --GA

History and words

• looking the reality of life looking "at"

yes --GA

• The structure of the six movements...one week earlier. Source?

it's the same Bischof (who has the structures of all Bach cantatas), in the other cantata, - do we really have to cite it also here? --GA

Safest to put it at the end of the queue. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:51, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

please check, - not sure if I know what queue means here, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:15, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fine now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:37, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Scoring and structure

• Wikilink "vox Christi"

yes --GA

Music

• Put "vox Christi" in italics

yes --GA

• interprets it the solo violin's motif as an image of plucking a rose Grammatical error?

yes --GA

That's it from me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:54, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, again! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:24, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to promote. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:37, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]