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A fact from When Jews Were Funny appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 June 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 22:50, 3 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
... that the documentary comedy films Being Canadian and When Jews Were Funny explore the filmmakers' cultural identity through interviews with dozens of comedians? Source: Playback magazine: "Robert Cohen's film about rediscovering his national identity" Hollywood Reporter: "Being Canadian trots out an endless array of celebrities, an alarming number of them comic talents, who hail from the Great White North." Realscreen: "So I just was looking for a way to talk about my Jewish identity and I thought that using the window of Jewish comedians would make it a little more accessible to people." CBC: "Zweig interviews dozens of men (and a couple of women), from old Borscht Belt veterans like Shecky Greene and Shelley Berman to up-and-comers like Andy Kindler and Marc Maron."
ALT1: ... that the documentary comedy films Being Canadian and When Jews Were Funny examine the comedic perspective of invisible outsiders? Source: Esquire "nobody outside of Canada would know it. This seems to me the defining feature of Canadian ethnicity: It is invisible." The Times of Israel: "he found himself exploring a much deeper issue of assimilation, modernization, and the mighty serious link between successful humor and outsider status."
Comment: Requesting 1 May or otherwise in early May for Canadian Jewish Heritage Month. We've missed May so requesting 1 July for Canada Day. The hook facts could be loglines about either film; the remarkable thing is that the two films are so similar. Citations may have to be added after picking the best hook; I'm also open to other hooks.
10× expanded (When Jews Were Funny) and new article (Being Canadian) by Reidgreg (talk). Self-nominated at 02:27, 19 March 2022 (UTC).[reply]
Now that's cashing in an old QPQ! ;) Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@TonyTheTiger: Thanks for the review! I've done some additional paraphrasing. For WJWF, one source still has over 10% Earwig score due to proper names and the quote from the TIFF jury, which I'd prefer to keep. For BC, the 13 and 14% scores are from proper names; the 17% score is from an illustrative review quote which I'd prefer to keep. As for citations, I feel it's up to DYK standards. The Synopsis sections are essentially the same as Plot sections for a non-documentary, using the work itself as the source. Are there any specific places you would like to be cited? (or in general if you feel there's a lot) – Reidgreg (talk) 07:08, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@TonyTheTiger: There may need to be additional citations for the hook fact(s), depending on which hooks we go with. We can eliminate the hooks you feel are problematic and concentrate on what's left. What do you think? What should I be working on? – 23:17, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@TonyTheTiger: I've struck ALT1 and ALT2. Could you give it a tick so it can be moved to the approved page? Thanks! – Reidgreg (talk) 23:04, 13 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The interview lists are also verifiable to the work itself, with on-screen text when they first appear and also in the credits. I have some RSS which give partial lists (usually the more famous names) if you'd like me to add those.
There was a line in Financing of Being Canadian which had in-text attribution to the Indiegogo fundraising website. I literally couldn't cite this because the editor wouldn't save it – Indiegogo is blacklisted – so I removed it. It's too bad, because this provided contextual information for the delay of the film's release.
Been there. There is a lot of unreliable stuff on the internet that would be of interest to readers that we just don't present on WP.--
In the Inverviews section of WJWF is an uncited line: among the last filmed interviews or appearances by Shelley Berman, Jack Carter, and David Brenner. I believe that these are their last filmed interviews before their deaths (Berman died in 2017, Carter in 2015 and Brenner in 2014). I wasn't able to find anything else, but didn't have a source to specifically state that and so I put among. Let me know and I'll remove it if you feel it isn't good enough.
I feel it's important on a couple points: It's the last known interview with a couple, and likely several, of these legendary comedians. In some cases, their last filmed performances (ie: telling a joke). That they have died also underlines how this older generation of Jews is disappearing. I feel like this gives the film a place in the history of comedy, as well as discussing it. Not every in-depth source mentions this, but a couple do, and I feel it's worth including even if it might not be of interest to every reader. – Reidgreg (talk) 05:32, 5 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
If what you are saying is relevant to a particular individual the phrase "among the last filmed interviews or appearances by Shelley Berman, Jack Carter, and David Brenner" should have some sort of
I concede. Removed. – Reidgreg (talk) 15:41, 10 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Coming here per a note left on WT:DYK. From what I recall before, plot summaries/synopses do not seem to be excluded from the "all hook facts must have a footnote" requirement. One possible way to get around this, especially if an independent source can't be found, could be to simply cite the documentary itself, perhaps with a timestamp. I think there's a citation template for AV media so that could work. Synopses/plot descriptions are excluded from the "all paragraphs must have at least one footnote" requirement provided that the synopses are neutral and do not have any interpretation, but this does not apply if hook facts themselves are based on the synopses. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:43, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I don't believe the hook fact is dependent on the synopsis. The question, I believe, was about uncited paragraphs in the synopsis. That's done, I think, and I don't believe citation formatting is a reason to hold up the nomination.
If {{rp}} is acceptable/understandable for book pages, I don't know why it would be unacceptable/confusing for time in a video. I'm sure I've seen formatting like this used somewhere, though I may not have executed it the proper way (it's not the easiest thing to search for). I'd rather not clutter the references with a separate cite AV media template for each of the 8 uses (especially when most of them aren't necessary per MOS:FILM). – Reidgreg (talk) 19:08, 1 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
If an independent source confirms the hook fact, it could just be added to another section and have that be used as the hook fact cite. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:50, 1 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Tony hasn't been very active lately and despite pings has not returned to the nomination. It may be worth asking for another reviewer in his absence. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:32, 24 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Agree, new reviewer please. BTW, both articles have recently gone through
WP:GOCER copyedits. – Reidgreg (talk) 13:30, 30 May 2022 (UTC)[reply
]
New and fresh reviews:
Both pages were new enough and long enough/large enough expansion at time of expansion. QPQ was supplied at time of nomination. My preference for hooks is ALT1, 2a, or 2b, which all check out.
Being Canadian:
Canadians' inferiority complex — Paragraph starting with this lacks an inline citation.
For the Canadians' inferiority complex paragraph, per
WP:FILMPLOT
) and thus do not require references. I tried to include citations to RSS for both articles where available, but for the last half of that paragraph I didn't find anything. I believe it's a pretty straight-forward summary of that scene of the film, although perhaps "Canadians' inferiority complex" should be "Canadians' perceived inferiority complex" or "Canadian interviewees' inferiority complexes"?
Cohen had hoped to release I had a primary source for the last bit of that paragraph but the website was blacklisted. I've removed the unsourced part.
The [clarification needed] tags were added by a copyeditor. I'd discussed it on the copyeditor's talk page, and though I'm not sure they're 100% satisfied with my changes I've gone ahead and removed the tags.
Please let me know if this is okay or if there's anything else of concern. – Reidgreg (talk) 17:16, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with the synopsis/plot summary reasoning myself and see the other two issues have been resolved. This is ready to go. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:39, 3 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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Tony hasn't been very active lately and despite pings has not returned to the nomination. It may be worth asking for another reviewer in his absence. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:32, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
New and fresh reviews:
I agree with the synopsis/plot summary reasoning myself and see the other two issues have been resolved. This is ready to go. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:39, 3 June 2022 (UTC)