Talk:With You (Kaskade and Meghan Trainor song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 20:48, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Will take this on tomorrow --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:48, 23 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, Kyle. I would also like to invite you to comment at Trainor's featured article nomination should you find some time later.--NØ 07:51, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

• Cover art needs alt text
• Writer(s) and Producer(s) should be bullet points instead of hlist
• WP:OVERLINK
  of Meghan Trainor in the infobox
• "and American singer-songwriter" → "and singer-songwriter"
• "Kaskade co-wrote the track with" → "Kaskade and Trainor co-wrote the track with"
• "Richard Beynon and Thomas Shaw, and" → "Richard Beynon, and Thomas Shaw, while Kaskade"
• "Released on June 14, 2019," → "Released as a single on June 14, 2019," with the appropriate target
• "it is an electropop song and lyrically talks about" → "the song is an electropop track. The lyrics talk about"
• "The song received positive reviews from critics." there are not enough reviews to back up this claim
• "Commercially, it reached" → "Commercially, "With You" reached"
• "additionally managing to reach" → "additionally managing to enter"
• ""With You" received an
  animated video as well as an official" → "An animated
  video was released for it, as well as a" with the target
• "a Remix EP featuring" → "a Remix EP, featuring"
• "Loris Cimino and Dexter," → "Loris Cimino, and Dexter,"

• Retitle to Background and release
• Remove wikilink on Kaskade
• "Gorgon City and Roméo" → "Gorgon City, and Roméo"
• "He co-wrote "With You"" → "Him and Trainor co-wrote "With You""
• "Richard Beynon and Thomas Shaw, and" → "Richard Beynon, and Thomas Shaw, while Kaskade"
• "Kaskade enlisted Meghan Trainor as" → "Kaskade enlisted Trainor as"
• "the track, and said that" → "the track, saying that"
• "yes for me. I knew we could" → "yes for me". He continued, stating that he knew they "could"
• "While the former stated that" → "Trainor stated that"
• [3][4] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
• Wikilink social media to itself
• "on June 10, 2019.[5] A snippet" → "on June 10, 2019, while a snippet"
• [5][6] should both be solely at the end of the sentence in new order
• "and streaming on June 14" → "and streaming as a single on June 14 of that year"
• "to contemporary hit radio in Italy" → "to contemporary hit radio as a single in Italy"
• "June 28, and the US" → "June 28, and the United States"
• "and Epic Records respectively" → "and Epic Records, respectively"
• "in the latter country on August 5, 2019" → "as a single in the US on August 5, 2019"
• "Columbia Records released a Remix EP" → "Columbia released a Remix EP"
• "featuring remixes of it" → "including remixes of it"
• "Loris Cimino and Dexter" → "Loris Cimino, and Dexter"

Composition and reception

• Wikilink tempo to itself
• "sending her mixed signals" → "delivering mixed signals to her"
• "she could be using her time better" → "she could be making better usage of her time"
• "song finds her" → "song finds Trainor
• Target chorus to Refrain
• Dancing Astronaut should not be italicised
• Target digestibility to Digestion
• "it, and that" → "it and that"
• Target synth to Synthesizer
• Remove
  Radio.com
  since that is literally the only review cited here; the other two are just explaining the composition
• "reached number 15 on the" → "reached number 15 on the Billboard"
• "on the Adult Top 40 chart," → "on the Adult Top 40 chart."
• "and numbers 12 and 31" → "It further peaked at number 12 and 31"
• "charts respectively" → "charts, respectively"
• "It earned a number 46 placement on the Year-end" → "The song ranked at number 46 on the year-end US"
• "chart, and additionally charted" → "chart for 2019, while additionally charted"

Promotion

• Retitle to Music videos and promotion, since the Live performance subsection is one sentence which can go in the last para of the merged sub-sections

Music videos

• "An accompanying
  animated video for "With You" was" → "An accompanying animated
  video was" with the target
• "explore a psychedelic outer space. It commences" → "explore a psychedelic outer space and the video commences"
• Sure there isn't any appropriate target for psychedelic?
• "controlling a spaceship and crashing" → "controlling a spaceship that she crashes"
• "rocky terrain which is populated" → "rocky terrain, which is populated"
• "mystical superpowers, and Trainor can cast" → "mystical superpowers and Trainor is able to cast"
• "eyes, which grow trees" → "eyes that grow trees"
• Remove target on Billboard
• "described it as" → "described the music video as"
• Entertainment Tonight Canada should be italicised
• Wikilink technicolor to itself
• "the official music video was released" → "the music video for "With You" was released"
• "Idolator's Mike Wass described the visuals" → "Wass described the visuals of it"
• "as she was" → "stating that she was"
• Add the live performance sentence straight after the above one in the same para

Live performance

• "Kaskade and Trainor performed "With You" for the first time, on Today, on September 13, 2019." → "On September 13, 2019, Kaskade and Trainor performed "With You" on Today for further promotion."

Track listing

• Good

Personnel

• Retitle to Credits and personnel
• Wikilink Meghan Trainor to herself

Charts

Weekly charts

• See
  MOS:TABLECAPTION

Year-end charts

• See above

Release history

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION
• Format → Format(s)
• The refs should all be centered
• Remixes → Remix EP

References

• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
• Copyvio score looks alright at 32.4%
• Cite Your EDM as publisher instead for ref 1
• Cite Dancing Astronaut as publisher instead for refs 5 and 14, but keep no wikilink on 14
• Cite Radio Date as the publisher for ref 8
• Cite Apple Music of numerous countries for ref 11 to verify that the release was indeed various
• Wikilink Record Report to itself on ref 21
• Cite Entertainment Tonight Canada as work/website instead for refs 24 and 26, but keep no wikilink on 26

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold, nice article that needs some improvements. --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:27, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• I have gone ahead and done everything. I added a couple more reviews and kept the line about the song receiving "positive reviews", and the stuff from Radio.com.--NØ 09:41, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MaranoFan You will need to add another review to verify that it was positive since three is not enough and mention what was praised in the lead, plus I have split the Composition and reception section for you. Also, add a third citation under the various release... maybe Venezuela or China if they have Apple Music; if not that then some popular place like Australia. --Kyle Peake (talk) 12:13, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Done.--NØ 12:26, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, ✓ Pass! --Kyle Peake (talk) 13:43, 24 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]