Template:Did you know nominations/Arsenal Women 11–1 Bristol City Women

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:43, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

Arsenal Women 11–1 Bristol City Women

Meadow Park

• ... that Arsenal Women's 11–1 win over Bristol City at Meadow Park was the largest victory in the history of the FA Women's Super League with six goals from Vivianne Miedema (pictured)? Source: Belfast Telegraph
  • ALT1:... that Vivianne Miedema's (pictured) six goals for Arsenal Women in their 11–1 win over Bristol City made her the highest scoring non-British footballer in the Women's Super League? Source: The Guardian

• Reviewed: Vivianne Miedema
• Comment: With apologies to @Edwininlondon: if he'd like to suggest his own hook.

Improved to Good Article status by Edwininlondon (talk). Nominated by The C of E (talk) at 07:04, 22 November 2020 (UTC).

Overall: @The C of E: I noticed that the hook says Miedema scored five goals, while the article says six. Please clarify/fix this. Additionally, single-digit numbers should be spelt-out and Miedema should be linked. Regards, IceWelder [✉] 13:54, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

@IceWelder: Sorry, mistyped that. I have fixed it now. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 13:55, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

The C of E, thanks. I would still like to see Miedema, who takes centre-stage in both hooks, linked, maybe as well as the Super League. If you think this is superfluous, I can pass it without these changes, too. IceWelder [✉] 14:06, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

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WP:OLINK that takes clicks away from the hook article. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk

) 15:22, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

Works for me. Please ping me if Edwininlondon wants to propose different hook. Regards, IceWelder [✉] 15:24, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

• @The C of E: you have the same image, not cropped, at Template:Did you know nominations/Vivianne Miedema. Do you (1) want to combine this into a double hook? or (2) just move the image to Miedema's nomination and take her out of this hook? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 17:04, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
• That could work but you would have to ask @Hmlarson: as he has the player nomination not me. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 17:55, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• @Yoninah: - what would a double hook look like? Hmlarson (talk) 18:13, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• @Hmlarson:
• ALT0a ... that Arsenal Women's 11–1 win over Bristol City at Meadow Park was the largest victory in the history of the FA Women's Super League with six goals from Vivianne Miedema (pictured)? Source: Belfast Telegraph
• ALT1a:... that Vivianne Miedema's (pictured) six goals for Arsenal Women in their 11–1 win over Bristol City made her the highest scoring non-British footballer in the Women's Super League? Yoninah (talk) 18:39, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• Personally if we are going to merge the nominations, I would back ALT1a because it covers both the match and also Miedema's record. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 18:43, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• How about this revision that emphasizes she now holds the all-time record? cc Edwininlondon, Yoninah, The C of E

ALT2a ... that Dutch international Vivianne Miedema (pictured) holds the all-time scoring record in England's Women's Super League and recorded six goals and four assists for Arsenal Women in their 11–1 win over Bristol City?

Hmlarson (talk) 18:58, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

Fine with me. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 19:03, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• @Hmlarson: well, it feels like you're cobbling together two hooks when one will do. If you want to do a hook only about her, fine, but this nomination shouldn't mention her. Yoninah (talk) 19:04, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• Isn't that what you kind of did in ALT1a? This seems fine to me if it's ok with Edwininlondon to consolidate the two. If you prefer to keep them separate, that's fine also -- but I'd prefer her photo be included on the one for her article Vivianne Miedema. Hmlarson (talk) 19:46, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• @Hmlarson: I didn't write any of these hooks; I just bolded the link for Vivienne Miedema. I agree with you that we should run the player hook separately, with the cropped image, and not mention her in this hook. This hook nomination could be:
• ALT0b: ... that Arsenal Women's 11–1 win over Bristol City at Meadow Park was the largest victory in the history of the FA Women's Super League?
• Pinging The C of E. I'm moving the cropped image over to Miedema's nomination. Yoninah (talk) 20:09, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• As she's a major part of this match article, I'd support the original hook instead --- just remove the photo or sub for a different one. Thanks. Hmlarson (talk) 20:21, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• @Hmlarson: but then we're back to ALT0a! Yoninah (talk) 20:32, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• Sure, so you could just remove the photo or swap for a different one. If you're going to keep the two separate, I'll let The C of E and Edwininlondon make the call. Thanks. Hmlarson (talk) 20:38, 23 November 2020 (UTC)

• I must confess, ALT0b was what I was originally planning on doing with a picture of Meadow Park, I just added the Miedema bit after because the image was in the article. I think the original review still stands as it hasn't been overriden and the crux of the original hook is still there. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 06:58, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

• Fine. ALT0b works well on its own. The image is freely licensed and appears in the article. Restoring tick per IceWelder's review. Yoninah (talk) 13:40, 24 November 2020 (UTC)