Template:Did you know nominations/Canthotomy
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by BorgQueen (talk) 03:12, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
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Canthotomy
- ... that canthotomy is a surgical procedure where the corner of the eye is cut to relieve the pressure inside, or behind, the eye? Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=zfknhzaSOSAC&pg=PA963
Moved to mainspace by Mburgon (talk). Nominated by BorgQueen (talk) at 05:00, 24 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Canthotomy; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Policy compliance:
- Adequate sourcing:
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- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Hook eligibility:
- Cited: - n
- Interesting:
- Other problems: - not in body
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@Mburgon and BorgQueen: So some things. First, the hook isn't stated in the body and I'm also not sure if the part of it being used to relieve pressure both inside or behind the eye (though that's likely because I'm not knowledgeable in medical related topics). Though for citation problems, I can't find where citation 9 states that it's " often used as a last resort. Also would prefer a citation for the entirety of the Contraindications rather than the first sentence. Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:57, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
- @Onegreatjoke: The hook is the very first sentence of the article, just simplified a bit. But you're right about the pressure behind the eye bit, as the source I've read only talks about the pressure inside the eye. If the article creator doesn't respond in a few days I'll see what I can do and perhaps rewrite it. BorgQueen (talk) 20:19, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
