Template:Did you know nominations/Cheers (season 2)

Created/expanded by George Ho (talk). Self nom at 07:09, 19 September 2012 (UTC)

good article

given a little more work on the prose and a more careful balancing of the episode list.

As for the hooks however...the first one is too bland (and the low first season ratings claim isn't actually sourced), the second has nothing to do with the season itself and is probably true of the majority of Paramount projects at the time, and the third is not quite sourced in the article (similar things are said, but no specific mention is made that they "did not regret" the pairing. Personally, I'd suggest something more like one of the following:

ALT3 ... that the

second season of Cheers won four Primetime Emmy Awards

?

ALT4 ... that several reviewers criticized the romance between

second season of Cheers

because it lasted too long and presented a poor relationship role model?

I know the first is not "unusual", but it is a strong claim to high quality, and to me is enough. The second combines two separate sourced facts from the article; I assume this is okay, but if it has to arise out of a singular sourced statement, it could be modified. Qwyrxian (talk) 00:20, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

I don't know; removing things, like one paragraph or one partial sentence, may be deemed to me as more than mere copyediting. Also, you made two alternative hooks, so another reviewer may be needed, unless I'm wrong. --George Ho (talk) 00:30, 9 October 2012 (UTC)

That would be completely fine by me. Qwyrxian (talk) 23:29, 9 October 2012 (UTC)