Template:Did you know nominations/James Freeman (clergyman)

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 02:13, 12 February 2023 (UTC)

James Freeman (clergyman), Book of Common Prayer (Unitarian)

( Back to T:TDYK )

( Article history links:

)

Portrait of James Freeman by Gilbert Stuart

... that in 1785, at age 24, James Freeman (pictured) convinced King's Chapel to adopt his revised prayer book, contributing to it becoming the first Unitarian congregation in the United States? Source: Greenwood, Francis William Pitt (1833). A History of King's Chapel, in Boston, the First Episcopal Church in New England: Comprising Notices of the Introduction of Episcopacy Into the Northern Colonies. Boston: Carter, Hendee & Company. p. 135 – via Google Books.; "King's Chapel". The Pluralism Project. Harvard University. 17 September 2014. Retrieved 8 February 2023.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Werner Pinzner; Template:Did you know nominations/Bellwood station (Chicago Aurora and Elgin Railroad)
- Comment: ~~QPQs to come~~

5x expanded by Pbritti (talk). Self-nominated at 21:42, 8 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/James Freeman (clergyman); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral : Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed : Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: Nice work on these two articles Pbritti. I can approve this nomination after you do two QPQs. Epicgenius (talk) 14:55, 9 February 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for you patience on the QPQs, Epicgenius. They are now done with one pending comment from the nominator. If you have a moment, I would appreciate you maybe looking at the below ALT, as I'm worried that the "it" in the original hook is grammatically unsound. I prefer the original–it spares us the double "his" and is contextually self-evident–but I figured I should at least mention it.

ALT1: ... that in 1785, at age 24, James Freeman (pictured) convinced his congregation to adopt his revised prayer book, contributing to King's Chapel becoming the first Unitarian congregation in the United States?

Thank you! ~ Pbritti (talk) 17:17, 9 February 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the response. I think ALT1 is better, so I'll approve that hook. I'll strike ALT0, because I agree with you - "it" can refer to the book instead of the chapel. Epicgenius (talk) 18:11, 9 February 2023 (UTC)