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Maternity care deserts in the United States

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Created by Kristudent194 (talk). Self-nominated at 11:52, 14 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Maternal Care Deserts in America; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • ALT0 might be too short, I'd suggest something like "classified as MCDs" rather than "are MCDs" Orchastrattor (talk) 04:39, 21 December 2023 (UTC)

The nominator, Kristudent194, has not edited Wikipedia since Dec. 19. Unless the user returns, or someone is willing to take over this nomination, I am closing this as abandoned. Z1720 (talk) 15:07, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

ALT1a invites the obvious question "more dangerous than what"? so obviously needs clarification. Gatoclass (talk) 05:55, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
Actually I think that makes it more "hooky". Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 17:58, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
ALTa looks fine, except that the figure of 36% is not in the article. Other than that, there are still a couple of in-text tags that need addressing. Gatoclass (talk) 06:04, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
@Mary Mark Ockerbloom: It's been a few days since the above comment, will you be able to address the remaining issues? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:04, 8 February 2024 (UTC)
  • @Narutolovehinata5 and Z1720: Thanks for catching that, and for your patience. I have now fact-checked and cited all of the data given in the Wikipedia article. There were a couple of places where secondary sources had rounded up numbers from the march of dimes reports, so I cited the originals as better numbers. MOD gives "34.9" as the percentage of counties in 2020, and "35.6" in Table 2 in its 2022 report. The BMJ, also cited, states "Some 1119 of the nation’s 3143 counties are maternity care deserts, a 2% increase since the 2020 report." Given that, I would like to propose the following instead:
    • ALT2 : ... that the percentage of counties in the United States that are classified as maternity care deserts increased from 34.9% in 2020 to 35.6% in 2022? Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 01:52, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
      • Not a review, but since the interesting thing in this hook is the term "maternity care desert" itself, I would keep it short and go with a single figure, like the original hook. (I disagree with Orchastrattor here; shorter is usually better for DYK purposes.) --Paul_012 (talk) 13:36, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
What Paul said. Gatoclass (talk) 13:55, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
If we use a more accurate number, as given below, ALTa could pass as:
ALTa2 looks fine, except that you don't appear to have a source for the total number of US counties (3143 according to the article). Gatoclass (talk) 11:58, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
@Gatoclass: Thanks for catching that, I've fixed ALTa2. Table 2 of the 2022 report shows a total of 3,142 counties. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 13:29, 15 February 2024 (UTC)


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.
Overall: ALTa2 verified. Thank you for taking the trouble to rescue this important nom Mary! Gatoclass (talk) 14:02, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
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