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WJHP-TV
- ... that one of the "plushest" nightclubs in northern Florida turned into studios for a TV station in Jacksonville? Source: https://search.proquest.com/docview/1401209189 or https://www.worldradiohistory.com/Archive-BC/BC-1953/BC-1953-10-19.pdf
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- Comment: Would be my 700th DYK
Moved to mainspace by Sammi Brie (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 687 past nominations.
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:20, 11 May 2024 (UTC).
- Hi, @Sammi Brie:, I'll be reviewing this
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Overall: Everything checks out, an interesting choice of word (from the cited pub;and I have no issue with it), but they've also used the term lavish in there. But can toning it down a bit for the gullibility of a wider audience be considered? Like, rewriting it using one of the more known synonyms instead, such as "luxurious"? Let me know your opinion. PS: I've done some minor copy editing, but overall it's nicely written. And congrats on your 700th. X (talk) 06:06, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Xoak: I'm not comfortable rewriting a quote to distance it from the source in this case. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:35, 17 May 2024 (UTC)