User talk:Aoba47/Archive 21

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Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of JohnWickTwo -- JohnWickTwo (talk) 01:40, 14 August 2018 (UTC)[reply

The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Leah LaBelle has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Best of luck with the FA review.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 20:43, 14 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you! Have a great rest of your day and/or night!
  Aoba47 (talk) 22:14, 14 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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The article The Beautician and the Beast you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:The Beautician and the Beast for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of JohnWickTwo -- JohnWickTwo (talk) 04:03, 15 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Wait, it's not like I am calling you lady. I mean, I have recently nominated Lady (Devil May Cry) and wondered if you could review it in the meantime. The article is quite smaller in comparison to Kazuya so it won't take long to review it. Anyway, happy editing.Tintor2 (talk) 23:30, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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  Aoba47 (talk) 00:12, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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No problem. Thanks.Tintor2 (talk) 00:19, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hey there! I've seen from your participation with Micropowerpoint's Saving Light GA nomination that you are quite skillful in GA reviews. By any chance if you're free one of these days, do you think you can check out if my Not All the Beautiful Things article is eligible for a GA review? Thanks man! aNode (discuss) 07:49, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for the message. I will grab it for a review.
  Aoba47 (talk) 19:07, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Hey, I saw your message on the FAC page for Saving Light which you offered to rewrite the critical reception. If you want to rewrite it in your sandbox then override the actual article’s part with it, you can if you want to, I’m not very sure how to improve it myself apart from the suggestions I made on the FAC page in response to the oppose, who has yet to respond. Micro (Talk) 03:22, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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  Aoba47 (talk) 03:38, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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• Thanks for your help, I replaced the critical reception in the article with yours. I can see why the quotes were an issue, too many of them, linear and repetitive. It will be a shame if the opposer does not comment further and/or just leaves the oppose there, I won't know if the new critical reception improved the article and make it FA ready. Micro (Talk) 06:04, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• I am glad that I could help somewhat. If the FAC fails, then you could always message the opposer on their talk page. Good luck with the nomination!
  Aoba47 (talk) 15:57, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Just a quick tip -- you don't need the "composer" listings from Allmusic when crediting the personnel. That's just reiterating the songwriting credits from the tracklist. No idea why Allmusic does that. See Wikipedia:WikiProject_Albums/Album_article_style_advice#Personnel. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 18:57, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for the message.
  Aoba47 (talk) 18:58, 20 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Hi there! I just wanted to ask if you have time to give a look at the article again, as I've found some helpful links that expanded the page a little bit. Thank you! Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:18, 26 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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  Aoba47 (talk) 17:56, 26 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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• Thank you very much for your contributions; I feel that the language is somewhat better now. Regarding your point, I can't help but be 'sad' as well. But what can I do? I'll just wait for Inna to release another banger soon lol . Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:39, 26 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• I am glad that I can help. It will be interesting to see what Inna and Stan do next.
  Aoba47 (talk) 18:50, 26 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Hi. You probably don't even remember, but you commented at Jill Valentine's FAC1 (over a year ago at this point). The original nominator – Freikorp – was driven away from the article, but I decided to take it over myself, and have been working on it for the past several months. I plan on renominating it at FAC sometime in September. Would you be interested in looking at the article sometime over the next few weeks and commenting at the next FAC? I understand if you don't wanna get involved again, but would really appreciate any feedback you might have. Cheers. Homeostasis07 (talk) 01:09, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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  Aoba47 (talk) 01:23, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks for responding Aoba47. The whole JV thing was probably the most unpleasant incident I ever came across on Wikipedia as well, so I understand your point of view. As much as I think a new (i.e., new users) peer review could help, if the same people who took part in the last PR took part in the next one... I couldn't deal with that. Freikorp needs to be sainted for how he handled it, because I would've flipped my lid much earlier. I've no interest in moderating a two-month+ peeing contest. So that's why I'm doing this instead (asking people for their opinions one-to-one on their talk pages). Surprise surprise, the vast majority of them are exactly like you, saying something along the lines of not wanting to go near JV ever again for the rest of their editing lives. I wonder why. Anyways, happy editing. ;) Homeostasis07 (talk) 22:20, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for the message, and good luck with the article! She is a rather important character in video game history so it would be nice to see the article be the best it could be.
  Aoba47 (talk) 23:53, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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  Aoba47 (talk) 01:45, 28 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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No, you're not a jerk. ;) I might have 2/3 free hours for your FAC tomorrow. If not, then the weekend. And the article's edit history doesn't off-put me so much, because both me and the previous custodian took care of a lot of that. What motivates me most is the overall ugliness Jill Valentine endured during the FAC and PR process. I've written (at least) 10 possibly-FA-approvable articles over the past year, but I haven't gone near FAC since the JV debacle last October. I'm doing this more to restore my own faith in the Wikipedia "process" than anything else. If genuine consensus is against Jill's article for genuine reasons at FAC4, then fair enough. If it isn't promoted for some BS reason, though, then I'm pretty much done with Wikipedia altogether. So there's a lot riding on this... ;) Homeostasis07 (talk) 00:11, 29 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you! I completely understand. I hope that it turns out well, as I would like to see your future work on here :-)
  Aoba47 (talk) 00:25, 29 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Crap on a stick, Aoba. I completely forgot about your FAC. Sorry. Working on it now. ;) Homeostasis 12:57, 4 September 2018 (UTC)

Thank you!

Aoba47 (talk) 17:05, 4 September 2018 (UTC)[reply

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Hi there again! While copy-editing your article, I noticed something strange. While you say the single and its music video were released on January 1, 2008, the magazines you use as sources (that for example review the song or talk about its release etc) are all not dated in January, but rather in February 2008. I tend to think that this is an error on iTunes Store's behalf. From my experience, I've seen that they often mistake release dates of items released a few years ago. For example, on Inna's "Un Momento", an archived 2011 version of the French iTunes Store indicates its release date as July 18, 2011, while the newest, still viewable version indicates January 1, 2011. Also, when browsing on Discogs — I know it's unreliable, but still — I even see 2007 as the release date for two "The Way That I Love You" promotional CDs [1][2]. Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:01, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• I will look into it further. Several of the sources may be from February 2008 as they focus on the music video rather than just the song. Thank you for the help with the copy edit.
  Aoba47 (talk) 17:21, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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In my attempt for a featured article nomination on Deep Space Homer, you gave a long list of issues with an oppose comment. I agreed with your statements and have been working very hard these last few days to improve the article to your liking. I requested a peer review two months ago but that does not seem like it is coming anytime soon (PR needs a new system!). Do you have a new opinion on the article? Is it ready for another run at FAC or does it need to go through the peer review?

Thank you, all help is appreciated AmericanAir88^(talk) 17:06, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• It looks much better. I would just make sure that the article is comprehensive as that was my main issue with it during the FAC (i.e. making sure that it covers all of the material out there about the episode). Good luck with it!
  Aoba47 (talk) 17:22, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you. I will do another sweep. Do you think I should cancel the PR and proceed with FAC? Honestly, it will probably be another few months before anyone touches the request. AmericanAir88^(talk) 18:37, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• That is up to you. I have honestly stopped using PR as I rarely get comments there.
  Aoba47 (talk) 19:02, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you for the insight. I will stop as it seems to be very slow. AmericanAir88^(talk) 20:14, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• I think that is an excellent idea.
  Aoba47 (talk) 21:31, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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• Nominated and tagged you to get other viewers aware of your concerns in the previous review. AmericanAir88^(talk) 14:40, 28 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for the mention, and good luck with the review.
  Aoba47 (talk) 14:43, 28 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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I recently nominated Vergil (Devil May Cry) to GA after two copyedits. The in-universe information is not that big as Kazuya's while I think the creation is better edited. If you have the time, I would appreciate it if you could review it. Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 23:57, 27 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for the message. The article looks really cool. I have a lot of respect and appreciation for your work on fictional character articles, particularly those in video games. I unfortunately do not have the time right now to do a thorough review of the article, but if it is still in the GAN catalog in the future, I will definitely consider it.
  Aoba47 (talk) 00:02, 28 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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  Aoba47 (talk) 05:45, 7 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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@Flowerpiep: also thank you Flowerpiep for the copyedit. Thanks for the review. I'll check the FAC.Tintor2 (talk) 00:19, 8 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you. And great work on the article, as always!
  Aoba47 (talk) 00:20, 8 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Hi -- I don't know if you've been following the conversations at

• Thank you for the message. Unfortunately, I am not the primary contributor to the article or the user that put it up for FAC. That person is @
  Aoba47 (talk) 18:55, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply
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  As it happens, MicroPowerpoint is the other editor I've asked about this, so Head Over Heels would be a poor choice. Yes, criticism can be painful; sometimes you just have to grow calluses -- so long as the articles are improved.

  The article I've asked MicroPowerpoint about is also a song article; I was hoping to get a different area of pop culture. If they decline the request, one of the three above would work; if not, is there a TV article with sources that you feel are strong enough for a FAC review? It's in the nature of things that this sort of workshop will probably be particularly thorough, because the reviewers know they're being watched. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 19:01, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  Thank you for the message. I really do find it helpful. There is not point in feeling regret/ashamed about the past; you can only learn from them and do better in the future. I can definitely think of a few TV articles that I am planning on submitting for an FAC review in the future. How about

  Aoba47 (talk) 19:35, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply

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  Well, just like at FAC, there's no such thing as declining a nomination -- let's go with Shannen Says. A silly topic is probably a good choice if we're trying to see what happens at the pop culture end of the spectrum. Thank you! No need to do anything until someone volunteers to be the coordinator -- I'll ping you when I start up the subpage. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 21:29, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  Cool beans! I am glad that I could help, and it will be interesting to see the response lol.

  Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply

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Swift Justice

Hello:

The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Swift Justice has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Best of luck with the GAN.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 13:57, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you as always!
  Aoba47 (talk) 16:35, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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A barnstar

		The Tireless Contributor Barnstar
		For your incredible work and comments on my FAC. Your dedication is very appreciated and impressive AmericanAir88(talk) 03:28, 2 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you. I am just glad that I could help out.
  Aoba47 (talk) 16:50, 2 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Your GA nomination of Inspired (song)

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Cartoon network freak -- Cartoon network freak (talk) 23:21, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply

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Your GA nomination of Inspired (song)

The article

good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Inspired (song) for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Cartoon network freak -- Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:21, 6 September 2018 (UTC)[reply

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Your GA nomination of Inspired (song)

The article Inspired (song) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Inspired (song) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Cartoon network freak -- Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:41, 6 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Opinion on text

Hey there man, I've read a bit on

WP:RECEPTION and attempted to follow what it said with a CR section on Hotel (album). May I have your opinion on the text, and whether it has improved from something I previously written on Not All the Beautiful Things? Thanks! aNode (discuss) 09:38, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply

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• It seems good overall, though I think it needs more structure. It is a little weird to have a very long paragraph and then have it followed by a one-sentence paragraph.
  Aoba47 (talk) 16:40, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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I still have a few more reviews to add to the second one, so that's why its still short ;) But thanks for your feedback! aNode (discuss) 14:00, 16 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Inspired (song)

Hello:

The copy edit you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article "Inspired (song)" has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

I read the GA reviewer's comments and I see you feel it is important that the term "with inspiration", which they questioned, be left in. I know that is one of the first things an FA reviewer would comment on. It is really a meaningless description especially since it is on a song sheet put together by an anonymous individual, so I also removed it. If you still feel strongly about it, removing the <!- -> code around the term in edit mode will restore it.

Best of luck as the article moves forward.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 12:14, 19 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for the edit, and I agree with you. I have removed it as it was questioned by the GAN reviewer as well. Have a great rest of your day!
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