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{{help me}} before the question. Again, welcome! Oreo Priest talk 21:47, 29 November 2013 (UTC)André Mathieu
I saw this edit: [1]. Does the Carnegie Hall playbill use that term? Oreo Priest talk 03:21, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
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Oreo Priest talk 11:59, 13 June 2014 (UTC)Good work! Very thorough. A few notes:
- Consider linking to many more terms that might be unfamiliar to the reader. I'm sure a link to glycosaminoglycans, for example, would be appreciated, as would many of the other terms in that sentence.
- References are formatted immediately after a period, with no space before and with a space after, like this.<ref>[placeholder]</ref> The formatting within the references is very well done.
- The article is an Eggshell and protein membrane separation and Eggshellat the very least.
- If you make these changes in the next few days, and suggest a snappy "hook", this article will very likely be featured on the 'Did you know...' section of the Wikipedia main page! For the hook, just copy the format of those already on the main page, making sure that it's a) interesting and b) cited. I'll take care of the process if you can take care of the above promptly. Alternatively, I could do everything if you really need.
If you have any questions at all, don't hesitate to ask me on my talk page. Again, great job! Oreo Priest talk 12:15, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
- Also: you had '...hydrolyzed (see [[hydrolysis]])'. Note that you can write '...[[hydrolysis|hydrolyzed]]' which displays as '...hydrolyzed'; this is called 'piping' a link, and it allows you to link to an article that is not exactly the same as the text of the link. See Wikipedia:Piped link. Oreo Priest talk 14:25, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
- I've nominated it for DYK. You can follow its progress at Template:Did_you_know_nominations/eggshell_membrane. Oreo Priest talk 15:21, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
DYK for Eggshell membrane
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Infant swimming
Hi. I found
Infant swim recovery; is there any text you'd like to incorporate into the new article? Please do so if so, and then redirect it to the new, broader article. Cheers, Oreo Priest talk 20:08, 18 August 2014 (UTC)
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DYK for Infant swimming
 | On 21 September 2014, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Infant swimming, which you recently created or substantially expanded. The fact was ... that babies will instinctively hold their breath underwater (pictured) until the age of six months? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Infant swimming. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, live views, daily totals), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page. |