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Hello, I'm Samf4u. An edit you recently made to Lobengula seemed to be a test and has been removed. If you want more practice editing, the sandbox is the best place to do so. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Samf4u (talk) 23:04, 9 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello. The edit was not a test. The “sentence” beginning ‘Although,…’ is clearly ungrammatical and does not make sense. ‘Although’ should introduce a subordinate clause with a comma at the end of the clause. As it stands, there are three main clauses, but the second and third are NOT coordinated. You require a coordinator, such as ‘and’ or ‘but’. Finally, it is not clear WHAT his subjects found out. The rest of the article is acceptable. Why is only this sentence so flawed. I repeat, my edit was not a ‘test’. Thank you. Richcomment (talk) 21:46, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
or by typing four tildes "~~~~"; this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you are already excited about Wikipedia, you might want to consider being "adopted" by a more experienced editor or joining a WikiProject to collaborate with others in creating and improving articles of your interest. Click here for a directory of all the WikiProjects. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field when making edits to pages.
Hello, I'm Samf4u. An edit you recently made to Lobengula seemed to be a test and has been removed. If you want more practice editing, the sandbox is the best place to do so. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Samf4u (talk) 23:04, 9 March 2024 (UTC)