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Last three sentences of the lead all begin with "The station". Maybe change it to some other phrase?
Done
"The station was also renovated in 1970." Renovated in which way?
Not really much to say: the tiles were changed and the platforms were extended. The first part was common for renovations of that time, but the second part is quite unique. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 8 doesn't say that the approval was from Appellate Division of the Supreme Court of New York, unless I missed something.
"490 feet (150 m) to 530 feet (160 m)" Ref 12 says 495.
Done
Ref 13 needs |subscription=yes.
Done
Ref 15 needs date format fixed.
Done
"in preparation of the construction of platform extensions" This should belong at the end of the sentence.
Done
"8-by-16-inch (200 by 410 mm)" Would centimeters be a better choice?
Done
Shouldn't the 1970 renovation belong in the same section as the other renovations?
It was the same as the 1968-1970 renovation which already is in the history section. I will fix that shortly. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I would put the reference for each service right next to the service mentioned (after the punctuation), instead of putting all of them at the end of the sentence.
@Nova Crystallis: I am available again so I can address any other outstanding issues. Thanks for taking this up.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:35, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Did you know nomination
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:11, 20 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
... that the 9th, 25th, 45th, 53rd, 59th, and Union Streets and Prospect Avenue stations were all opened in 1915 as part of a subway extension to Coney Island? Source: Cudahy, Brian J. (2009). How We Got to Coney Island: The Development of Mass Transportation in Brooklyn and Kings County. Fordham University Press. pp. 217–218.
ALT4: ... that the 9th, 25th, 59th, and Union Streets and Prospect Avenue stations were opened with a competition between two trains heading to Coney Island, while the 45th and 53rd Streets stations' openings were delayed by three months? Brooklyn Eagle; "Stations of Subway are Now Opened". Home Talk the Item. September 22, 1915. pp. 1, 14
Comment: Any wording suggestions are appreciated. The oldest were passed as GA 7 days and a few hours ago, but I was asleep at the time the last article was passed, and didn't get a chance to nominate them until the morning. epicgenius (talk)
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
QPQ: Done.
Overall: Review of Prospect avenue DannyS712 (talk) 19:57, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
General
@Epicgenius: for ALT1, I struggled to find the fact on the source linked - where on the page is it / what paragraph am I looking for? --DannyS712 (talk) 20:43, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Also, ALT0 isn't really interesting, and can I suggest "9th" instead of "Ninth" to be consistent? --DannyS712 (talk) 20:45, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
DannyS712, thanks for taking this up. ALT1 is actually split up into two different locations in all these articles. I will add these sources to the lead of all the articles. Yes, we can switch "9th" for "Ninth". I have suggested ALT2 too, same source as ALT0. epicgenius (talk) 20:49, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Epicgenius: I meant where in the source is the information / what paragraph in the source page am I looking for? --DannyS712 (talk) 20:52, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
DannyS712 For ALT1, for the first source, the relevant paragraph is on the right side of the page toward the top. The second source is offline. For ALT0/ALT2, the relevant page range is offline but you can check this source too. epicgenius (talk) 20:59, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
BTW, the Eagle source also mentions a competition between two trains using the Sea Beach and West End lines, stopping at these stations. Would that make for a good hook? It is not cited in these articles yet. epicgenius (talk) 21:01, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, found the part in the source for ALT1. But, it appears to only say the extensions were authorized / funded, not that they occured --DannyS712 (talk) 21:05, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@DannyS712: I might have picked the wrong source. Could you check out ALT3? epicgenius (talk) 21:10, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The stations aren't all mentioned in the source for alt3 --DannyS712 (talk) 21:15, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
All right, for ALT1, I have added this source to all the articles. For ALT0/ALT2, five of the seven stations are mentioned (all except 45th and 53rd) and there are other sources (like this and Cudahy) which show that all of the Fourth Avenue stations opened at the same time. I will add these soon. epicgenius (talk) 21:25, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@DannyS712: So apparently my ALT3 was wrong. I have added an ALT4. Can you take a look at this? Many thanks. I have also fixed the sourcing for ALT0 and ALT2 across all pages epicgenius (talk) 21:50, 27 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I have collapsed the individual reviews to make this more manageable, and removed the AGF for the source for the hook, since it looks like it'll be a different hook than the one those were for. I'll take a look at the alts proposed. Other than the hook being interesting, in the articles, and cited, the other requirements are met. --DannyS712 (talk) 06:10, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
ALT0: N not interesting
ALT1: Rejected Source does not confirm the hook - it says the extensions were authorized / funded, not that they occured
ALT2: N not interesting
ALT3: N Was withdrawn by nominator
ALT4: Interesting enough, AGF for offline sources. Will check that it is in all the articles and sourced, but barring further complications it should be okay
Unfortunately given the overlap between articles, some of these fall short of the minimum 1500 characters of original prose. Nikkimaria (talk) 12:50, 17 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Yoninah and Nikkimaria: Would it be all right to remove the 45th and 53rd Street links, given that they are almost identical up to the Exits subsection? These seem to be the odd ones out (having not opened with the rest of the stations). So basically this? epicgenius (talk) 17:03, 17 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
ALT5: ... that the 9th, 25th, 59th, and Union Streets and Prospect Avenue stations were opened with a competition between two trains heading to Coney Island?
What content are you counting towards which article? Nikkimaria (talk) 17:08, 17 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done
Removed
Review of 9th street DannyS712 (talk) 19:53, 27 April 2020 (UTC)
not interesting
Rejected Source does not confirm the hook - it says the extensions were authorized / funded, not that they occured
Unfortunately given the overlap between articles, some of these fall short of the minimum 1500 characters of original prose. Nikkimaria (talk) 12:50, 17 May 2020 (UTC)