Talk:Alfred Balfour

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In general this page is a solid biography of what I take is an obscure person with few sources to turn to for information. However, it could do with a quick copy edit, as there are several instances of sentences strung together with add-on clauses that make them hard to follow and other issues. Also, is there no image that could be added to the article, even of the House of Commons itself?

• I am failing this article as nothing has been done in the last seven days. A day or two ago I left a message on the nominator's talk page as well.
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