Talk:Gerald Francis Clifford

Gerald Francis Clifford has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: July 2, 2019. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Gerald Francis Clifford appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 August 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that Attorney General of Wisconsin, was a delegate to the Democratic National Convention, and lost a congressional election in 1934? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2019/August. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Gerald Francis Clifford.

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Let the review begin. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:07, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

• We was an active trial lawyer <<=== He
• I don't think Prohibition should be capitalized since it isn't referring to the era.
• well known ===>>> well-known
• He is a member of The Hungry Five ===>>> He is one of The Hungry Five (I don't think "member" is correct since it's not a "real" group.)

Early life

• although he grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan. ===>>> but grew up in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan.

Legal and political career

• Attorney General of Wisconsin <<<=== I don't think "attorney general" should be capitalized
• Same thing with capitalizing Prohibition.
• Is the "national Democratic party convention" the same as the "Democratic National Convention"?

Green Bay Packers

• His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became part of The Hungry Five ===>>> His contributions over the next 20 years were so significant that he became recognized as one of The Hungry Five
• Link receivership
• He then helped draft and signed the Articles of Incorporation ===>>> He then helped draft and sign the Articles of Incorporation

Personal life

• Good.

Overall

• All of the links work.
• Well-cited.
• No dab links.
• No plagiarism detected.

Looks good. Placing on hold. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:44, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for another review

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Passing, good work! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:37, 2 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]