Talk:Gira Sarabhai

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The result was: promoted by MeegsC (talk) 09:51, 26 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gira Sarabhai in 1951

• ... that Gira Sarabhai along with her brother Gautam Sarabhai, were crucial in the formation of National Institute of Design Ahmedabad? see ALT1 below

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sceliphron asiaticum

Moved to mainspace by Kill joyarchivist (talk). Nominated by KCVelaga (talk) at 13:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Policy compliance:

• Adequate sourcing: - "She lives in Ahmedabad, Gujarat" is unsourced

Seems like there is a reliable source, removed it. KCVelaga (talk) 14:07, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Neutral
  : - "one couldn't place a nail where it was not meant to be" is a strange phrase and currently presented in wiki-voice. Is that a quote from Shinde?

Rephrased the sentence, not quite sure if it adds any value. KCVelaga (talk) 14:07, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - The third paragraph of "National Institute of Design" is a copyvio, see Earwig. This paragraph will need to be rewritten significantly

Done, KCVelaga (talk) 14:07, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Other problems: - there are multiple "clarification needed" tags within the article that will need to be resolved before this can be approved

All resolved, KCVelaga (talk) 14:07, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hook eligibility:

• Cited: - Need an inline citation directly after the hook sentence within the article (first sentence of "National Institute of Design"

Done, KCVelaga (talk) 14:07, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

• Interesting:

Image eligibility:

• Freely licensed
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• Used in article:
• Clear at 100px:

Overall: @KCVelaga: see above, couple issues to resolve. I left a "?" on the image because it's kind of small at 100px, but I will approve it once the other issues are fixed and the promoter can decide whether to use it. I think the hook could be rewritten as "... that Gira Sarabhai (pictured) and her brother Gautam were crucial in the formation of the National Institute of Design in Ahmedabad?" DanCherek (talk) 03:40, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@DanCherek: Hi, thanks for the review. I am actually helping a new user to get this through, and the clarification needed tags were actually placed by me :) Since it is not me directly editing, it might take a little more time than usual. I am also quite busy now, so I will get back to you on this by the end of next week. KCVelaga (talk) 17:00, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Admirable work, thanks! Take your time, I'll be around. DanCherek (talk) 17:05, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@DanCherek: I have responded to your comments inline. Please check. I agree with your suggestion for the hook. Proposaing ALT1 below. Also, I will try to find a better image.

ALT1: ... that Gira Sarabhai (pictured) and her brother Gautam were crucial in the formation of the National Institute of Design in Ahmedabad?

KCVelaga (talk) 14:07, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me! Nice job to all involved. DanCherek (talk) 14:39, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]