Talk:JAL Express
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As with JALways, the link to the Japanese Wikipedia article is not needed in the lead.- Removed as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
In sentence "On July 1, 1998, JAL Express commenced operations from Osaka to Miyazaki and Kagoshima; with two Boeing 737-400s, non-Japanese cockpit crew, and short-term contracted cabin attendants.", remove semicolon after "Kagoshima".- Removed as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
"On the same day, the airline celebrated its tenth anniversary of establishment in April 2007": Remove "April 2007" as it is redundant.- Removed as suggested. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
File:JAL Mileage Bank.png and File:JAL Global Club.png do not have a fair use rationale for this article.- Fair use rationale added in images. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
See the GA review of JALways for concerns I have with the JAL Mileage Bank section.- Updated as per comments in JALways GA review. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
The alt text for the images needs some work, it should not simply be a repetition of the caption. SeeWP:ALT.- All alt text completely rewritten to comply with WP:ALT. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)]
- All alt text completely rewritten to comply with
I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 16:54, 21 September 2009 (UTC)
- All comments reviewed and updated in the article. Thank you for your review. Aviator006 (talk) 06:21, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
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Good Article reassessment request
This article appears to have had parts of another article pasted on it, evidenced by some section headers being duplicated.
I came across this when I tried to remove the IATA members category, but can't locate the code to do so.