Talk:Kupiansk civilian convoy shelling

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Pretty self-explanatory. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 06:05, 12 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@RadioactiveBoulevardier Rewrite done. Is this neutral enough? 123Writer ^talk 13:53, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

As far as neutrality, it looks more or less fine, although more English-language sources would be nice.

However, IMHO it needs more general CE for readability. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 22:11, 24 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]