Talk:Magmadiver

Magmadiver has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: September 30, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article.Tintor2 (talk) 15:20, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@TeenAngels1234: Since this is quite a small article I think every issue will be comment in one visit:

• Is there an image we can use for the infobox? Maybe Asuka's new suit which is mentioned in production?
• The lead mentions the airdate of the episode twice.
• There is mention of fanservice in the article but could that be elaborated? The word tends to be exploited so it can mean several stuff.
• In the plot section Nerv is not explained.
• Is the Boa beer mention necessary?

I would like to keep this, since it's a reference to a movie, like mentioned after.

Everything seems fine. Well done.Tintor2 (talk) 16:05, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: Thank you. Tried my best.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 12:26, 30 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Good work with the article.Tintor2 (talk) 18:49, 30 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]