Talk:Murder of Yusef Hawkins
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Revising opening paragraphs
. . . to conform more closely to the actual N.Y. Times news reports.
- cause of the confrontation
- no NYT mention of a 'street gang'
- not all the suspects were of Italian descent
- the many repetitions of 'Italian-American' make for POV
- the hyphenated-American background of the entire crowd involved is not known.
Yes, a terrible crime was committed that night, but I think this entire article could stand a POV review. --CliffC 04:58, 9 October 2006 (UTC)
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