Talk:Rolf Disch

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problematic tone: NPOV, laudatory language

In my opinion the language used through-out the article seems problematic, as it is not neutral and encyclopedic in its tone. Claims and hyperboles can be found in many places. I'd suggest a removal of all such wording. Furthermore the only external sources seem to be Disch's own website, which in this case seems to be in conflict with Wikipedia's policy on Self-Publishing (

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) Futhermore this style applies to other Disch-related articles, namely: Rolf Disch Solar Architecture, Heliotrope (building) --Kurt.Klienmann (talk) 13:48, 13 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]