Talk:Stéphane Sparagna

Stéphane Sparagna has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 18, 2016. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Stéphane Sparagna appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 23 August 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that in 2015 Toulon Tournament title in seven years? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2016/August. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Stéphane Sparagna.

This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects:

Biography: Sports and Games This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles This article is supported by the sports and games work group (assessed as Low-importance). Football: France Mid‑importance This article is within the scope of WikiProject Football, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Association football on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.FootballWikipedia:WikiProject FootballTemplate:WikiProject Footballfootball articles Mid This article has been rated as Mid-importance on the project's importance scale. This article is supported by the French football task force (assessed as Mid-importance). France Low‑importance This article is within the scope of WikiProject France, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of France on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.FranceWikipedia:WikiProject FranceTemplate:WikiProject FranceFrance articles Low This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

This review is

transcluded from Talk:Stéphane Sparagna/GA1

. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:42, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (

   lists

   ):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (

   reliable sources): c (OR

   ):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (

   focused

   ):

4. It follows the
   neutral point of view
   policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have

   suitable captions

   ):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• no dab links

Lead

• Delink France in the prose and infobox per
  WP:OVERLINK
• "on loan Marseille," - missing "to"

Marseille

• The wikilink on the word "friendly" should be to
  Exhibition match#Club football

2016-17 season: Loan to Auxerre

• "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," - I know what opener means but I think opening game would be better
• "playing the full 90 minutes in a 0-0 draw with Red Star." - needs the longer hyphen for consistency.

References

• no dead links

Overall prose is good. Awaiting response on all points. MWright96 (talk) 07:22, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Summary of Fixes

Thank you for the review MWright96. I have made the following changes as per your recommendations.

• France has been delinked in the lead and infobox
• "on loan Marseille" now reads "on loan from Marseille"
• the wikilink
  Exhibition match#Club football
  is now used for the word "friendly"
• "He made his debut for the club in their Ligue 2 opener on 30 July 2016," no reads "He made his debut for the club in their opening Ligue 2 game on..."
• A longer hyphen has been inserted in relation to the draw with Red Star
  • Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:14, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]