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A fact from The Boat Race 1986 appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 August 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
Did you know... that after the 1986 Boat Race, the Cambridge stroke said he was "just stirring the tea while the others did the work"?
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I'll review this one as well. It be good to clear the long list of boat race nominations.
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In the lead I think "Cambridge" should be "University of Cambridge" because if you didn't know the history you might not know it was between universities.
Have expanded the lead to hopefully cover this. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:04, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
In the lead it says it says "the first in 11 years" implying that Oxford had one the last 10 races but it says in the "background" section that Oxford had one 10 out of the last 11. If they both are correct than the "background" section should say "have one the last 10" not 10 out of 11. If they are not both correct you need to change it. Note: The quotes I have given above are not correct, just a summary of what is said.
Is that absolutely no pictures of this race? Pictures do help in these articles.
No, none. I've searched Commons and Flickr. We need people to upload their own photographs of the race as there'd be no justification for fair use here. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:04, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Refs 3,4,5,6,7,8,9,12,13,4 all have no link to anything more specific than the overall newspaper website. Does that mean you expect the reader to find the actual edition of the newspaper. A link to the actual edition would be good or even better if their is a computer version of the stories straight to that.
Yes, an online link would be great, but that's not going to happen. These sources are real and are analagous to having (subscription required) because you'd need something like a ProQuest or BNA account. Think of them as you would a reference in a book that you'd need to visit the library to read. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:04, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
More on the women's and reserve's race would help.
