Talk:The Leader (web series)

• Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• The infobox itself, on the other hand, appears to be missing several parameters, such as "language" and "voices".
  • Added "language" (although I didn't do it before since its quite redundant); and I don't have the information on the voice actors to include it (no sources provide as far as I can tell). Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• The word "intellectual" doesn't seem neutral. Try describing who Karl Marx was instead.
  • Changed for "philosopher". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Add a serial comma after "propagandism".
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

• Again, change "intellectual" per
  WP:NPOV
  .
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• The phrase "and leaving of" sounds off as it splits the sentence. Try rewording.
  • Paraphrased. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Remove the comma after "with his death".
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production

• "merchandisesuch" → "merchandise such"
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Add a serial comma after "stage plays".
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• I don't think "sinonizated" is an actual word.
  • True. Reworded as "went through a sinicization". Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Broadcast

• "social-media" → "social media"
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• "more-serious" → "more serious"
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Is there a word missing between "about political economy"?
  • No. Is it sounding strange to you? The article by Engels that Marx reads is about political economy. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

A little bit, yes, but no worries as it's still readable.

talk) 13:37, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply

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• "surplus value" → "surplus-value"
  • Not usually hyphenated. The article surplus value writes it this way. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Add a serial comma after "boils".
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Add a serial comma after "Austrian, Prussian".
  •  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• All summaries are under 200 words, so they pass
  MOS:TVPLOT
  .

Reception

• In the text and in the reference by her, change "Millingan" to "Milligan".
  • Wow, nice catch. Thanks.  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• Similar issue, but change "Fanzoni" to "Fantoni"
  • Thanks again.  Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

• Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).

Progress

here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( lists ): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism ): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have suitable captions ):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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