Talk:Todd Eldredge

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There's a lot of information here http://sportsillustrated.cnn.com/olympics/events/1998/nagano/athletes/8.htm but it needs to be rewritten and Wikified. It's on my to-do list but if someone gets to it before me, take a stab! :) Vesperholly 06:09, 17 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The third through fifth paragraphs of the Career section are not written in a neutral, encyclopedic manner. For example, sentences like "Eldredge skated a clean and more complete program, but suffered from the home country scoring of the event in Canada," or "Eldredge first singled, then later fell on his 2nd triple axel try, sealing his fate when combined with that he also didn't have a quadruple jump to begin with," or "He controversially finished 3rd at the Grand Prix final where most believed he deserved at least 2nd place above Elvis Stojko."