Template:Did you know nominations/Ink wash painting
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The result was: promoted by Kingsif (talk) 20:09, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
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Ink wash painting
Liang Kai (Chinese: 梁楷, 1140-1210), Drunken Celestial (Chinese: 潑墨仙人), ink on Xuan paper, 12th century, Southern Song (Chinese), National Palace Museum, Taipei
- ... that ink wash painting (example pictured) was created by the Chinese in the 8th century and then spread to East Asia? Source: The History and Spirit of Chinese Art (2-Volume Set) China: Five Thousand Years of History and Civilization
- ALT1:... that there are the rich layers of ink of the ink wash painting as charming as colors of the Oil painting? Source: "The History and Spirit of Chinese Art (1-Volume Set)" (1)
- ALT2:... that Chinese painter Zhang Zao used a Chinese brush or sometimes directly his hands to draw ink wash painting more than 1300 years ago in Tang dynasty in China? Source: "China: Five Thousand Years of History and Civilization" (2)
Improved to Good Article status by Jujiang (talk). Self-nominated at at 04:22, 29 July 2021 (UTC).
- (Please note this is not a review) Jujiang, I don't think you're supposed to put Written by multiple authors, but rather the actual authors as that might mess things up for the bot. You should probably change it to the actual users who got to to GA-status and adjust the {{DYKmake}} template as well. Thanks. Pamzeis (talk) 08:31, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
GA expansion approved for DYK but the hooks needs some work. The main claims this appeared in the 7th century but this is not confirmed by the body, all I see is that "Ink wash painting appeared during the Tang dynasty (618–907)" - that's a four-century range. One of the creators is Wang Wei (Tang dynasty) who lived in the 8th, not 7th century. ALT1 should be discarded as well as irredimable (charming is subjective and the term is not even used in the article). ALT2 is ok but full of rather excessive detail; I'd suggest correcting the data in main hook to the 8th century (and also please add the 8th century data to the lead); then this will be GTG. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:43, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Piotrus, Thanks for your comments.
Done. --Jujiang (talk) 03:52, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
Main hook approved (not the alts). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:57, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Piotrus, Thanks for your comments.
