Template:Did you know nominations/Sora ga Suki!
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 03:27, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
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Sora ga Suki!
- ... that Sora ga Suki! draws from musical theater, with characters expressing their feelings and emotions through dance and song lyrics, despite being a print manga series? Source: Takemiya, Keiko (2019), The Boy's Name Is Gilbert
- ALT1: ... that manga series Sora ga Suki! ended serialization because reader interest was deemed insufficient, but relaunched after its publisher received an influx of supportive fan letters? Source: Takemiya, Keiko (2019), The Boy's Name Is Gilbert
- Reviewed: Eighth Avenue South Reservoir
Created by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:18, 15 January 2023 (UTC).
- Reviewing — DaxServer (t · m · c) 10:21, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
- Good work Morgan and thanks for the translation! Some improvements:
- "The series was to be broadly focused ..." - sounds like she was given a mandate, by herself or by the publisher?
- Clarified.
- "Sora ga Suki! draws inspiration in plot ... she drew inspiration through ..." - 'drawing inspiration' phrase in consecutive sentences, would you be able to paraphrase one of them? If not, that's fine with me
- Revised.
- A summary of Shōnen-ai section in the lead would be beneficial, maybe about the atypical of the era and the taboo
- I don't think that's strictly necessary, since Sora ga Suki isn't actually a shonen-ai series. I've noted the inclusion of bishōnen and the notability of the mostly male cast in the lede, which hopefully accomplishes some of what you're looking for.
- "The series was to be broadly focused ..." - sounds like she was given a mandate, by herself or by the publisher?
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: ) 14:31, 17 January 2023 (UTC)