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I do not do collaborations except by arrangement with individuals. As I am not a member of any wikiproject, I would rather their spam did not show up here. Thank you.--Wehwalt (talk) 16:19, 24 April 2011 (UTC)

Dudley E. Faver

Any chance you could help me write a lead/possible DYK hook/copyedit Dudley E. Faver, which I just created? Thanks, Connormah (talk) 18:07, 23 April 2011 (UTC)

I very rarely touch military articles.--Wehwalt (talk) 16:17, 24 April 2011 (UTC)

Checking In

Don't worry about the message, the issue has since been resolved ... until the next time that is. I saw the article you posted and it was quite interesting. I did have Snell written up but then I was told to slash the paragraphs and unfortunately for Snell while he deserves a lot of credit it was ultimately Namath's personality and physical abilities that caught the Nation's attention. At least I got 1 out of 2. Anyhow, I have currently gotten myself embroiled into a host of new projects namely the reorganization of the New York Knicks article and might I add what a pain!

I do want to finish up the Jets article so I can nominate for FAC it but I need to add more material to the history section. If you ever have some free time, could you possibly help out there? -- The Writer 2.0 Talk 19:00, 25 April 2011 (UTC)

What needs doing? I am sorry I have been so busy.--Wehwalt (talk) 19:02, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
It needs more information. Instead of the "summary style" that it currently is, as AaronY, amongst others, stated, this section should be the focal point of the article. I don't need another 20 page essay like we did with the History article but, at the end of the day, it needs to drive the article. Again, although I would like to wrap this up, it isn't urgent. I figure if you and I could chip away at it bit by bit like we did early on with HofNYJ, we'll be done before we know it. -- The Writer 2.0 Talk 23:19, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
OK, I will look at it. I am gone until next Monday so don't expect too much too soon.--Wehwalt (talk) 23:23, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
Sounds good. -- The Writer 2.0 Talk 23:24, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
It's going to need a PR before FA, in my view. With an untested article style, it's got to win some support in review before chancing a FAC.--Wehwalt (talk) 23:45, 25 April 2011 (UTC)

Lincoln FAN - some analysis

You initially indicated in your comments the need for more analysis. Though this is NOT an area of strength for me, I thought I at least owed you an attempt, however lame. Therefore, i have drafted a piece which was drawn from Goodwin's popular "Team of Rivals" book, and would be appropriately sourced as such:

I would insert a new section, call it recent analysis, and would include the following:
Biographer
Doris Goodwin
has in recent years provided a best selling analysis of Lincoln, gleaned from his relationships and interactions with those immediately surrounding him. In regard to his initial political success in 1860, departing from the more traditional conclusion that his election was a matter of chance, Goodwin maintains his victory was illustrative of Lincoln's shrewdness, when considered in a comparison of Lincoln's background as a pioneer backwoods lawyer, with the rival candidates, who were products of the social and political establishment of the time. Lincoln compensated for this deficiency by way of greater self-reliance and fierce ambition, combined with extraordinary political acumen.
Goodwin maintains Lincoln revealed a most exceptional style of leadership when, after his election, he then incorporated his opponents into his administration. This, despite the distinct possibility that these more well known, better educated and more experienced personalities could likely eclipse the still more obscure president. The degree of success in the cabinet establishes Lincoln's ability to overcome strong egos attended by resentment and jealousy, which could otherwise have led to disaster.
Goodwin also argues that Lincoln, who grieved the losses of his children, rather than being handicapped in any way by his melancholy nature, was in fact strengthened by it, as many artists are, displaying a greater degree of creativity and sensitivity. These attributes facilitated his achievements in the midst of leading a nation at war with itself. Instead of being immobilized by depression, Lincoln was spurred to action. His ability to thus cope with his own moods enabled him to assist his cabinet and others in their time of internal conflict and stress. This ability also prevented him from being provoked or otherwise handicapped by grievances against him, including real threats of assassination.
[Goodwin, Team of Rivals pp. xvi-xix. - reference is in the article]
Let me know what you think. Cheers.
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) 14:01, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Goodwin's book is certainly excellent, I've read it. With the sheer volume of LIncoln scholarship out there, I do not see how you can justify more than a paragraph though.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:09, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Also, have you read Liberty Bell? There's a paragraph about Lincoln in there. I can vouch for reliability, I wrote the damn thing.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:37, 27 April 2011 (UTC).
Thanks. I'll also see what a couple others think before using the Goodwin excerpt. You sure rang the bell -the colonial period is my favorite and I enjoyed it.
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) 17:43, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
It wasn't me, it was the colorfulness of the source material shining through my muddles. Stay in touch on Lincoln.--Wehwalt (talk) 17:46, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

The King and I

I have withdrawn the GAR so you can go ahead and renominate if you are ready. Please check it out against the

GA criteria. It looks in good shape to me, but I don't think the lead fully summarises the article, and as I said the plot section may need a trim. Jezhotwells (talk
) 17:05, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

OK, I'll look at those before renomming. Thanks for your help.--Wehwalt (talk) 17:09, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

Khrushchev

Hi, thanks for the note. I think it's overstating it to say that the ouster "according to Taubman, was due to Khrushchev's instigation"; what Taubman says is that K. "helped arrange" it, and the whole passage is full of "must have" and "may have," which makes me think that Taubman is imposing his own interpretation. It's certainly plausible and even likely that K. was involved, but (as you're obviously aware) it's hard to pin anything down during that period. Was Kirov killed at Stalin's orders? Conquest is sure of it; others take what in my opinion is a more honest approach and say Kirov's death was certainly convenient for Stalin and he would have had no hesitation about killing a friend if he thought it would help him, but there is no direct evidence and we will probably never know for sure. In any event, the new wording is an improvement on the original, and I have no objection to it. The Industrial Academy article won't be fancy, but hopefully it will fill the gap! Languagehat (talk) 18:11, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

Feel free to alter as you see fit, always good to have an informed set of eyes on the article.--Wehwalt (talk) 18:12, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

Browser crashed

It was probably a browser crash edit conflict.--

WP:FOUR
) 19:35, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

Very well, I will assume good faith.--Wehwalt (talk) 19:37, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

What the hell happened with your last edit to the Peace dollar article?-RHM22 (talk) 21:35, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

I'm now wondering whether or not your account has been compromised. Please leave a note on my talk page when you get the chance.-RHM22 (talk) 21:39, 26 April 2011 (UTC)
Check my edits this morning. If any vandal could imitate me to that extent, we need to hire him.--Wehwalt (talk) 06:35, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, I can confirm that Wehwalt is very much in control of his account. :) - NeutralhomerTalk • 07:31, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Well, if RHM22 is going to block me when he wakes up, I might as well get some use out of the time. Is there any article you would particularly like me to vandalize and then fully protect, NH?--Wehwalt (talk) 07:56, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
hahahahahahaha!!! :) Nah, not one I can think off the top of my head. :) So, what is it that you have done to be potentially blocked? - NeutralhomerTalk • 08:17, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Somehow unrelated text and a signature showed up in an edit I made to Peace dollar and as it was late here I did not read over the section after making the edit but went to bed instead. It was a complicated addition of five different sources. I can't think where it came from, I don't remember writing that in any context., though I made the edit. Excuse me, there's a main page needs deleting. I think I've got a hall pass.--Wehwalt (talk) 08:21, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
I took a look at the edit and it looks like possibly you hit CTRL+V a couple times or like you said it was an EC gone awry. Also, since you are editing via phone sometimes, it might have been a "crossed connection". Those are my guesses. I highly doubt it was any form of vandalism and since you immediately reverted (even though it reverted RHM22 for a second), I am calling it "no harm, no foul" and suggest RHM22 look closely at the edit and edits made afterwards and before. It is clear you are in control of your account and it was a technical goof that has happened to everyone. - NeutralhomerTalk • 08:53, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
RHM22 will realize that as soon as he looks in, I'm not worried, I'm just joking around. I did use CTRL + V to set up the cite templates as they are all very similar and just modified each one to fit the denomination. Obvously something else crept in. Just glad it wasn't something personal or embarrassing, or both!--Wehwalt (talk) 09:15, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Actually, I think RHM22 did the initial revert, and when I woke up I reverted him so as to correct the mistake. It's all fine now.--Wehwalt (talk) 09:17, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, I have done the same thing. People lookin' at ya like "what is he doing?" and you think everything is fine. Though nothing is as bad as when the Wiki IRC channels required a password to be entered when you first signed in (after some change) and I did.....and it went live over the IRC channel. That was a year and a half ago, and I changed my password that hour, but wow was my face red on that one. :) - NeutralhomerTalk • 12:25, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

I'm not worried. We are human and imperfect.--Wehwalt (talk) 12:30, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
I wouldn't be. :) You are human, yes; imperfect, maybe...at least not when it comes to making FAs. :) - NeutralhomerTalk • 14:03, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Flattery, flattery.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:10, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Depending on who you ask, it either gets you nowhere or everywhere. :) - NeutralhomerTalk • 15:17, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
I know people who it impresses the hell out of, and people who could care less.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:18, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
BTW, I'm watching the Buckles FAC and it is pointless for me to weigh in with two opposes. You've got to shake someone loose.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:33, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
Nikkimaria said she would be back in a couple days due to IRL issues, as for Malleus, I don't see that one changing as he has apparently recused himself...or something. - NeutralhomerTalk • 18:17, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
I wasn't going to block you! I just wanted to make sure that someone else didn't make that odd edit. I've never edited from a phone, so I don't know how they work, but that's probably what caused the edit.-RHM22 (talk) 21:09, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

Baseball

Thanks for helping out with the tiebreak review, which I have now posted to the PR page. I rather struggled with that one. Brianboulton (talk) 16:25, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

That's why I jumped in, really. But it isn't what it could be. They really need to rethink how they've written it. It reads like sports journalism.--Wehwalt (talk) 16:30, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
  • I would appreciate any notes you could offer, as mentioned at the PR. I realize the prose is imperfect, but at the end of the day an article on a sports topic is, unsurprisingly, going to read similarly (in some ways) to other articles on sports topics. Staxringold talkcontribs 17:04, 27 April 2011 (UTC)
I have limited time and cannot offer you a commitment, but I may look in at some stage. Can I recommend my colleague on the FA History of the New York Jets (which gave Brian fits, too, as an article say on rugby union or polo would me), User:The Writer 2.0? I don't know if he would do it but the worst he can say is no.--Wehwalt (talk) 17:08, 27 April 2011 (UTC)

RFAR Racepacket

An Arbitration case in which you commented has been opened, and is located here. Please add any evidence you may wish the Arbitrators to consider to the evidence sub-page, Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Case/Racepacket/Evidence. Please submit your evidence within one week, if possible. You may also contribute to the case on the workshop sub-page, Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Case/Racepacket/Workshop.

On behalf of the Arbitration Committee, Alexandr Dmitri (talk) 07:08, 30 April 2011 (UTC)

Main page appearance (2)

Hello! This is a note to let the main editors of this article know that it will be appearing as the main page featured article on April 21, 2011. You can view the TFA blurb at Wikipedia:Today's featured article/April 21, 2011. If the previous blurb needs tweaking, you might change it—following the instructions of the suggested formatting. If this article needs any attention or maintenance, it would be preferable if that could be done before its appearance on the Main Page so Wikipedia doesn't look bad. :D Thanks! Tbhotch* ۩ ۞ 06:25, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

Two almost in a row! Good work on all the main page articles.-RHM22 (talk) 19:12, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
Congrats!--NortyNort (Holla) 01:08, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
  • Congratulations from me as well, Wehwalt--excellent work. Thanks for making us look good. Drmies (talk) 00:59, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Thank you both.--Wehwalt (talk) 15:48, 1 May 2011 (UTC)

DYK for Mercury dime