User contributions for 130.179.29.59

29 September 2011

• 15:0715:07, 29 September 2011 diff hist +11‎ Scholar-official ‎ →‎Literati: this entire section seems questionable - poorly written, off-topic, duplicates rest of article - but at least I can fix the where/were confusion

27 September 2011

• 17:0917:09, 27 September 2011 diff hist −1‎ Kernel panic ‎ →‎Causes: comma here renders sentence nonsensical
• 15:5415:54, 27 September 2011 diff hist 0‎ Simon Necronomicon ‎ →‎Textual Authenticity: no need to cap this; questionable whether lucid dreaming is much like mediumship anyway, but I'll leave that alone
• 15:4015:40, 27 September 2011 diff hist 0‎ Ai Otsuka ‎ →‎Personal life: even in Japan it would be unusual to get married via a Web site announcement
• 15:2915:29, 27 September 2011 diff hist −4‎ Ai Otsuka ‎ →‎2009: Love Letter and Love is Best: English. Yes, "Asahi Slat" is a strange-sounding name to English speakers, but that is the name, and adding capitalized "The" just makes it more Engrish-y.

31 August 2011

• 20:3420:34, 31 August 2011 diff hist +478‎ Talk:T-carrier ‎ →‎Reason for rate choice: new section

26 August 2011

• 15:5215:52, 26 August 2011 diff hist −11‎ Disodium inosinate ‎ →‎See also: no reason given here or in the linked article for this to be relevant - we might as well add "halal" to all food-related articles

23 August 2011

• 20:2520:25, 23 August 2011 diff hist −2‎ Black liquor ‎ →‎Composition

19 August 2011

• 16:3716:37, 19 August 2011 diff hist 0‎ Greenham Common Women's Peace Camp ‎No edit summary
• 15:4715:47, 19 August 2011 diff hist −195‎ International Date Line ‎ →‎Christianity: 7th Day Adventists observe Saturday as the Sabbath in many other places where it's very inconvenient to do so, so claiming they make an exception just for convenience in Tonga is not plausible and inappropriate without citation

17 August 2011

• 14:1914:19, 17 August 2011 diff hist 0‎ Shark cage diving ‎No edit summary

4 August 2011

• 19:4019:40, 4 August 2011 diff hist −11‎ Gaelic type ‎ →‎Characteristics: "mistakenly" and "ostensibly" both seem POV, but by way of compromise let's remove one of them.

2 August 2011

• 17:2317:23, 2 August 2011 diff hist 0‎ Apache Arrowhead ‎ →‎International: although "peculiar" may be literally correct, it has an unfortunate connotation
• 17:0817:08, 2 August 2011 diff hist +14‎ Quad flat package ‎ grammar

28 July 2011

• 16:1816:18, 28 July 2011 diff hist −4‎ Izanami ‎ →‎Death of the Izanami-no-Mikoto: it's a personal name, no "the" appropriate
• 15:4915:49, 28 July 2011 diff hist +245‎ Talk:Aries (astrology) ‎ →‎Compatibilities
• 15:4615:46, 28 July 2011 diff hist +706‎ Talk:Aries (astrology) ‎ →‎Compatibilities
• 15:2715:27, 28 July 2011 diff hist −72‎ Melanosis coli ‎ the name does *not* imply it is from melanin; the root "melan" just means "brown," not "from melanin."

27 July 2011

• 17:4217:42, 27 July 2011 diff hist −27‎ Coat of arms of Bosnia and Herzegovina ‎ →‎Socialist era: just note it

22 July 2011

• 18:5618:56, 22 July 2011 diff hist +4‎ Acanthosicyos horridus ‎No edit summary

15 July 2011

• 18:0018:00, 15 July 2011 diff hist −6‎ Evaporite ‎ →‎Major groups of evaporite minerals: from the chemical formula, it is a fact that it's both a carbonate and a sulfate, not just "considered"

12 July 2011

• 18:1018:10, 12 July 2011 diff hist +1‎ Kazoo ‎ grammar→‎Professional usage
• 18:0518:05, 12 July 2011 diff hist −26‎ Kazoo ‎ →‎Playing: peacock words - whether the sound of a kazoo is "effective" or "authoritative" is unverifiable even in principle, but loudness can be measured

8 July 2011

• 15:5815:58, 8 July 2011 diff hist −3‎ Red dot sight ‎ →‎Description: itself is one word

5 July 2011

• 21:1121:11, 5 July 2011 diff hist −4‎ Cherry bomb ‎ →‎Composition: past tense inappropriate - these still exist
• 21:0521:05, 5 July 2011 diff hist −1‎ Salute (pyrotechnics) ‎ →‎M-100
• 19:3819:38, 5 July 2011 diff hist −2‎ Chagas disease ‎ →‎Transmission

29 June 2011

• 20:1020:10, 29 June 2011 diff hist −132‎ Ammonium bicarbonate ‎ Undid revision 436758471 by Hedgehoglovee (talk)

28 June 2011

• 20:3820:38, 28 June 2011 diff hist −20‎ Intel 8086 ‎ →‎The first x86 design: more unnecessary italics
• 20:3620:36, 28 June 2011 diff hist −4‎ Intel 8086 ‎ →‎The first x86 design: no need to italicise name

22 June 2011

• 15:5915:59, 22 June 2011 diff hist −2‎ Fill device ‎ english

17 June 2011

• 16:5816:58, 17 June 2011 diff hist +7‎ Wendell Willkie ‎ →‎Alleged relations with Soong May-ling: "principles" is wrong; "principals" would be correct but obscure; naming them is preferable

13 June 2011

• 20:5320:53, 13 June 2011 diff hist +2‎ SARS conspiracy theory ‎ "cannot be natural" is also a questioned claim, not just "is a combination"; and the term would be "combination," not "compound" which has a specific inapplicable meaning

9 June 2011

• 18:1418:14, 9 June 2011 diff hist −21‎ Boliviana negra ‎ even if they call it a "War on Drugs" it's not meaningfully the same kind of thing as an actual war

2 June 2011

• 13:3913:39, 2 June 2011 diff hist 0‎ Aaron Burr ‎ →‎Character: a "mantle" is an article of clothing; the thing over a fireplace is a "mantel."

1 June 2011

• 20:2620:26, 1 June 2011 diff hist −159‎ Obfuscation (software) ‎ on the contrary, it seems to be the same in essence; but both statements are unverifiable and unnecessary
• 19:2419:24, 1 June 2011 diff hist −31‎ Mojikyō ‎ →‎Composition: "in lieu of" means as a replacement for; with "not" the sentence is nonsense, and it can be further improved than just deleting "not"
• 16:1716:17, 1 June 2011 diff hist +48‎ List of unsolved problems in computer science ‎ English

31 May 2011

• 21:2421:24, 31 May 2011 diff hist 0‎ MCI Mail ‎ →‎Service Offering: e.g. is "for example", i.e. would be "that is"

13 May 2011

• 15:2315:23, 13 May 2011 diff hist −157‎ Illegal number ‎ →‎Background: uncited, ungrammatical, not clear what it has to do with the paragraph

6 May 2011

• 18:2218:22, 6 May 2011 diff hist −3‎ Strip search phone call scam ‎ →‎Aftermath: "rape" has a specific definition not met by these horrifying events

29 April 2011

• 14:4014:40, 29 April 2011 diff hist −6‎ BibTeX ‎ →‎Style files: say "most" or "often", not both

26 April 2011

• 14:5814:58, 26 April 2011 diff hist −11‎ Tartan ‎ →‎The 'right' or 'entitlement' to tartan: original wording is nonsense

4 April 2011

• 18:0418:04, 4 April 2011 diff hist +259‎ Talk:Agarwood ‎ →‎Lead image: new section
• 17:5217:52, 4 April 2011 diff hist +7‎ OCR-A ‎ →‎Remaining Characters: not clear which font(s) use this nonstandard coding - they clearly don't ALL do so
• 17:4917:49, 4 April 2011 diff hist −2‎ OCR-B ‎ →‎External links: update this link - the old one redirects to a Japanese page
• 17:4617:46, 4 April 2011 diff hist +160‎ OCR-A ‎ →‎Implementations: correct and update description (the formerly linked page now redirects to one in Japanese)

17 March 2011

• 20:4720:47, 17 March 2011 diff hist +2‎ Tartan ‎ →‎Construction: "exponential growth" has a specific meaning and this is not exponential growth. as the example numbers indicate, with k base colours there are k choose 2 mixtures and (k choose 2)+k total colours, which is quadratic

10 March 2011

• 22:2122:21, 10 March 2011 diff hist −198‎ Ambergris ‎ →‎References: sentence doesn't belong in section, arguably not in article, and makes no sense - if it's on the list, it is "considered" endangered by the persons making the list

8 March 2011

• 15:3415:34, 8 March 2011 diff hist −1‎ Zebroid ‎ "sire" is cognate to "dam"; "stallion" would be cognate to "mare"