Talk:Chris Hill (basketball)

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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 21:24, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this review; it will be used in the

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the

   list incorporation

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2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with

   the layout style guideline

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   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it
   neutral
   ?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing

   edit war

   or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are

   copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content

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   B. Images are

   suitable captions

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7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

• The article has not been adequately updated.
  • The infobox states that he played for Orléans Loiret Basket between 2012 and 2014, but this is not apparent from the prose.
    • Now cited.-
      WP:WAWARD) 18:43, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
      ]
  • "the last three seasons" in the "Professional career" section presumably refers to 2009–2012?
    • I got some citation help in this section.-
      WP:WAWARD) 18:42, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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  • Has there been any information about his subsequent life or career?
    • Yes.-
      WP:WAWARD) 18:42, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• There is an uncited statement in the "College career" section.
  • I'll be researching this within a week.-
    WP:WAWARD) 20:08, 22 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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    • resolved.-
      WP:WAWARD) 12:45, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Five randomly chosen citations from this version of the article.

• 1 good
• 5 good
• 6 good
• 9 good
• 15 can you point me to where "but his total of 306 would have ranked sixth entering the season, but was surpassed by both Jon Diebler (370) and Talor Battle (317). His ESPN profile shows a total of 305 career three point shots made." is verified (through an image or directions).
• I have added an External link for the 306 total. The ESPN page has been truncated to exclude the stat page. The overview does not show this. Will revise.-
  WP:WAWARD) 11:42, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• After the 2022 season this no longer was relevant.
  WP:WAWARD) 11:53, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Largely good; putting the review on hold while the above is sorted out. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:34, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Are there any more available encyclopedic information on the following areas:

• His college career during 2004 and 2005

• During the 2003-04 junior year we already have that he led the Big Ten in 3 point shots made and was a repeat
  WP:WAWARD) 06:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• Added info for his two 2nd team All-Big Ten seasons.-
  WP:WAWARD) 14:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• Rearranged his college section chronologically so that his accomplishment can be better understood.-
  WP:WAWARD) 14:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• Notably he was not even honorable mention All-Big Ten as a senior.-
  WP:WAWARD) 14:22, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• Oddly he was Academic A-A of the year as a senior even though his cumulative GPA fell from 3.84 to 3.75 and he was not even HM All-B1G because his scoring average fell from 13.8 to 8.8 and his minutes fell from 32.4 to 24.1 and his 3FG% fell from 45.4% 36.5%.-
  WP:WAWARD) 14:22, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• I contemplated adding 3x Academic All-Big Ten, but felt it was dwarfed by Academic All-America recognition.-
  WP:WAWARD) 14:19, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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• How he performed as a professional athlete
  • I have added an external link with his international stats. It currently seems to have about half of his pro teams.-
    WP:WAWARD) 14:12, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
    ]
  • Also added a source for championships.-
    WP:WAWARD) 03:33, 31 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
    ]
• Why he did not make it in the US

~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:03, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Keep in mind that he was not team MVP as a junior or a senior and was not All-B1G as a senior (when his stats fell off). It is fairly common for a person who is not All-B1G (top 15 plus honorable mentions) as a senior (especially when the Big Ten was only 11 teams — vs. the current 14 team and next year 18 team format) to be choosing between the DLeague(now G League) and Europe (where the pay is better).-

WP:WAWARD) 14:30, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply

]

The real question is why did he lose his shooting touch as a senior.-

WP:WAWARD) 14:40, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply

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Further regarding him making it in the US. Some guys do the NBA summer league and try to get training camp invites and/or D-League/G-League contracts. Those guys may end up signing with international teams in October-November or even December. However, he signed with France in late July according to a July 23, 2005

WP:WAWARD) 18:05, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply

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• It is a good thing you asked for the spot checks. I broke my glasses last week and won't even be able to get in for a new prescription until April 30 (since my last prescription from Sept 2022 is over a year old, I can't get replacements under my insurance without a new prescription). I am currently wearing glasses from a prescription from either 2016 or 2018. It seems that I misread a 2005 as a 2006 and had completely messed up his chronology. Also missed the fine print that the Big Ten Media guide was only including first team All-Big Ten (maybe did not misread that due to my glasses since I just searched the document for the 12 places he is named).-
  WP:WAWARD) 14:07, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply
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I think this article has been improved sufficiently. Passing ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:10, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]