Talk:Real Groove

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Requested move 29 March 2022

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. (non-admin closure) NW1223 <Howl at meMy hunts> 18:33, 5 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Pageviews, the magazine has been disestablished, and the song was named one of the best songs of 2021 by Billboard. The song is the clear primary topic. Tree Critter (talk) 15:07, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support That’s a pretty clear case. Schwede66 08:37, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Per the comments and evidence presented above. — Tom(T2ME) 08:43, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support even though the song is more recent it has far more views. Crouch, Swale (talk) 17:33, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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This looks like a decent article, which I will start on today! --K. Peake 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

  • Infobox looks good!
  • Add a comma after fifteenth studio album
  • "Alida Garpestad Peck with a" → "Alida Garpestad Peck, with a"
  • "and featured vocoders," → "and features vocoders," with the wikilink
  • "attempting to win and ex" → "attempting to win an ex"
  • Pipe single to Single (music)
  • "A remix of it with English singer" → "A remix with English singer" and move the single info to this sentence instead, adding after the release date, "serving as the album's third single."
  • "with added instrumentation and" → "with additional instrumentation and" to be less repetitive
  • Add a comma after second studio album
  • "Some critics also appreciated" → "Some also appreciated" per the previous sentence beginning with a mention of critics
  • "Minogue performed the song" → "In late 2020, Minogue performed the song"
  • Italicise Infinite Disco

 Done

Background and composition

 Done

Release and promotion

  • Change the opening sentence to mentioning that it was included as the third track and adding the release date/labels after the album
  • "the day earlier." → "the previous day."
  • Italicise Infinite Disco
  • Where is the LED flooring sourced?
  • Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
  • Remove social media platform introduction since everyone has heard of Instagram that is online
  • "Instagram where fans could dance for an hour to the song" → "Instagram, where fans could dance for an hour to it"

 Done

 Done

Critical reception

  • You should probably leave this actually; doing otherwise would be going against
    MOS:LINKSTYLE and the film is also unspecified. --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply
    ]
  • "Mike Wass of
    Idolator
    called the song" → "Wass called the song" per him already having been mentioned
  • "strut" while Mark Sutherland" → "strut", while Mark Sutherland"
  • "by in Ahad Sanwari's review for" → "by Ahad Sanwari for"
  • "said it is" → "said the remix is"
  • "Lipa's vocals saying she" → "Lipa's vocals, saying she"
  • "best dance songs of 2021 with" → "best dance songs of 2021, with"

 Done

Commercial performance

  • Pipe UK Singles Sales Chart to List of UK Singles Sales Chart number ones
  • "as an album chart." → "as an album track."
  • "that is an increase by" → "that marked an increase of"
  • "the following week becoming" → "the following week, becoming"
  • "on the chart." → "on the Hot Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
  • "16 in Hungary and 8" → "number 16 in Hungary and number 8"
  • New Zealand Hot Singles chart →
    New Zealand Hot Singles Chart
    with the wikilink

 Done

Track listings

  • Good

Personnel

  • Good

Charts

  • Good

Release history

  • Good

Footnotes

  • Good

References

  • Copyvio score looks great at 15.3%!!!
  • Remove or replace ref 14 per
    WP:RSP
  • Add url-access subscription to ref 34

 Done

External links

  • Good

Final comments and verdict

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this smooth review! --K. Peake 08:30, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    • Kyle Peake thanks for the review. All of the issues have been addressed. LOVI33 19:15, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • LOVI33  Pass once again to no surprise; I am consistently impressed with your hard work on these detailed articles! --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]