Talk:Stefan Bonneau

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A fact from Stefan Bonneau appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 29 November 2015 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that basketball player Icelandic Premier League? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2015/November. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Stefan Bonneau.

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 21:18, 7 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll finish this review soon JAGUAR  21:18, 7 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

• "Bonneau came off the bench" - what does this mean? He started playing in the active team?

It means that he wasn't a starter in the team and he was getting his playing time as a substitute.

• "As a junior he broke his wrist in a training" - in training

 Done

• "to help his team get past Stjarnan 92–86" - 'get past' is a tad informal

Get past is changed to win.

• "On April 17, he scored 52 points" - what year?

Changed to On 17 April 2015 he scored 52 points

References

• Ref 6 and ref 7 are dead
• Ref 17 and ref 19 are also dead
• On top of that, the toolserver is picking up a lot of dead links. A lot of these need to be archived using the Wayback Machine or removed in order for this to pass

All dead links are archived.

On hold

This is a decent and solid article with few prose problems. However, there are numerous dead links which stops this from meeting the GA criteria in the current state. Once all of them are dealt with/archived, then this should be good to go. Nice work on this article! JAGUAR  18:38, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaguar:: The issues stated above are fixed. Hansi667 (Neighbor Of The Beast) ^{a penny for your thoughts?} 20:46, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for addressing all of the issues! It seems that this meets the GA criteria now, so I'll be promoting this. Well done. JAGUAR  21:43, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]