Talk:Women in classical Athens

I agree that the article is very old-fashioned (the works cited indicate that); recent research has radically changed the standard views in this area, as books and articles published within the last few years indicate. Perhaps until someone could produce a properly balanced article, this should be cut down significantly, and turned into a stub ready for expansion. --46.208.122.103 (talk) 17:05, 28 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I've done quite a lot of work with this article over the past month, and I think it's much better than it was. I haven't yet done much on the prostitution section, though, and I think that still needs a bit of work, so I'm going to put some of the problems I see with it up here in case anyone wants to a) defend it, or b) fix some of them.

• It would be nice if we could have a source for some statistics on proportions of slave/metic/Athenian prostitutes. Currently the first paragraph simply states that 'most' were slaves or metics, which doesn't tell us very much.

• Likewise, a source about prostitution and symposiums would be quite nice.

• Aspasia is described as the 'most famous' hetaira. How is this quantified? Is this someone's opinion, and if so whose? If it is the opinion of a specific scholar, we should source that; otherwise we should get rid of it as editorialising

• Likewise, the other statements about Aspasia are united

• I'm not even convinced that any of the stuff about Aspasia as it currently is tells us anything about the life of women in Classical Athens. We have a (very good!) article on Aspasia for stuff about her; this article should be for things about women in Classical Athens.

• Lots of the stuff about the lives of hetairae looks unsourced. More sources are always nice.

• Citing classical oratory as a source on what Athenian laws were is... problematic, to say the least. We should definitely try to find a modern, not ancient, source for the claim about citizenship of the children of hetairas

• Especially problematic: 'their most unattractive feature': what do we mean by 'unattractive' here? Unattractive in what way?

Caeciliusinhorto (talk) 13:43, 2 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I got round to rewriting this section, so the issues here are hopefully no longer a problem... Caeciliusinhorto (talk) 15:08, 2 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I am a student planning to edit this page in the next couple of weeks. I've noticed that there have been a lot of edits recently, so I wanted to make sure that our edits didn't overlap. I plan to edit the introductory paragraph to clarify what the article is about, the Family Life section, and the Economic Activities section. Additionally, I plan to add links to the See Also section and create an External Links section, while just generally cleaning up the article. I will review the edits Caeciliusinhorto already made. Thanks, Edemick (talk) 17:06, 30 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The lead paragraph is in desperate need of attention, so I'd be very happy to see someone improve that. I haven't made many edits to the actual text of the article outside of the women in religion section, so you shouldn't have any trouble on that front.... Caeciliusinhorto (talk) 19:50, 30 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Talk:Women in Classical Athens/GA1

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Reviewer:

Many thanks! I'm currently reviewing an article which has been languishing at GAN for two months now, so a fortnight isn't really that long to wait in comparison! I look forward to hearing your comments. Caeciliusinhorto (talk) 21:53, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Status

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Very
	1b. it complies with the list incorporation .
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline .
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	Well focused
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as audio :
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions .
	7. Overall assessment.

Conclusion

•  Done images checked - no problems
•  Done text checked for plagiarism - none found
•  Done some sources checked - no issues

Comments:

• I don't think that "Note 2" is necessary, I think it could be deleted without any damage to the integrity of the article
• In "Legal rights" and other sections, when a person's opinion or finding is written ("John Smith argues...") it's very useful for the uninformed reader if their profession is put at the start ("Historian John Smith argues...").
• You might not be aware, but there is a fairly easy to use citation style for when you are using only a couple of sources. See Anatomical terms of motion#References to see this style. I found it much easier to use when I only had to write my article, and maybe it will be useful in your future editing.

All in all, a thoroughly interesting and well-written article that meets the good article criteria! The comments above are small and don't impact on the high quality of this article, which I am passing. Well done!

We do realize both figures in the last image in the article are male, yes? Johnbod (talk) 19:45, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Well, now that you mention it... *wanders off to smack some sense into himself*... Caeciliusinhorto (talk) 10:13, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Though to be fair to past me, I did find it in the commons category "hetairas in ancient Greek pottery"... Caeciliusinhorto (talk) 10:15, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks - nice replacement. Johnbod (talk) 12:29, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Per

No: Classical Greece is a specific period, roughly 510-320 BC, and this and related terms need to be capitalized as proper names, if only to avoid confusion with the much wider period of classical antiquity. Likewise Archaic Greece etc. I don't actually see that MOSCAPS has anything to say on this specifically, or indeed historical periods generally. Johnbod (talk) 14:19, 22 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]