Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Resolution Guyot/archive1
TFA blurb review
Just a suggested blurb ... thoughts and edits are welcome. (The map will be shifted to the left.) - Dank (push to talk) 18:37, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
- Is it just me or does the blurb kind of forget what guyot we are talking about mid-text? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:18, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
- Better? - Dank (push to talk) 20:49, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
- I'd perhaps say "before it was shifted north by plate tectonics". Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 08:17, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
- Couldn't "it" refer to either the hotspot or the island (for a reader who doesn't know a lot about hotspots)? - Dank (push to talk) 13:07, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
- Aye, perhaps putting "guyot" instead of the pronoun would work. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 14:10, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
- Was it a guyot the whole time? I tried "volcano". - Dank (push to talk) 14:35, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
- Aye, perhaps putting "guyot" instead of the pronoun would work. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 14:10, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
- Couldn't "it" refer to either the hotspot or the island (for a reader who doesn't know a lot about hotspots)? - Dank (push to talk) 13:07, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
- I'd perhaps say "before it was shifted north by plate tectonics". Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 08:17, 14 October 2019 (UTC)
- Better? - Dank (push to talk) 20:49, 13 October 2019 (UTC)