User contributions for 76.102.131.87

25 September 2007

• 04:3404:34, 25 September 2007 diff hist +137‎ Dahlia ‎ Added number of species. Added external link. Removed "summer and autumn flowering," since some species, like D. tenucaulis, have a much longer blooming period

22 September 2007

• 22:0022:00, 22 September 2007 diff hist 0‎ Deism ‎ The first sentence should of an entry should define the term. When and where the term originated is secondary.

18 September 2007

• 05:1705:17, 18 September 2007 diff hist −1‎ Sri Lanka ‎ →‎Flora and fauna

17 September 2007

• 03:1503:15, 17 September 2007 diff hist +37‎ Pico Basilé ‎ Clarified location. Added link

4 September 2007

• 11:5911:59, 4 September 2007 diff hist +26‎ Standard American Diet ‎ Added "calories," since obesity is due to a calorie surplus
• 11:5211:52, 4 September 2007 diff hist +470‎ Talk:Standard American Diet ‎ Article doesn't talk enough about S.A.D.
• 11:4111:41, 4 September 2007 diff hist +25‎ Nutrition ‎ The Mediterranean diet is usually considered "healthy,": http://www.mayoclinic.com/health/mediterranean-diet/CL00011

2 September 2007

• 04:4004:40, 2 September 2007 diff hist +358‎ Onychomycosis ‎ Added Symptoms. Added 2nd external link

26 August 2007

• 03:3603:36, 26 August 2007 diff hist +14‎ Agavoideae ‎No edit summary
• 00:1200:12, 26 August 2007 diff hist −349‎ Agave maculata ‎ Moved caterpillar info to end since it is tangential. Shortened run-on sentence. The sentence "This has implications.." was vague and irrelevant to this plant, so it was shortened.

25 August 2007

• 18:2918:29, 25 August 2007 diff hist +136‎ Talk:You Are the Sunshine of My Life ‎ Who sings the opening vocals?
• 07:4407:44, 25 August 2007 diff hist +259‎ Sonchus brassicifolius ‎ added origin of plant, added external links

24 August 2007

• 17:4017:40, 24 August 2007 diff hist +19‎ Bloating ‎ Added visceral fat, moved Alvarez' syndrome down the list since it's rare

17 August 2007

• 05:4905:49, 17 August 2007 diff hist +133‎ Scallop ‎ added links, described distribution

14 August 2007

• 06:1306:13, 14 August 2007 diff hist +27‎ Bell pepper ‎ added links, clarified text

11 August 2007

• 03:2003:20, 11 August 2007 diff hist −159‎ Megachile ‎ Fixed run-on sentence.

9 August 2007

• 18:4218:42, 9 August 2007 diff hist +10‎ Spider bite ‎ Removed tangential sentence. Added internal links

3 August 2007

• 00:3400:34, 3 August 2007 diff hist +4‎ Triumph the Insult Comic Dog ‎No edit summary

28 July 2007

• 04:0804:08, 28 July 2007 diff hist −47‎ Stroke ‎ the link to "hemorrhage" contains links to "AE" And "BE," so it is unnecessary here, as it is too wordy

27 July 2007

• 06:1606:16, 27 July 2007 diff hist +111‎ Burpee ‎ cleaned up a bit

24 July 2007

• 18:3418:34, 24 July 2007 diff hist −27‎ Bitter orange ‎ clarified whose opinions they were (the tone was too universal)

20 July 2007

• 06:2706:27, 20 July 2007 diff hist −43‎ Central nervous system ‎ It sounded too much like an advertisement

16 July 2007

• 06:5306:53, 16 July 2007 diff hist −368‎ Thermoregulation ‎ Deleted irrelevant paragraph

6 July 2007

• 11:2311:23, 6 July 2007 diff hist 0‎ Vasconcellea ‎ fixed spelling

5 July 2007

• 20:3420:34, 5 July 2007 diff hist −14‎ Glycemic index ‎ Gave an example. Removed vague sentence.

3 July 2007

• 23:0323:03, 3 July 2007 diff hist +3‎ Cellulite ‎No edit summary

13 June 2007

• 06:4006:40, 13 June 2007 diff hist −155‎ 2007 John F. Kennedy International Airport attack plot ‎ Deleted sophmoric sentence, and arranged other ones in proper sequence

12 June 2007

• 18:1118:11, 12 June 2007 diff hist +111‎ Wikipedia talk:Avoid weasel words ‎ The first sentence is way too wordy and confusing

6 June 2007

• 06:5506:55, 6 June 2007 diff hist +22‎ Growth hormone ‎ The opening sentence of an entry should be simple & concise so that the average person can grasp the topic. The fact that GH is a 191-amino acid is more trivial and goes in later sentences.

1 June 2007

• 05:0905:09, 1 June 2007 diff hist +20‎ Heart failure ‎ Fixed confusing run-on sentence, however someone should check it for factual accuracy

20 May 2007

• 22:4722:47, 20 May 2007 diff hist −3‎ Picotee ‎ not just carnations are picotee