A fact from La Dama Enmascarada appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 April 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 31 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
? Enciclopedia staff (September 2007). "Enciclopedia de las Mascaras" [The Eyclopedia of Masks]. La Dama Enmascarada (in Spanish). Mexico. p. 4. Tomo II.
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"Caballero was a relative of professional wrestler Irma González as well as González's daughter Irma Aguilar although it is unclear exactly how they were related." - seems odd. In the infobox, it states that she is niece to
Irma González
. Please clarify this
"She started out as a masked wrestler," - began her career
"but lost her mask in 1958 to Irma González, but would later wrestle under the mask again." - repetition of the word "but"
"including Magdalena Caballero. Caballero would work" Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
"Her reign lasted less than a year as Irma González won the championship later that year." - in 1955.
"she would at times wrestle under her real name and at other times still use the "La Dama Enmascarada" name," - and sometimes the
"After the mask loss" - the loss of her mask,
"despite not being masked anymore." - no longer being masked.
"Due to very few records of wrestling from that period of time" - from that time period
"it's uncertain who defeated La Dama" - it is uncertain as to who
"On January 22, 1961, La Dama Enmascarada evened the score with Irma González" - the text in bold is not particularly encyclopedic
"as she teamed up with Chabela Romero to take on the team of Irma González and Toña la Tapatía" - repetition of "team"
"Empresa Mexicana de Lucha Libre (EMLL) show in Guadalajara." - the acroynms are not needed since they are not repeated elsewhere
Personal life
"Caballero and husband Andrés Ramos had a total of six children together before their divorce in the 1950s" - the text in bold is not needed
"Magdalena Caballero died on March 11, 2006," - what did she die from? Do we know?
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It looks like that Reference 1 is missing the page number that the story can be found on
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96(talk) 10:59, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
MWright96 thank you for your review, I will look over the comments and made the appropriate updates. Note, I am going to be quite busy over the weeekend so I may not get to the feedback for a day or two. MPJ-DK (talk) 16:10, 25 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
MWright96 sorry it took me a bit, I had to e-mail someone who could actually see the archives of the newspaper since the article they sent me way back did not include the page number. I got it all that I believe I've addressed all issues. MPJ-DK (talk) 01:31, 29 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class; I've made one small change to the prose. MWright96(talk) 08:08, 29 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
– John M Wolfson (talk • contribs) 00:50, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
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