Talk:Leigh Diffey

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

As promised I'll take a look at Diffey's article. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (
    lists
    )
    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (
    reliable sources): c (OR
    ):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (
    focused
    )
    :
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy
    .
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have
    suitable captions
    )
    :
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

  • Delink United States, United Kingdom and Australia in the lead prose and infobox per
    MOS:OVERLINK

Early career: Network Ten and BBC

  • Wikilink Ipswich Grammar School
  • "He worked alongside Steve Parrish and Suzi Perry." - for whom?
  • "He also covered the 12 Hours of Sebring." When did Diffey cover the Sebring 12 Hours?

2003–2012: Speed Channel and return to Network Ten

  • Add a link to AMA Motocross Championships

Formula One and IndyCar

  • Remove the wikilink to SI.com
  • "he called the Belgian Grand Prix from NBC's base in Stamford, Connecticut, before he and Matchett traveled to Pocono Raceway to call the ABC Supply 500." - reptition of "call", also "traveled" must be spelt as travelled since you've put an Australian English tag in the article
  • "Diffey called the Italian Grand Prix in Connecticut and then traveled to" - travelled again

NASCAR

  • "covering the Xfinity Series at Mid-Ohio Sports Car Course" - The acroymns of the Xfinity Series are needed in parentheses

Global rallycross

  • "doing play-by-play for the 2017 season's final event" - try round in place of "event"

Overall you've written a fine piece of work Ben. Nothing much from me. MWright96 (talk) 21:05, 18 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Done everything; the action has been brought! Many thanks, --Bcschneider53 (talk) 02:34, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Bcschneider53: Alright, can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]