Talk:Tom Mboya
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Article is a mess
This article needs to be drastically Wikified. It appears to be a large article because there is substantial redundancy between its "summary" section (if you can call it that) and the sectional portions of the article. If anyone can help out, it radically improve the article... Stevenmitchell (talk) 12:30, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
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Reorganized
I have trimmed, reorganized, and merged many sentences and paragraphs because they are repetitive and confusing. Hoping that the page could be more readable. There's more that needs to be done in terms of readability and I haven't touched all of them. Yogibur (talk) 09:52, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
Improving The Article.
I will be editing the article to improve it and bring it at par with the other Kenyan Independence Heroes.Mwenemucii (talk) 18:38, 6 July 2021 (UTC)