Talk:MediEvil

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MediEvil was inspired by works such as Tim Burton's hit film The Nightmare Before Christmas
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talk · contribs) 13:09, 25 April 2015 (UTC)[reply
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Infobox and lead

  • action-adventure game, hack and slash - Requires capitalization
  • SCE Cambridge Studio and published by Sony for the PlayStation - Should be Sony Computer Entertainment, not just Sony
  • PlayStation Network was not listed as a one of the platforms in the infobox.
  • as he makes an attempt to stop Zarok's invasion of the kingdom whilst simultaneously redeeming himself. - May need some expansion on who Zarok is
  • Development began in 1995 at a Cambridge studio - Not specific enough. It should be Millennium Interactive.
  • The game's visuals are heavily influenced from Tim Burton's The Nightmare Before Christmas. - Should be influenced "by" instead of "from"
  • Sony's purchase of SCE Cambridge Studio evolved the game into a major PlayStation title - I don't think the world "major" is necessary
  • Dan can equip a shield to defend against attacks, though they can only take so much damage before breaking. - Does here mean weapon degrading? So much mean how much?
  • green ones offer Dan information and blue merchant gargoyles where Dan can buy services or ammunition using treasure he finds. - Personal opinion, not compulsory, but I would rephrase it into: green ones offer Dan information while blue ones allow Dan to buy services or ammunition bu using the treasures he finds.
  • (it will deplete completely if Dan drowns or falls from a great height) - The bracket is not really necessary. I will suggest to make it a standalone sentence
  • Plot is very concise and focused. Well done!
  • Capcom's Ghost'n Goblins - Ghost'n Goblins need to be italicized
  • The game received positive reviews upon release and was also commercially successful - Any actual sales figures?
  • Unfortunately information (along with every other 90s GA I have under my belt) is scarce and I couldn't find any specific sales figures for this game. This is by all means not approved of by
    WP:VG/RS but according to this website it sold 830,000 copies worldwide, though I'm sceptical on using that as a reference... ☠ Jaguar ☠ 11:58, 26 April 2015 (UTC)[reply
    ]
  • Is "Gaming ExpoReception" even something reliable or notable?
  • GameRevolution similary praised the humour but criticised the game for being too straightforward and "easy to master" Game Revolution, it has a space in between
  • original look and unique number of puzzles - The number of puzzles is unique?

References

  • No dead links
  • Source 3 is a primary source
  • What is Source 7?
  • I actually think that there is not enough sources for the gameplay section. The last sentence in the music section as well as the second sentence in the reception section also need a source
  • Added some for the music section and also I've used an overview by IGN for some parts of the gameplay. I also found another detailed review. Hope this is OK ☠ Jaguar ☠ 12:04, 26 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Images

  • File:MediEvil gameplay 001.jpg
    needs the image has rationale tag
  • The template of
    MediEvil (video game)

Overall

It is a very well-written articles. Very precise and focused, lead can is engaging enough and summarize everything, and that the development section is very comprehensive. The only issues I notice is that the articles don't have enough sources. If that is fixed, the article is good to go.

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I will leave it on hold for a week. if the source problems is fixed, I will promote it to GA. Good luck!

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WP:VG/RS but it's up to you if I should include it anyway. Thanks again ☠ Jaguar ☠ 12:15, 26 April 2015 (UTC)[reply
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The first 2 problem I mentioned, and the template of
talk) 12:27, 26 April 2015 (UTC)[reply
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I think I've fixed the template problem of the cover image and also I've found the entry for being able to buy the album through the artist's online store (ref added). Fixed the typo and also added references where you mentioned. I removed the commercial part as I'm not too sure on using that reference, though I'll have a look through VG:RS to see if I can use anything else in the mean time. What do you think now,
AdrianGamer? ☠ Jaguar ☠ 12:35, 26 April 2015 (UTC)[reply
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I think that the article looks great now.
talk) 12:47, 26 April 2015 (UTC)[reply
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Requested move 24 May 2015

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: not moved. Number 57 15:19, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

– I propose that the current MediEvil article should be renamed to MediEvil (series) and the actual game should be renamed to "MediEvil" to avoid confusion. I don't think it is much of a series as it consists of two games and a remake, and nobody would confuse the first game with anything else. – JAGUAR  13:24, 24 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This is a contested technical request (permalink). EdJohnston (talk) 14:36, 24 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Perhaps I worded it wrong, it's VG convention to usually put the first games in a series as its title, and the name of the series as 'x (series)' for example JAGUAR  18:02, 24 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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HD remaster of MediEvil in Skyrim engine.

Could someone maybe mention in the article that a high-quality HD remaster of the first 4 levels of this game has been made as a free mod for Skyrim. And by the way, I have played this remaster, and its excellent! here is a link to the remaster: http://www.nexusmods.com/skyrim/mods/71021/? Olivier Doorenbos (talk) 13:10, 20 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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