User talk:Aoba47/Archive 6

Hello Aoba47,

Could you do a review of the article I linked above? It's a B class article with High Importance in the WikiProject A&M. I fixed a lot of broken references, and the over-linking. I'd like to have your opinion. I think it could be an FA. Thanks. -- 1989 (talk) 17:08, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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  Sure, that's fine. -- 1989 (talk) 18:26, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  By the way, I was nominating

  this for Good Topic. It's not live yet, I just want to know whether it's acceptable before I do that. -- 1989 (talk) 19:43, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply

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  Everything looks ready to go. Great job to those who worked on the articles and list!

  Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply

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  Well, unfortunately, it failed because they don't allow "cherry picking". It would of likely continued, but the two articles that the reviewer described were not GAs yet. I went on and nominated them. If you want to take a look at them to see if I made the right choice, you can. -- 1989 (talk) 16:48, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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   Doing... -- 1989 (talk) 17:00, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  I can't really find anything based on his development, however, I see a lot of references based on "Uzumaki: the Art of Naruto" on here. I'm trying to look up the book now, but not getting any luck. -- 1989 (talk) 17:45, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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  If the article Hinata passes for GA, I might be bold, and change the Jirayia article to a redirect. -- 1989 (talk) 21:04, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  It may be best to make this a redirect if a significant amount of information on the character's creation and development cannot be located.

  Aoba47 (talk) 14:05, 23 January 2017 (UTC)[reply

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  The same thing for the Hinata article as well? -- 1989 (talk) 14:15, 23 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  Even though the Hinata article still needs work, it still shows potential as it seems to indicate that further information about the character's creation and development is out there so I would say no to that. You could always put it up for AfD to get responses from more experienced users, as I am not familiar with the manga/anime at all, but it looks like it has enough information to warrant a separate article in my opinion at least. It just needs work.

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  I didn't notice your ping. Nevermind. By the way, to your last question, not really, because the significant editors haven't touched the article since 6 to 10 years ago. [1]-- 1989 (talk) 22:27, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• You can comment on this page after your done looking at it, Wikipedia:Peer review/Naruto/archive2. -- 1989 (talk) 15:53, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Will do. I will try to put some comments up by the end of today.
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• When you get the chance, see this. I appreciate your feedback. -- 1989 (talk) 20:46, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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  I didn't know about the post limit. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. -- 1989 (talk) 23:24, 22 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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  See the FLN page. I don't know if the ping system works right now. -- 1989 (talk) 13:55, 23 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• If I were to nominate the article for GA, would you be able to review it? -- 1989 (talk) 22:38, 25 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• I am sorry, but I will not have enough time to do a review for that article, and I would prefer it a user more experienced with that subject matter (anime/manga) handle that instead. Thank you for your consideration though.
  Aoba47 (talk) 23:44, 25 January 2017 (UTC)[reply
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• I don't know if you're interested or not, but I opened a peer review on the main character. I would like to hear your opinion. -- MCMLXXXIX 15:02, 5 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• Just wanted to let you know that the article has been copy-edited. MCMLXXXIX 21:50, 17 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for letting me know.
  Aoba47 (talk) 22:21, 17 February 2017 (UTC)[reply
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• I nominated Naruto for a DYK. Could you see if it's accurate? I'm new to the process. MCMLXXXIX 20:02, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• I will check it out as soon as I have the chance.
  Aoba47 (talk) 20:17, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply
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• Could you give some advice on how can I improve
  this list? MCMLXXXIX 13:29, 28 February 2017 (UTC)[reply
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• Is there a need to cite the release date if I have an ISBN link? MCMLXXXIX 20:32, 28 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• Does the draft here look okay? I'm finished with the structure, but there are some info I have to fill in. MCMLXXXIX 14:09, 1 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• Could you give some advice about this article? It could be a GA. If you recommend an image, sadly, there are no free images released based on him. MCMLXXXIX 18:42, 28 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• Is there a way that
  this list can become an GA? I notice one paragraph about the music is uncited. I could just remove it. MCMLXXXIX 23:22, 2 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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• I revised the Production section for Naruto. Does it look better? MCMLXXXIX 12:51, 8 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• I just opened a new FL nomination. When you get a chance, I would like to get your feedback. MCMLXXXIX 13:42, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• Are subsections necessary for the theme section of Naruto? I didn't add them. MCMLXXXIX 15:02, 14 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• Do you have any suggestions on One Piece? I plan to re-promote the article to GA. I'm working on it now. MCMLXXXIX 13:10, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• For the Events section, do you think it is needed at all in the article if there isn't much information? MCMLXXXIX 13:46, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Probably not. You could incorporate any parts of this section into other parts of the article if you feel that it is necessary.
  Aoba47 (talk) 13:50, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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Finally, the Naruto Uzumaki article has been promoted, and I opened this one right away. When you get the chance, could you comment on it? -- 1989 13:00, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• Cas Liber, last year's winner, led the field with two featured articles on birds and a total score of 674.
• Iry-Hor, a WikiCup newcomer, came next with a featured article, a good article and a tally of 282 bonus points for a score of 517. All these points came from the article Nyuserre Ini, an Ancient Egyptian pharaoh,
• 1989, another WikiCup newcomer, was in joint third place at 240. 1989 has claimed points for two featured lists and one good article relating to anime and comedy series, all of which were awarded bonus points.
• Peacemaker67 shared third place with five good articles and thirteen good article reviews, mostly on naval vessels. He is also new to the competition.

The largest number of DYKs have been submitted by Vivvt and The C of E, who each claimed for seven, and MBlaze Lightning achieved eight articles at ITN. Carbrera and Peacemaker67 each claimed for five GAs and Krishna Chaitanya Velaga was well out in front for GARs, having reviewed 32. No featured pictures, featured topics or good topics yet, but we have achieved three featured articles and a splendid total of fifty good articles.

So, on to the second round. Remember that any content promoted after the end of round 1 but before the start of round 2 can be claimed in round 2. Invitations for collaborative writing efforts or any other discussion of potentially interesting work is always welcome on the WikiCup talk page. Remember, if two or more WikiCup competitors have done significant work on an article, all can claim points equally.

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A barnstar for you!

	The Barnstar of Diligence
	Thank you for your work at WP:AfD. Bearian (talk) 01:52, 4 March 2017 (UTC)[reply ]

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BTW thanks for your feedback here. Didn't mean to ignore your request for comment on the Sharon Stone FLC. Honestly I've never participated in FLC (from either end) in the past and just didn't feel confident giving advice in that format. Perhaps in the future. Looks like there's no shortage of support for it, though. :) — Rhododendrites ^talk \\ 05:19, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 06:41, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

Yo Aoba, I was wondering if you could look into my nominations of Fate/kaleid liner Prisma Illya 2wei for FL-status or Final Destination 3 for GA-status. Whichever you prefer. If you don't have time to do a full review that's alright, just maybe a few pointers of what I can fix. PanagiotisZois (talk) 13:40, 5 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Vidiians has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Good luck with the GAN.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 20:25, 8 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of SNUGGUMS -- SNUGGUMS (talk) 14:04, 9 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

Hello. I just want to thank you for reviewing my FAC and FLC. I'm so sorry that I did not review your FAC Eve Russell, it is just that I have not got the time to do it properly, because College is draining my time. Anyway, congratulations on both works. Regards, --Paparazzzi (talk) 05:08, 11 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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The article

The article Manos Arriba you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Manos Arriba for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Carbrera -- Carbrera (talk) 20:02, 11 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of J Milburn -- J Milburn (talk) 23:21, 11 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

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Thanks, I have commented. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:18, 12 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you!

Aoba47 (talk) 22:21, 12 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

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Hi. I am not sure if the topic interests you but I would appreciate if you could find some time reviewing the FLC nom for List of Sahitya Akademi fellows here. - Vivvt (Talk) 05:12, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• I will look at it as soon as I have the chance.
  Aoba47 (talk) 05:15, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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Hope you would throw some comments

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Sure. I need some days, though. :)

Pavanjandhyala 14:34, 16 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

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• Cool, thank you! I will get to your FLC in a few day as well.
  Aoba47 (talk) 14:45, 16 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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I've just requested a peer review of Yu Kanda here and I was wondering if you could give a suggestion, criticism or anything else. I still don't plan to nominate it to FAC as I'm busy with D.Gray-man and then I will try nominating the Millennium Earl to GA once the guild copy-edits it. Regards and good luck.Tintor2 (talk) 16:03, 16 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Changedforbetter -- Changedforbetter (talk) 20:02, 17 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

I've addressed your issues and concerns so far, but I would appreciate it if you could check back and see if I've done them sufficiently. Cheers, Jclemens (talk) 01:24, 18 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for addressing my comments. I will look through the article again.
  Aoba47 (talk) 01:30, 18 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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The article Diamond Crowned Queen you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Diamond Crowned Queen for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Changedforbetter -- Changedforbetter (talk) 00:03, 19 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for uploading

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Note that any non-free images not used in any articles will be deleted after seven days, as described in section F5 of the criteria for speedy deletion. Thank you. --B-bot (talk) 18:04, 19 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Margaret (singer) GA nomination

Hi, I have noticed your recent involvement in reviewing the Inna article, and would like to ask if you would have an interest in reviewing this article as well when you're free to do so? Regards. ArturSik (talk) 01:33, 20 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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• No worries, thanks for the quick response. ArturSik (talk) 01:47, 20 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Orphaned non-free image File:SorryMrsCarterSounds.ogg

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Stronger (Kelly Clarkson album)

OK, first of all, hi. Second, I nominated the article quite a while back, and right now, I'm extremely busy (with my studies), I would be very grateful if you could extend the period for another four days (i.e. Friday, when I'm no longer super pressed for time), or just re-evaluate it at a later date. I'm extremely sorry for my impoliteness in ignoring your messages, so I understand my inactivity might been really frustrating for you, but the timing was just off. I love your name, btw ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°). If your name's just a total coincidence, sorry for that awkwardness. Є𐌔ⲘО𐌔𐍄 ^{𐍄𐌀ℓК} 19:55, 20 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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TFL notification

Hi, Aoba. I'm just posting to let you know that

TFL talk. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:12, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

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• Thank you!
  Aoba47 (talk) 23:02, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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GAN

Hey Aoba47,

When you get the chance, could you review The Great Gatsby: Music from Baz Luhrmann's Film for GA? It was copy-edited, and I fixed the dead links. It should be in good shape. -- MCMLXXXIX 22:07, 23 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• I will review it as soon as I have the chance.
  Aoba47 (talk) 22:08, 23 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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Starting GA reviews

Aoba47, I noticed that you've been editing article talk pages when you start a review to add the "onreview" status and transclude the review page, as you did here.

You don't need to do this. In fact, when you do it yourself, you short-circuit the bot that would normally do so, which prevents it from posting a notice to the nominator's page that you've started the review. Next time you start a review, just open the review page as you normally do, and let the bot find it and do the talk page update and the notification. It runs every 20 minutes or so; you won't have to wait long for it to do its job. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:05, 24 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for your note, and I apologize for my mistake. I will be more aware of this in the future.
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Your GA nomination of Mercy Point

Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article

criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PanagiotisZois -- PanagiotisZois (talk) 16:21, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply

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List of Eve Episodes

Hello:

The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article

List of Eve episodes

has been completed.

Not having seen the series, I had trouble figuring out for myself what had been written about Beverly's pregnancy in the introduction to season three. I went with what appeared in the episode summary which did make sense to me. You'll want to check this to make sure I haven't made a mistake.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 21:35, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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  Aoba47: Well it sounds plausible - well as plausible as these shows are - why not leave it for now? If it's wrong, someone will correct it, no doubt.Cheers Twofingered Typist (talk) 11:25, 30 March 2017 (UTC)[reply
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• Makes sense to me.
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Be Still My Soul

Hey, I hope you're doing well. I am not sure if you actually follow

LaTanya Richardson were the highlights). Also, particularly impressive was Ellen Pompeo in her directorial debut. If you get a chance you must check it out. NumerounovedantTalk 11:06, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply

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I can understand what you're saying, I think for me its just the fact that I stuck around through the lows of the show (and yes there were some very low lows), and now that the show has managed to breathe a new life into the characters (Meredith Grey had the most amazing evolution out of the batch, Kudos to Pompeo), I just can't seem to have enough. NumerounovedantTalk 20:16, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, I am glad you enjoy it. I completely abandoned the show a couple years ago. I saw an episode earlier this season to see what it was like, and I strongly disliked it so I don't see myself watching it in the future tbh.

Aoba47 (talk) 20:34, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply

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Don't worry I'll keep you posted on any interesting developments, even if you decided to bail out, XD I left some comments at Simone's Russel's FAC, but it doesn't feel like your characteristic article. You might want to take a second look. NumerounovedantTalk 20:49, 1 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds good to me. I will address your comments now. I didn't even know that I had a particular style on here lol.

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Your GA nomination of Mercy Point

The article Mercy Point you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Mercy Point for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of PanagiotisZois -- PanagiotisZois (talk) 01:41, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Mary Kom (film)/archive1

Would you please come back as I want another reviewer to solve one problem. I would appreciate your help. Thanks. Checkout "Comments from Vedant".Krish | Talk 08:44, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Manos Arriba

Hello:

The copy edit that you requested from the Guild of Copy Editors of the article Manos Arriba has been completed.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Good luck with your eventual FAC request.

Regards,

Twofingered Typist (talk) 20:52, 2 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you!
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A barnstar for you!

	The Barnstar of Good Humor
	Thanks for your help on my comments at Mary Kom's FAC, and as I said before, I had a good laugh at the comment here. You sure do make Wikipedia a better place to be, NumerounovedantTalk 20:20, 3 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for this! I greatly appreciate your feedback as it helps me to grow as a writer and contributor on here. I am glad that I could help as much as I could on
  Aoba47 (talk) 20:25, 3 April 2017 (UTC)[reply
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Your GA nomination of Mother's Day (Rugrats)

The article

good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Mother's Day (Rugrats) for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of SNUGGUMS -- SNUGGUMS (talk) 03:01, 5 April 2017 (UTC)[reply

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Your GA nomination of Mother's Day (Rugrats)

The article Mother's Day (Rugrats) you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Mother's Day (Rugrats) for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already been on the main page as an "In the news" or "Did you know" item, you can nominate it to appear in Did you know. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of SNUGGUMS -- SNUGGUMS (talk) 18:02, 5 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Congrats again on the pass :). Since the episode's 20th anniversary is next month, feel free to take to DYK so it makes the front page on that day, and you can specifically request a day in advance for it to be featured. Snuggums (talk / edits) 18:12, 5 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you again for your help with the review! That is a great idea, and I will definitely take it to DYK. I didn't realize it was the episode's 20th anniversary next month; it makes feel super old now lol.
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FL

Would you please look at this? I am planning this for TFL for the 28th April, the release of the second part.Krish | Talk 06:42, 7 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• I will provide comments for this as soon as I have the available time.
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Guess what

Hey, I made some changes to Vincent's article, but there are still some more concerns. I think it'll be better if you take a look first. And guess what? I was so intrigued by reading so much about the show that I ended up watching it. And what better episode to start with other than the series finale. NumerounovedantTalk 12:24, 7 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Yes, it was a treat, I too loved the bizarre humor in the episode. Anyways, I have made some very basic changes in the article and will be happy to help as and when you decide to work on it further. Good luck. NumerounovedantTalk 17:43, 7 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cool, I am glad you enjoyed it. I will definitely let you know when I work on it more in the future. Thank you for your help and kind words. I could use all of the luck that I could get lol.

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Hannah Baker

Hey, I hope that you're doing well. I need your help; i just started working on the Hannah Baker's article (from this tv series) and am not sure if the "Storylines" section reads in a manner that it should. Will you mind taking a look, as I would not want to proceed without being sure. It'll be really difficult to change the entire section, once its complete. Thanks a lot either way. NumerounovedantTalk 16:13, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Thank you for your message. I am doing well, and I hope you are doing well too. I would love to look through the article. I will try to look through it by the end of today if that is okay with you.
  Aoba47 (talk) 16:16, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks a lot, though I am guessing that you haven't watched the series? It came out recently on Netfilx. NumerounovedantTalk 16:18, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

No worries; I actually have not watched a lot of recent shows, and this is no exception. I have heard about it and it sounds interesting so I may check it out someday in the future. I will have to add it to my never-ending list of television shows to watch. A suicide storyline in a high school setting kind of gives me

Aoba47 (talk) 16:30, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply

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• Here are my notes after giving the article a rather quick speed-read. I would focus your attention on expanding the "Development" and "Reception" section to support that this character has received significant coverage by third-party, reliable sources to avoid any attempts to delete it (either through reverting to a redirect, going through the AfD process, or anything else). As for the storyline section, remember to add specific citations for each individual episode that the events occur. I do not believe the quote at the end of the first paragraph is necessary, and I would suggest removing it as it does not illustrate much to the reader. You can paraphrase this in a much more concise manner. Other than that, it reads decently overall at the moment for a first draft. As you work through it more, it will definitely improve as some of the language could use some revision (people/revisions is a little awkwardly constructed and too informal for Wikipedia). I would just focus on making sure that everything reads cohesively and to avoid repeating names when possible (for instance, the name Clay is repeated a lot in the third paragraph). It could also use more expansion to clearly identify everything that occurred to the character as there appears to be gaps in the storyline as it currently stands; some aspects of it are rather vague. Also, it would be helpful to clarify this section is about the television series and it would be helpful to note if there are any changes between the book and the television series if you would like to work on this further in the future. Also, just as a word of caution, I find it odd that the main series article and this article said that this received "universal" praise when I have seen articles criticized this show (I saw one publication give a completely negative review of this show actually) so just be wary about that in the future. Hope this helps a little.
  Aoba47 (talk) 16:39, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you for your help, although on second thoughts I don't think that I have the frame of mind or the patience for taking this all the way, but I'll at least give it a shot. (Fictional characters can be hard and their story arcs become monotonous after going through them so many times.) I'll keep your comments in mind while working on it. NumerounovedantTalk 17:36, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It definitely takes time so don't be too hard on yourself. You can definitely work on this bit-by-bit if you would like; it is tough for a newer character that is still receiving a lot of attention. Good luck with this and your future projects. I am taking a break from working on articles about fictional characters for that very reason so I completely understand.

Aoba47 (talk) 17:56, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply

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Let's see how it goes. Oh and I hope that you reconsider your screenwriting/directing dream. I wouldn't mind making an article or two on shows/films that you write/direct. 😁 NumerounovedantTalk 13:24, 13 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Good luck, and that would truly be awesome!

Aoba47 (talk) 13:50, 13 April 2017 (UTC)[reply

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Your GA nomination of Vidiians

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