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Metalloid FA

Hello Sasata. I intend to nominate

WP:ELEM (of which both of us are a member of) to copyedit it first. I don't know if this required since the article has been vetted many times in the course of passing through each of the classes from C (where I started on it) to B, B+ and GA, and thence to A, where it is now. Would you be able to take a quick look at the article to see if you reckon it would require copyediting before I nominate it? Thank you. Sandbh (talk
) 09:04, 27 January 2013 (UTC)

Yes, I think it will need some extensive copyediting. From a quick glance I see several problems:
Thank you Sasata. That's very good feedback from a fresh pair of eyes. I've started working on the bulleted lists. Will be back when I've acted on all your points. Sandbh (talk) 11:23, 31 January 2013 (UTC)
Hello again Sasata. I believe I've addressed all the problems you listed, and made some other refinements along the way.
  • Re overlinking, thank you for pointing me to Ucucha's script which was impessively quick and efficient.
  • Re overcitations, twenty per cent of citations are double citations; and around six per cent are triple or more citations a rate which I don't think is an issue. Reasons for multiple citations are one or more of: there is some controversy; the references are somewhat obscure; the citations are backing up several points in the one sentence or paragraph and don't lend themselves to being distributed throughout the sentence or paragraph; to substantiate multiple (unusual) examples. I have however collapsed, where practical, all instances of four or more citations occurring together, into one citation with multiple references.
  • Uninformative captions have been expanded.
  • Most of the bulleted lists have been turned into a prose. The few remaining are best left as such, in my view.
  • Reference formatting has been checked and corrected.
  • I used as many references as I thought would be needed to do a fair job of (a) summarizing and substantiating the subject matter, which is quite fuzzy---much more so than is usual for a chemistry topic; and (b) resolving the continual slow edit war the article used to be subject to. Yes, there are a fair number of older references. This is a reflection of: the long history of the use and development of the concept of a semimetal/metalloid, dating from, in particular, the 19th century onwards; the comparative explosion of references to metalloids in the 1950s and 60s as a result of a general consensus being reached as to the application of the term metalloid to intermediate or borderline elements, around this time; and a general decline in descriptive chemistry writing from the 1970s onwards (although there has been a recent mini-renaissance).
Could you please take another quick look before I (hopefully) nominate the article for FA. Thank you. Sandbh (talk) 09:29, 14 February 2013 (UTC)
Looks better! Here's a few more things that you could get out of the way before FAC. Sasata (talk) 19:23, 14 February 2013 (UTC)
  • all end of paragraph sentences should have citations
  • try to minimize (or eliminate) the number of one- or two-sentence paragraphs
  • "However" is one of the most overused words, especially in scientific writing. I think this article could use a pruning (do the same for "also")
  • should do a sweep for consistent British or American English usage (e.g., I see both "color" and "colour", "characterised" and "delocalized", etc.)
  • format the ISBN's so they are consistently hyphenated (or unhyphenated)
  • make sure all of the page ranges use endashes, not hyphens (see "283‒303"; "1032-1233"; "2661‒67" and others; note that the partial page range format of the last is not the same as the full page range of most of the others)
  • make sure all bibliographic info is included (e.g., "Rayner-Canham G 2011" and "Poojary DM, Borade RB & Clearfield A 1993" are missing the issue #'s; there are several more like this – just click the linked doi's)
Excellent feedback thank you. I thought I had all the page range separators as figure dashes but maybe in all of the organising, sorting and swapping of the reference list between different applications a few hyphens have slipped back in. Your observations about however and also are gold. I especially liked your observations about dashes in ISBNs. Some publishers include them some don't. Will remove them. Back later after I've addressed all of this. Sandbh (talk) 04:04, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
Sasata: have gotten all the above out the way:
  • But for a few end of paragraph sentences all such have citations
  • One- or two-sentence paragraphs are minimal
  • Pruned however's by 20% and also's by 30%
  • Australian English used throughout
  • ISBNs all unhyphenated
  • All page spans now use en dashes, and minimum number of figures
  • Missing biblio info added
  • Also bundled remaining double and triple citations.
Hope it might be good to go now. Thank you. Sandbh (talk) 11:19, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
I think it's in the range now. One last thing: there should be non-breaking spaces between all numbers and abbreviated units. Good luck with the FAC; there's a lot of FACs open right now (55 currently), and not enough reviewers. You might be able to generate some good will by reviewing some other candidates. I'll try to visit, but I have a lot on my plate. Sasata (talk) 22:25, 26 February 2013 (UTC)
Beaut, ta. I intend to review 2 FACs before posting mine. Sandbh (talk) 22:56, 26 February 2013 (UTC)


Actually that got me thinking on whether we should do it for all journal articles, though might be a bit silly in 3-page articles to highlight one page...or then again maybe not. Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:41, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

Well, there are some who already think this is the way to go, and if so, then sfn citations might become de rigueur. But I've seen a lot of push against this; I guess people don't want to give up their favorite style. Personally, I think it's unnecessary for articles of less than 10–15 pages or so (I'm willing to be convinced otherwise, though), but then where does one draw the line? Will be interesting to see what discussion comes of this. Looking forward to the day in the distant future when Wikipedia software automatically displays the style in the format/skin one has specified in their preferences... Sasata (talk) 22:01, 1 February 2013 (UTC)

Salamander

I was pleased to see you had joined the WikiCup again! Would you be interested in working on the article Salamander later in the competition, when points are more important, with a view to FAC? You said you were interested in these amphibians and the neoteny/larval development issues are quite complex. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:56, 2 February 2013 (UTC)

Sure, that sounds like a fine idea! The advance notice will give me plenty of time to raid the library and do some reading. I'll be in touch later on the talk page once I've given more thought to what needs to be done. Sasata (talk) 21:01, 2 February 2013 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

The Good Article Barnstar
For your contributions to bring Magnus Carlsen up to Good Article status. Thanks, and keep up the good work! -- Khazar2 (talk) 15:40, 4 February 2013 (UTC)

... and thanks to you for a helpful review! Sasata (talk) 15:43, 4 February 2013 (UTC)

My pleasure! -- Khazar2 (talk) 15:48, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
Just finished reading that article, thanks for your great work there :) Finn Rindahl (talk) 19:47, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks! Good (if unexpected) result today; looking forward to the Anand-Carlsen world championship match! Sasata (talk) 20:09, 1 April 2013 (UTC)

You are high on my rolodex..

ALT2 or ALT3? Thx! ;) Rcej (Robert)talk 12:33, 11 February 2013 (UTC)

Pygmy slow loris

Hi Sasata, just wondering if you or any of the others were planning on taking pygmy slow loris to GAN? I could help out some how if you need? Cheers, Jack (talk) 23:21, 15 February 2013 (UTC)

Hi Jack, several of the citations need specific page numbers, and I just haven't been motivated enough with this topic to spend the time to track them down. Last I recall, it needed a line-by-line copyedit to smooth out the prose ... but I haven't looked at it for a while, so this would probably be easier for me to do now. Feel free to work on either of these things, it'd be good to finish off this topic – although it's gotten bigger recently with the new species; I've not been following the new developments and am not sure if the circumscription of the new species affects the contents of this article. Sasata (talk) 00:01, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
It looked like the new species only disrupted the
WP:PRIM talk page. Cheers, Jack (talk
) 09:11, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

Sasata: If you have digital copies of the sources you used, I could work on tracking down the page numbers. I would really like to get them added. Unfortunately, neither Ucucha nor I have access to those sources, so unless you can send them to me, you're the only one who can fix that. – Maky « talk » 14:08, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't have digital copies. Many of those unavailable page numbers are from sources I used when I spent some time at the University of Alberta and Calgary libraries, and I haven't been back there since. The article is looking better, but I'd still give like to give it a copyedit and update it with some recent sources; will put it up for GAN after I finish that. Sasata (talk) 14:14, 28 February 2013 (UTC)
Hmmm... It's so frustrating that digital copies or previews aren't available. I should buy the Groves book for my personal lemur/primate library, but money is tight right now. I've emailed Nekaris to see if she can help with the Duckworth source and also posted a request at Wikipedia:WikiProject Resource Exchange/Resource Request. I'm trying to find a replacement for the Nadler et al. source and may try asking a librarian at Stanford to help me with it. – Maky « talk » 14:45, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

So there I was......

this morning decided to go for a drive and a bushwalk to get a better photo of a Persoonia linearis trunk among other things...and I recalled that we've had some heavy downpours over the summer...so made a detour to a local place near me where this mushroom crops up in summer after rain...and sure enough....anyway check my contribs on commons. I'd forgotten about writing this one...and it'd be good to get to GA/FA...I was concerned the taxonomy was a real schemozzle but reckon we can do it justice (I recalled looking at this a few years ago and rolling my eyes). Another joint shove to FA if you want - main reason I am thinking a collaborative effort is prudent as I reckon the taxonomy could get very involved and need a lot of ferreting of sources....Casliber (talk · contribs) 12:28, 17 February 2013 (UTC)

Ok I'm in! This will give me an excuse to buy some Australian field guides I've been thinking about. (p.s. It'd be good if we could swap out the lead pic to get rid of the black-socked feet :-) Sasata (talk) 14:08, 17 February 2013 (UTC)
Have a look at the images on commons and feel free to mix and match etc. I just which I'd had a knife - I ended up chopping one in half rather messily with a key to get a cross sectional photo.. :P Casliber (talk · contribs) 23:44, 17 February 2013 (UTC)

Libertia etymology

Hi. In this edit you sourced a statement about Ms Libert, where she was referred to as "Anne-Marie Libert". The French wikipedia, amongst other places, has her as fr:Marie-Anne Libert. So could you perhaps check your source again? SamuelTheGhost (talk) 17:23, 20 February 2013 (UTC)

  • I have rechecked the source, and confirmed that I have cited it correctly. Here are some other sources that this name order: [1], [2], [3], [4], [5], [6]. On the other hand, the authoritative "AUTHORS OF FUNGAL NAMES" published by CABI uses "Marie-Anne". There's also this image, which argues in favor of the latter spelling. To summarize, the citation is correct, but I'm not sure what the actual spelling is without doing more research. Sasata (talk) 18:53, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for that. The books advertised here support the MA spelling. The AM spelling seems to occur only in English-language sources except for the book by François Crépin which you cite above. Perhaps she used both orders. Other language wikipedias all support MA, and they're not all clones of each other. It's all very puzzling. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 23:18, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
      • I've created a stub article, mainly just a translation of the French one. There's more could be added using the references given there. SamuelTheGhost (talk) 17:59, 24 February 2013 (UTC)

Astraeus hygrometricus

Hi. here [7] you say that there is no published source for saying that rugra=Astraeus_hygrometricus. In the parts of jharkhand where this mushroom is found there is very little scope for research and even less scope of publishing. I am 30yrs old and have been seeing and eating this for years. This is the only reference you will find for the common name Rugra. Not because it does not exist but because no one has ever written about it.MKachhap (talk) 11:03, 21 February 2013 (UTC) mkachhap

(
reliable source and then we can include it in the article. SmartSE (talk
) 11:34, 21 February 2013 (UTC)
In addition to what Smartse wrote above, there's an additional complication: recent research has shown that what used to be known as A. hygrometricus in various parts of Asia are actually a
Astraeus thailandicus. It may be that the Indian "A. hygrometricus" is a distinct species too. Sasata (talk
) 15:19, 21 February 2013 (UTC)

Peer review of Lyme Disease article

Hi. I saw that your name was featured on the volunteers list for peer review. I was wondering if you could educate me on why the Lyme Disease article is B grade rather than GA grade. What needs to be done to the article for it to receive a higher grade? Thanks GT67 (talk) 20:13, 25 February 2013 (UTC)

Review at Wikipedia:Peer review/Lyme disease/archive2, FYI. Biosthmors (talk) 20:25, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
In order for it to become a "Good Article", it needs to be nominated at
primary and would have to be removed or replaced with citations to review articles or textbooks before it would stand a chance at passing through GAN. Sasata (talk
) 20:26, 25 February 2013 (UTC)
Thank you for reviewing the article and providing feedback! I will look into this. GT67 (talk) 16:13, 4 March 2013 (UTC)

Mycoflora Australis

Hi Sasata.

I'm an editor of the Spanish version of Wikipedia, and I'm improving the information about fungus species in Chile. For that porpuse I would find really helpful a copy of Singer's book, Mycoflora Australis. I'm aware that you area of interst is micology, so I think you may own a copy of the book. If that's the case, can you send me it? Thanks, --Andresisrael (talk) 16:02, 26 February 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't own a copy of that book. Sasata (talk) 16:16, 26 February 2013 (UTC)


Input from mycologists....

As well as getting a quick reply from Roy Watling, I alerted Rodham Tulloss to the unidentified amanita category - he said the photographs made his mouth water and he'd get back to looking at them later...Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:08, 1 March 2013 (UTC)

Watling and Tulloss – big guns! Would be good to get some of those mystery Amanitas identified. Sasata (talk) 22:21, 1 March 2013 (UTC)

I've managed to sort out sources for all the gaps, except for some of the fossil text which I've removed and replaced, so the article is ready for review. All the best - Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:41, 2 March 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'll be back soon (probably this evening). Sasata (talk) 21:06, 3 March 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for EB comments; Sabine's Sunbird and I have replied to most of them, either directly or by finding other things in those general directions. Let me know if more are needed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:18, 10 March 2013 (UTC)

Manta GA

Would you be able to take a look? Thanks. LittleJerry (talk) 19:30, 6 March 2013 (UTC)

Maybe; I should get my other open GANS finished first. Will consider taking up the review if someone else hasn't by then. Sasata (talk) 14:14, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
Okay thanks. I'll also ask another user for now. LittleJerry (talk) 18:40, 7 March 2013 (UTC)

Hello! Unless you are too busy, could you please take a look at this article? I have put many efforts in it, and I mean to put it up for FAC. It is a GA and has recently received a copyedit. Still, I seek your opinion, as you have vitally helped me to make Giant eland a successful FAC. Sainsf <^>Talk all words 05:40, 7 March 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'll have a look over the weekend. Sasata (talk) 14:15, 7 March 2013 (UTC)
Sainsf, I'd like to work on this some more; still needs more copyediting, and I'd like to do a lit search too. Hope you aren't in a rush! Sasata (talk)

Boletus badius

am expanding for DYK (you're welcome to join in - was 150 words beforehand so might need alot of input!). I recall the funny story about how Boletus badius Pers. is now a polypore...interesting case of conserving names...but don't recall where I read it... :P Casliber (talk · contribs) 09:20, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

I just happened to have a draft I was working on, so I unceremoniously dumped it in ... it's still quite rough and needs more expansion and copyediting, but should get us past the DYK stage. Sasata (talk) 13:35, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
Great! I ate dried Boletus badius once as it was available in a market in Sydney (imported) - it was quite different to porcini and mild. Anyway...Casliber (talk · contribs) 19:36, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
PS: I just realised it's so long ago since I started the article it's like almost starting it from scratch. Wanna shove it over the line at GA and possibly FA now? With two of us it should be straightforward. I was becoming more enthused as there are alot of nice photos on commons and although taxonomically it's a bit of a problem, it's a much more definable problem than Phlebopus marginatus....Casliber (talk · contribs) 03:41, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
I was thinking the same myself about all of your points. I still have some more database checking to do for additional sources, and most of the summary sentences I've already added from various other papers could be expanded a bit to tell the story better (so there's definitely some room for growth before FAC), but it's already close to GA range. Should be able to give it a good push over the next few days. Sasata (talk) 05:03, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
I've got the guidebooks out and ready next to the computer..I should be able to ferret out a couple of anecdotes...Casliber (talk · contribs) 05:45, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
It isn't a Boletus. It is more closely related to Xerocomellus. Obfuscateme (talk) 04:01, 14 May 2013 (UTC)

DYK for Boletus badius