Wikipedia talk:Education program archive/University of Western Ontario/Genetics in Everyday Life (Fall 2013)/Grading

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Fahmi T.

• The Kite Runner - added a line mentioning his new work with reference to the page. Femobasha (talk · contribs)
• Huron University College - added a history date and indicated that its the oldeds affiliated college of UWO (with citation) Femobasha (talk · contribs)
• Finance - added last line on introductory paragraph Femobasha (talk · contribs)
• London, Ontario - fixed spelling mistakes in the education section Femobasha (talk · contribs)
• Canada - Updated demographic statistic figures as of July 2013. Femobasha (talk · contribs)

Tom Haffie.

• Earlobe - Cleared up previous claim of simple dominance in humans (with citation). TomHaffie (talk · contribs)

Marcel B.

• Professional golf career of Tiger Woods- corrected grammar, added posession to name Nicklaus, specified wins to PGA wins (with citation). MarcelBeauchamp94 (talk · contribs)
• Richard Ivey School of Business-updated information regarding UWO location (with citation).MarcelBeauchamp94 (talk · contribs
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• Blackberry Ltd- updated employee figure (with citation).MarcelBeauchamp94 (talk · contribs
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• Roaring Fork River- added personal winter photo with information. MarcelBeauchamp94 (talk · contribs)
• UGG Australia- added information to history about 2012 marketing campaign to attract more male based sales (with citation).MarcelBeauchamp94 (talk · contribs
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• Sir Gawain and the Green Knight - added information to plot summary (with citation).Q.nadine (talk · contribs)
• The Secret of Moonacre - Corrected grammar and spelling mistakes, added information.Q.nadine (talk · contribs)
• Dorchester, Ontario - updated and added information regarding current events (with citation).Q.nadine (talk · contribs)
• List of pipe bands - added to list of Canadian Pipe Bands, with external link.Q.nadine (talk · contribs)
• London Transit - added a new route to 'regular routes'. Fixed Improper formatting of table.Q.nadine (talk · contribs)

Jordan B.

• Holy Trinity Catholic High School (Simcoe) - Added background information (with citation). Jboudr6 (talk · contribs)
• Los Angeles Kings - Included assistant general manager (with citation). Jboudr6 (talk · contribs)
• Snowboarding - Added information on a large snowboarding competition. Jboudr6 (talk · contribs)
• Rob Blake - Added information about Stanley cup championship, and awards. Jboudr6 (talk · contribs)
• Ice hockey arena - Completed the list of current National Hockey Arenas in Canada, and the United States. Jboudr6 (talk · contribs)

Nadia S.

• The Immoralist - added information about a character in the novel as well as a reference list (with citation).Nadiasc 16 (talk · contribs)
• Peter Stumpp - added information under Accusations regarding his victims (with citation).Nadiasc 16 (talk · contribs)
• Fawad Afzal Khan - added information under Career about work alongside (with citation).Nadiasc 16 (talk · contribs
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• Nadia Khan - added information about the banning of her morning show (with citation).Nadiasc 16 (talk · contribs)
• Ross Geller - added information under Family about the "Routine" (with citation).Nadiasc 16 (talk · contribs)

Nyla J.

• Canadian Canoe Association - Included an external link to Member Clubs of CKC, Capitalized whitewater disciplines to avoid subtle hierarchy of prestige. Nljoseph (talk · contribs
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• New Hamburg, Ontario - Beefed up green spaces info, Organized page, updated and categorized 'Annual Events" "Local Businesses" and "Religious Congregations" inserted Links where no wiki page available, added References List (with citation). Nljoseph (talk · contribs)
• Skip-Bo - Added Gameplay Varient Nljoseph (talk · contribs)
• Cheesecake- Corrected improper use of semi-colon in first sentence.Nljoseph (talk · contribs)
• Masonville Place - Added photo Nljoseph (talk · contribs)

Erik S.

• That's It, That's All - Added new page (with citation). Balzamon85 (talk · contribs)

• Travis Rice - added information under Video Parts (with citation).Balzamon85 (talk · contribs)

Catherine G.

• Toronto Zoo - Added information of the Toronto Elephants bound for California (with news article citation) . Catgao (talk · contribs)
• University of Western Ontario - Added Kevin O'Leary under notable people with a brief description (with citation) . Catgao (talk · contribs)
• Fairview Mall - Added three additional stores in the first paragraph . Catgao (talk · contribs)
• Pacific Place - Updated and inserted wiki links to store names for L3 and L4 of the shopping mall (with citation) . Catgao (talk · contribs)
• Oedipus the King - Made Merope a link to another page, added details on the background . Catgao (talk · contribs
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• Taste of the Danforth -Edited information regarding the date of this event, and added it's 20th anniversary. (with citation) Erinbaker21 (talk · contribs)
• YMCA Camp Wanakita -Added an intermediate cheer. Erinbaker21 (talk · contribs)
• YMCA Camp Wanakita -Added more details to the Polar Bear Dip and how it can be achieved. Erinbaker21 (talk · contribs)
• Riverdale Collegiate Institute -Created a section on the various sports teams and clubs offered at this high school. Erinbaker21 (talk · contribs)
• Desmond Piers -Added post-war information about my great grandfather Rear Admiral Desmond Piers. Erinbaker21 (talk · contribs)

Nicole C.

• Brescia University College - Added opening of Clare Hall to Buildings (with citation). ncwall (talk · contribs)
• Playpen - Added information extra attachment pieces available on modern models. ncwall (talk · contribs)
• The University of Western Ontario - Updated Brescia University College residence info (with citation). ncwall (talk · contribs
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• Port-wine stain - Added info about ophthalmologist referral. ncwall (talk · contribs)
• Anita Blake - Added information to knowledge and skills of character. ncwall (talk · contribs)

Marlie G.

• Riverdale Park (Toronto) - Added information about the Summer Movie Series (with citation). marles3211 (talk · contribs)
• YMCA Camp Pine Crest - Added information about camp cheers and the purpose of them. marles3211 (talk · contribs)
• University of Western Ontario - Added a section about the Faculty of Social Science. marles3211 (talk · contribs)
• Macaroni and Cheese - Corrected the word 'macarroni' to 'macaroni' twice, it had been spelled with two 'r's. marles3211 (talk · contribs
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• So You Think You Can Dance Canada - Added that another international style of dance seen on the show is India's Bollywood (with citation to Wikipedia article Bollywood) marles3211 (talk · contribs)

Christina M.

• Plympton-Wyoming - Added general information about council (with citation). Mccreech (talk · contribs
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• Don Wright Faculty of Music - Added information about building renovations (with citation). Mccreech (talk · contribs)
• University of Western Ontario - Added information about performances (with citation). Mccreech (talk · contribs)
• The Ting Tings - Corrected sentence structure, and edited for cohesion. Mccreech (talk · contribs)
• Puritan - Added information to Cultural Consequences and edited for spelling and cohesion. Mccreech (talk · contribs
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• Garodia School (icse) - Corrected spelling and grammar. A.leatherd (talk · contribs
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• Human skeleton - Rewrote section on sexual dimorphism in the human skeleton (with 2 citations). A.leatherd (talk · contribs)
• The Phenice method - Created page outlining the method (with citation). A.leatherd (talk · contribs
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• Castoroides - Corrected misspelling of "specimens" in Discovery and species section. A.leatherd (talk · contribs)
• Bioarchaeology - Rewrote section on age estimation of skeletal remains (with 4 citations). A.leatherd (talk · contribs)
• Bioarchaeology - Corrected and edited section on paleodemography, added hyperlinks. A.leatherd (talk · contribs)

Tessence D.

• River Island - Corrected a date (with citation). TMD1994 (talk · contribs)
• River Island - Added information on their 2013 fashion line with Rihanna (with citation). TMD1994 (talk · contribs)
• Michael Stasko - Added Western University to my Professor's list of schools he teaches at. TMD1994 (talk · contribs)
• The Contract - I fixed a date. I changed it from 1998 to 1999 and I made a reference list (with citation) TMD1994 (talk · contribs)
• Danny McManus- I added a recent award to the award list. He is my friends Uncle. TMD1994 (talk · contribs)

Sierra B.

• Bermuda - Added information on the current status of four Guantanamo detainees in Bermuda (with citation). sdbotkin (talk · contribs)
• Bermuda - Added information on the current political party in Bermuda. sdbotkin (talk · contribs)
• Ethiopia - Added a subsection on Time in Ethiopia outlining the differences in the timing system used. sdbotkin (talk · contribs)
• Hamzehlu-ye Olya Fixed sentence structure and grammatical errors sdbotkin (talk · contribs)
• How I Met Your Mother Fixed minor spelling and grammatical errors sdbotkin (talk · contribs)

Heather W.

• Gluten-free Diet - Added Guar gum as an additive to compensate for the lack of gluten in bread Blade_jynx_xm (talk · contribs)

• Hedley - Linked band members's pages to the main page Jordlundy (talk · contribs)
• Sault Ste. Marie, Ontario - Added date closed of a main high school (with citation.) Jordlundy (talk · contribs)
• Francis Clergue - Added dates and name changes (with citation.) Jordlundy (talk · contribs)
• Hello Kitty - Added family members Jordlundy (talk · contribs)
• St. Mary's College, Sault Ste. Marie - Minor changes Jordlundy (talk · contribs
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• Western Ontario Mustangs - Formatted varsity section and corrected number of teams (with citation). Selterma (talk · contribs
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• Thiopurine methyltransferase - Added two sentences about association with adverse drug reaction (with citation). Selterma (talk · contribs)
• Point Grey Mini School - Edited grammar and style. Added links to other wikipedia pages. Selterma (talk · contribs
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• Retinoic acid receptor - Added name of response element Selterma (talk · contribs)
• Jeff Garlin - Added Podcast section with list of all episodes (with citation)Selterma (talk · contribs)

Sofia H.

• Songs of Innocence and of Experience - Added information to the synopsis (with citation). Sofy.eli (talk · contribs)
• Oroonoko - Added a new paragraph to the 'The New World Setting' section (with citations). Sofy.eli (talk · contribs)
• Property (novel) - Added two sentences to the novel's summary (Article appears in red because it is a stub: too short to be called an article).Sofy.eli (talk · contribs)
• Disgrace(novel) - Added the names of two characters to novel's synopsis. Sofy.eli (talk · contribs)
• Eilat Sports Center - Fixed grammar mistakes on main description. Sofy.eli (talk · contribs)

Christina B.

• Edward Bartley- corrected a spelling error and changed wording in a portion of the final sentence.
• Maracay- edited multiple subheadings that incorrectly capitalized more than the first word
• Nip/Tuck- corrected spelling errors and sentence structure in Production section.
• Georg Simmel- created Section called "Simmel on flirtation". Wrote a summary paragraph of his 1923 essay on "Women, Sexuality and Love." With citation.
• Corporate crime- added the link 'Pump and Dump' to the "See also" section.

Cecily M.

• Karera - Changed wording in Geography section. Cec.macknight (talk · contribs)
• Star Wars - Added a new bullet about the Art of Star Wars in the Legacy Section (with citation) Cec.macknight (talk · contribs)
• Women in Refrigerators - Added a new paragraph about Anita Sarkeesian to References in mass culture section (with citation) Cec.macknight (talk · contribs
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• Jane Eyre - Added two new paragraphs about Jane's relationship with her cousin St. John Rivers and her relationship with Mr. Rochester in the Feminism section of Themes (with citation) Cec.macknight (talk · contribs)
• Democritus - Added sentence in Ethics and Politics section clarifying the role of the soul in Democritus' theory of cheerfulness Cec.macknight (talk · contribs)

Alexandra B.

• Black sesame soup - Fixed grammar mistakes on main description. AlexBardoel (talk · contribs)
• Early Childhood - Added to section on physical growth and development (with citation). AlexBardoel (talk · contribs
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• Childhood - Added to section on middle adulthood (with citation).AlexBardoel (talk · contribs
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• Heart - Added information to structure of the heart (with citation).AlexBardoel (talk · contribs)
• Kübler-Ross model - Added information to the denial stage (with citation).AlexBardoel (talk · contribs
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• Human Brain - Added information about cerebral cortex (with citation).AlexBardoel (talk · contribs
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• Father Michael McGivney Catholic Academy - Added section on a student leadership group called SLAM (Student Leaders at McGivney) with citation. Kmustach2 (talk · contribs)
• St. Thomas The Apostle Parish (Markham, Ontario) - Created page with reference. Kmustach2 (talk · contribs)
• Nathan Salmon - Edited Biography Kmustach2 (talk · contribs)
• King's University College (University of Western Ontario) - Added two links and edited info on the new Darryl J. King Student Life Centre Kmustach2 (talk · contribs
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• Fond-du-Lac, Saskatchewan - Edited article and added information on transportation Kmustach2 (talk · contribs
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• Burning Man - Added information about the Temple Elisemary (talk · contribs)
• Daniel Alfredsson - Minor grammatical correction Elisemary (talk · contribs)
• H.B. Beal Secondary School - Added information about the Bealart program Elisemary (talk · contribs
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• Crested Gecko - Added information about their eyes and behaviour Elisemary (talk · contribs
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• Australian Shepherd - Added information about history with citation Elisemary (talk · contribs)

Katarina C.

• Quokka - Added information about population/reproduction with citation Kcheley (talk · contribs)
• Havergal College - Minor punctuation corrections Kcheley (talk · contribs)
• Cheley Colorado Camp - Corrected history using family documentation Kcheley (talk · contribs)
• Luke Gazdic - Added background information with citation Kcheley (talk · contribs)
• Tessa Thompson - Added two citations to personal life as well as a minor grammatical error Kcheley (talk · contribs)
• Eyelash Extensions - Added information to Types of Lashes Kcheley (talk · contribs)

Joe C.

• Catholic Central High School (London, Ontario) - Updated and revised notable alumni section (with citation) Jcirce56 (talk · contribs)
• Catholic Central High School (London, Ontario) - Added Athletics Section Jcirce56 (talk · contribs)

• Toronto Raptors - Added 2016 All Star Game host announcement --Jcirce56 (talk · contribs)
• Chris Robinson (baseball)- Updated Career (with citation) Jcirce56 (talk · contribs)
• Phil Kessel- Updated Toronto Maple Leafs Section, added newly signed contract Jcirce56 (talk · contribs)

Ben M.

• Madeline Westen - Fixed spelling and grammar issues Bmurat12 (talk · contribs
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• Huntsville High School (Ontario) - Added information about when the school was built with citation Bmurat12 (talk · contribs)
• Simon Dumont - Added citation for Simon's win at 2009 X-Games Big Air Bmurat12 (talk · contribs)
• Deerhurst Resort - Added a Golf tab with information for Deerhurst Golf courses with citation Bmurat12 (talk · contribs)
• Tobermory, Ontario - Added citation for Diving capital of the world and information on Big Tub Harbour with citation Bmurat12 (talk · contribs)

Alana A.

• Huron University College - Organized the programs section and added a list of the programs offered (with citation). alanasappleby (talk · contribs)
• Friday Night Lights (TV Series) - Edited the grammar and sentence structure in the characters section, as well as clarified the plot's of each character alanasappleby (talk · contribs)
• Pickle Barrel - Added information about the dish prices under the Atmosphere section. alanasappleby (talk · contribs
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• Forest Hill Collegiate Institute - Added a section for the Co-operative program offered at the school (with citation). alanasappleby (talk · contribs)
• The Parent Trap (Film 1998) - Added the name of the summer camp attended by Annie and Hallie in the Plot section. alanasappleby (talk · contribs)

Dakin L.

• Dr. Mario – added information in the legacy section regarding the process by which Dr. Mario can be unlocked in Super Smash Bros. Melee. (with citation) Dakinml (talk · contribs)
• LiveLeak – added basic information regarding video categories. Dakinml (talk · contribs)
• Nancy Campbell Collegiate Institute – added a wikilink to Thames River (Ontario) in the campus section. Dakinml (talk · contribs)
• Paparazzi – added point on legality within the United States. (with citation) Dakinml (talk · contribs)
• Thames River (Ontario) – Added information on 1937 flood. (with web citation) Dakinml (talk · contribs)