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Hatnote purposal

I need a propose for a redirect hatnote, by accompanying with

WP:ITHAT
and other uses (if none).

Purpose 1:

Purpose 2:

Surveyor Mount (talk) 22:55, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I do not consider this to be a major issue; thus I have no opinion. At my time at the FA nomination, no one raised any objections to the current formatting, but on my other FA, the formatting is similar to Purpose 2. I will just go along with whatever the MOS says or whatever consensus is built. Unlimitedlead (talk) 23:15, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
See
Celia Homeford (talk) 12:48, 21 March 2023 (UTC)[reply
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Not in favour of this. Ceoil (talk) 12:00, 6 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 6 May 2023

Edward I, King of England and Lord of Ireland is his correct title. The first Ebglish king to be given a numeral was Edward III. Edward I was known as 'Edward son of King Henry'. Dr Paul Booth (talk) 17:00, 6 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Callmemirela 🍁 18:14, 6 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Royal itinerary

There's a gif-image that shows Edward I's movements across England and Scotland over most of his reign File:King Edward I's itinerary.gif - Wikimedia Commons I wondered about integrating this into the article, to help readers visualise the king's movements? (disclaimer - I was involved in the research that lies behind the gif!) Charleslincolnshire (talk) 20:39, 16 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It looks useful to me, but Wikipedia has strict rules about using copyright material. See Wikipedia:Requesting copyright permission. If other editors agree with incorporating the image, it would have to be done using the correct procedure. Dudley Miles (talk) 07:53, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Massacre at Berwick

The important fact that Edward slew perhaps seven thousands, and likely more, at Berwick is obscured by a reference in a link to a particular bloody attack. Many articles in wikipedia include such facts in biographies, like that of pope Benedict VII of Avignon who only helped slay five thousand at Cesenai (when he was a cardinal). Edward's article might also mention his singular achievement of killing off the biggest burgh in Scotland and add it to his proud death toll. 1f2 (talk) 12:04, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sack of Berwick (1296) says that estimates of deaths are from 4000 to 17000 and some sources say all were massacred and others that women were spared. There do not seem to be reliable sources for a definite estimate. Dudley Miles (talk) 22:28, 17 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps the issue is more whether it is described as a "bloody attack" (as here) or captures that it features a massacre of civilians? It doesn't sound like there is much doubt that Edward ordered some kind of civilian massacre. Jim Killock (talk) 11:42, 11 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 5 November 2023

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: no consensus. After much-extended time for discussion, there is a clear absence of consensus for a move at this time. Like the discussion two years ago, there is almost an exactly even split among participants, with proponents of both viewpoints correctly marshalling points of policy in favor of their preference. Throughout this encyclopedia there are instances of English monarchs whose titles include "of England" and monarchs whose titles do not, so it is apparent that both formulations are permissible in appropriate conditions. This, therefore, boils down to a question of preference as to which conditions suffice for this purpose, a question to which this discussion has yielded no clear answer. I glean from the discussion that a separate nomination limited to Edward IV and Edward V would be more fruitful, and might be the best next step to pursue. BD2412 T 02:32, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]


– A proposal to bring the articles in line with WP:Naming conventions (royalty and nobility): "Only use a territorial designation (e.g. country) when disambiguation is needed." No disambiguation is needed in these cases.

The concise titles reflect common usage, which is a policy requirement (

WP:RECOGNIZABILITY too, which requires titles to be recognizable to people who are familiar with the subject area; everyone familiar with Edward V will recognize that the article titled Edward V
is about Edward V.

The proposed moves are also in line with

Guadalajara City
(emphasis in original).

We already have pre-Conqueror kings under concise names (e.g. Edmund I) as well as the Tudors Henry VIII, Edward VI, and Elizabeth I; the Stuart James VI and I; and the post-Union George III, George IV, William IV, Edward VII, George V, Edward VIII, George VI, Elizabeth II, and now Charles III. Surtsicna (talk) 17:21, 5 November 2023 (UTC) — Relisting. Polyamorph (talk) 18:43, 12 November 2023 (UTC)— Relisting. —usernamekiran (talk) 03:40, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It's their most common name in the English language at the present time, and the current most-common name is what we use to determine what an article's title is, not what their most common name was hundreds of years ago when they were alive. Rreagan007 (talk) 05:09, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: the books given as examples for
WP:COMMONNAME purposes are all part of the Yale English Monarchs series, so it's arguable that they're already disambiguated. It would be prudent to cast a wider net, just to be sure. A.D.Hope (talk) 23:01, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Oppose per Tim O'Doherty's sensible and policy-based comments above. Zacwill (talk) 13:51, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Zacwill, Tim O'Doherty's comments are not policy-based. Policy has been cited to refute them. The WP:Naming conventions (royalty and nobility) guideline has recently been amended, after a long and thorough discussion, to embrace these proposed titles precisely in order to bring the guideline in line with policy. Therefore, the current titles are against the policy and the guideline and the proposed titles are in line with them. Surtsicna (talk) 18:04, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Tim O'Doherty's comments are policy based, unless you've invested yourself with the power to discredit
WP:AT (that is, when it suits you, of course). And WP:NCROY is not policy anyway. Tim O'Doherty (talk) 19:37, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
No, your comments contravene
WP:RECOGNIZABLE says. WP:RECOGNIZABLE is about readers familiar with the subject recognizing that the article is about that subject. It is not about defining the subject to a person who knows nothing about it. You have not disputed that explanation. Surtsicna (talk) 23:41, 22 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Surtsicna: If the amendment to the guideline yields RMs that are too contentious to muster clear support, then I'd take that as a sign that the amendment may need to be revisited. Guidelines are most successful when they build upward from what we agree works best, and in this case I'm not seeing a lot of agreement that removing the "of England" works best. ╠╣uw [talk] 19:53, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Huwmanbeing, the amendment to the guideline is the result of an RfC that was explicitly based on the RMs that have taken place over the past decade, that have led to titles such as Elizabeth I, Edward VI, Henry VIII, Elizabeth II, etc; Louis XIV, Louis XV, Louis XVI, etc; Carl XVI Gustaf, Gustaf V, etc; Juan Carlos I, Alfonso XII, Felipe VI, etc; and, just this month, Wilhelm II and Harald V, Olav V, Haakon VII, etc. The guideline is being built upward from over a decade of community consensus. And I can guarantee to you that these articles are never going back to the lengthy form. Once you chop off the unnecessary disambiguation, it is difficult to convince people to put it back in. It does not even matter whether the moves proposed here succeed now; the policy is constant and the trend of matching royal biographies with it is steady. They will get there now or soon enough. Surtsicna (talk) 23:41, 22 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Difficult, but not impossible, as you know, having sneakily moved
Victor Emmanuel III of Italy and Vasily I of Moscow, plus also Franz Joseph I of Austria and Louis IX of France. —Srnec (talk) 00:01, 26 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Relisting comment: relisting for clearer consensus, notifying wikiprojects Polyamorph (talk) 18:43, 12 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Given the above, 'Edward I' does not need to be further disambiguated with a territorial designation according to
WP:PRECISE. If the same is true of the other articles listed then they should be moved. A.D.Hope (talk) 17:32, 24 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
The ODNB uses plain "Edward I" because it focusses solely on historical figures from the UK, though, which would be reflected in using - well - British sources. What we want here is a
WP:WORLDVIEW. Tim O'Doherty (talk) 19:55, 24 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
The titles of the sources in the ODNB bibliography were created independently of the context of the dictionary, so their exclusive use of ‘Edward I’ without territorial designation is quite persuasive. A.D.Hope (talk) 23:24, 24 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
To add to the above, the 'additional reading' in the Encyclopedia Britannica article is much the same, and a Jstor search produces many 'Edward I' articles but far fewer with 'Edward I of England' in the title. It's possible that there are thousands of sources which use 'of England' that I'm not picking up on, but I don't think it's very likely. A.D.Hope (talk) 00:01, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
WORLDVIEW such as Richard II being called Richard II by the national dictionaries of biography of Germany,[1] Croatia,[2] Norway,[3], Ireland,[4] Italy?[5] This is not about a world view. This is about forcing consistency against policy at the expense of reason. The insistence that Wikipedia should know better than ODNB, Britannica, and Shakespeare is mind-blowing. Surtsicna (talk) 18:21, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Using the same method, I can show that Henry II is unambiguous and that Louis XII isn't. In short, it doesn't work. Srnec (talk) 00:01, 26 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The dictionaries were not cited to prove or disprove ambiguity. Surtsicna (talk) 00:25, 26 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It's worth bearing in mind that, according to
WP:CRITERIA, only reliable English-language sources need to be considered when choosing an article title. A.D.Hope (talk) 00:57, 26 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Oppose per Tim O'Doherty. History6042 (talk) 22:30, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
As pointed out above, Tim O'Doherty's rationale relies upon a faulty reading of
WP:NCROY, which says that "of England" should only be added when disambiguation is needed. See point 3 under the section "Sovereigns". – bradv 23:24, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
I am aware of this. History6042 (talk) 00:16, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Tim O'Doherty's reading was not "faulty". Tim O'Doherty's reading was an equally correct interpretation of NCROY. Your interpretation is also correct. We disagree, because guideline/policy is ambiguous and "unnecessary disambiguation" is not a well-defined thick black line. But then again, you've disagreed with me in every discussion we've had, so I'll leave it there. Tim O'Doherty (talk) 18:38, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Close

It's been nearly 3 weeks now. 'Bout time for this RM to be closed. GoodDay (talk) 19:40, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. A.D.Hope (talk) 20:26, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@
WP:CR. Hopefully we can get someone uninvolved to close this soon. estar8806 (talk) 22:12, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Thanks, estar8806. GoodDay (talk) 22:14, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
And thanks to Tim O'Doherty for reverting the
WP:SUPERVOTE close by someone deeply involved in this topic at a previous RfC and lately at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Royalty and Nobility#RfC: How should articles on sovereigns of current European monarchies be (re)titled?; that was a good revert.  — SMcCandlish ¢ 😼  07:12, 26 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]

Side note - Wish there was a place where editors could be notified of these RMs, when they take place. For example, I believe a lot of editors missed out on the recently closed RM for the Norwegian monarchs, Haakon VII, Olav V & Harald V. GoodDay (talk) 17:20, 28 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

They are listed at the WikiProject pages and at
Celia Homeford (talk) 09:51, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Thanks. Now, if only we could get the RMs to slow down. Let one close, before opening another one. GoodDay (talk) 17:54, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Jewish policies of Edward I

Hi there, I've been compiling sources regarding the Hereford Mappa Mundi and its meaning as a promotion of the cult of Thomas de Cantilupe and as a defence of the expulsion of the Jews, and I came back to look at how the Expulsion is presented here relating to Edward. I think the page, while generally very excellent, could do with expanding on the topic of Edward's Jewish policies. To be fair to the authors, it's clear that historical research has been quite slow to take up these themes and much of the work to detail Jewish life and the treatment of Jews in medieval England has been relatively recent and run in parallel to the more mainstream sources whuch have tended to downplay these issues, so it is hardly surprising that Wikipedia would reflect this tendency. However it would be nice to rectify this neglect in the historical record!

Themes could include: Edward's religious beliefs on Jews and relations with the church regarding them; anti-Semitic familial influences on him; the use of Jewry and buying of foreclosed Jewish loans to facilitate centralisation of wealth and power within the aristocracy; attempts at conversion of the Jews (currently mentioned briefly); violence against the Jews in the wake of restrictions on them; Edward's experiment with expulsion in Gascony; and after the expulsion, his sponsorship of the cult of de Cantilupe and of the blood libel cult of Little Saint Hugh of Lincoln, as anti-Semitic propaganda to reinforce his position as defendor of Christians against Jews.

Would it be a good first step for me to compile some sources to draw on relating to this topic? Jim Killock (talk) 13:19, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

We really need to keep in mind that Edward reigned for decent period and that we don't want to over-emphasize some aspects of his reign. In the end, Edward's policies towards Jews only affected a small part of his reign and his subjects. We should keep in mind the amount of coverage that a subject receives in current scholarly biographies of Edward to base our coverage of particular subjects. Ealdgyth (talk) 16:06, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for replying, Ealdgyth. Perhaps the other way to look at it is that there is significant criticism from Jewish history scholars as to whether these issues bave been getting enough attention by mainstream English historians, not only of Edward I, but also of other figures whose actions and views regarding Jews are diminished in the literature? Colin Richmond (1992). "Englishness and Medieval Anglo-Jewry". In Kushner, Tony (ed.). The Jewish Heritage in British History. Frank Cass. pp. 42–59.
ISBN 0-7146-3464-6. is a good starting point on this, but there are plenty of others. He makes some good points on what the significance of Edward I's anti-Jewish policies are - both as views central to his world view and character, and also for long run in relations between Jews and gentiles in Europe. Jim Killock (talk) 18:28, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Hey, Jim. Thanks for weighing in. I took this article to FA a few months ago, where it was rigorously screened for academic comprehensiveness and whatnot. If there's one thing I learned from that ordeal, and from my experience on Wikipedia in general, it's that it is not our place to dictate academia. As a volunteer organization that draws its information from existing, trusted, and reputable research, it is the job of editors to compile said information in a manner that accurately reflects past and present academia, regardless of personal opinion. Whether Jewish history in regards to Edward I as a topic receives the attention it is due is neither here nor there, but I agree with my friend Ealdgyth in saying that this article probably isn't the best place to be inserting information this niche. Cheers, Unlimitedlead (talk) 19:38, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you; perhaps the point is though that a significant strand of academic thought about Edward I (and this period in general) thinks the balance being struck is really off beam? Would it help if I set out who thinks this, why, and what they believe the significance of this imbalance is? For example: Edward I chose the
Edict of expulsion of the Jewry; a deliberate insult. This isn't generally highlighted in most accounts, and hasn't made its way into the article here, perhaps as a result. One has to ask why historians miss their inflammatory and derogatory significance, and the contention of historians studying the Jewish community is that their is an underlying reluctance of English academia to address the anti-semitism of Edward I and others. They also contend that it isn't correct to see the Jewish community's experience in this period as in some way a niche issue, given the precedents that English treatment of the Jewish community set (first national expulsion of Jewry, creation of the blood libel myth, etc). If Wikipedia is trying to summarise the balance of opinion of academia, then wouldn't Wikipedia's policies expect the historians who feel that balance is off kilter to have their views reflected, if they are a significant group with a particular consensus? Jim Killock (talk) 21:46, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
WP:UNDUE is still the guiding principle here. We are an encyclopedia, not a book-length treatment of Edward's reign. Ealdgyth (talk) 22:12, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply
]
Thank you, that's helpful, that seems to give guidance that minority views should be given some (but not equal) weight if they exist and are significant ("'Wikipedia aims to present competing views in proportion to their representation in reliable sources on the subject"). So would it be helpful if I set out what has been said about these questions by historians looking at the relevance and impact of Edward's Jewish policies in broad terms and by whom, and their explanations for these points not being discussed by their colleagues working on Edward I in other contexts, in order to assess what kind of weight that might be given? Jim Killock (talk) 23:01, 26 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
In order to hopefully constructively explain what this gap is, I've added a Historiography section to the (separate) dedicated page on the History of the Jews in England (1066–1290), explaining the long standing neglect of Jewish issues in most mainstream medieval accounts of the period. I've referenced three or four major luminaries of Jewish History complaining about this gap between the work in their field and how it is frequently ignored in mainstream works detailing the period. I've also provided references where this group of historians asserts the importance of these issues, both from a contemporaneous ("vital to an understanding of the political and social history of the region") and modern perspective ("it often seems that the treatment of their Jewish minorities by Edward I, Philip the Fair, and los reyes catolicos, much as those monarchs would have been disconcerted by the thought, is more 'relevant' to our own problems than any other feature of their respective reigns" or: "To explain what Hitler had done, scholars found they had to rewrite sections of earlier history").
It's also worth noting that Prestwich biography of Edward I, which is the main source quoted in this article, comes under particular criticism for his neglect of these issues by Richmond:

even the expulsion itself is fleetingly dealt with in Michael Prestwich's Edward the First, published in 1988. In a text of 567 pages the Jews get less than three. It is also evident that, however pressing were the financial circumstances, it was Edward's 'sincere religious bigotry' which impelled him to expel the Jews in 1290. Despite this, in a paper by Professor Prestwich entitled 'The Piety of Edward I', there is no mention of the Expulsion. One's suspicions that these omissions are more than simple negligence are deepened by some of the little Professor Prestwich has to say on Jewish topics in Edward the First. He writes, for example, that (and the italics are mine) 'there were stories of ritual child-murder and torture, which, although they now appear groundless on the basis of the recorded evidence, were generally believed' , and that 'the expulsion itself went surprisingly smoothly, and was not the occasion for massacres, as it might well have been'. (Colin Richmond (1992). "Englishness and Medieval Anglo-Jewry". In Kushner, Tony (ed.). The Jewish Heritage in British History. Frank Cass. pp. 42–59.

.)

I'll probably keep working up the page on English medieval Jewish history (and the Edict of Expulsion page) so the general points are there to draw on later, but I'm hoping this is enough to open a conversation about what might be missing in this otherwise very erudite article. Jim Killock (talk) 13:05, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
As others have commented, this is the general article on Edward, covering his entire reign, and too much detail on one issue may be undue. One option would be to do a new article, covering the expulsion of the Jews by Edward as a specific issue, which then could be linked to the main bio article. That would allow for a more detailed explanation both of the history and the historiography of the issue. Mr Serjeant Buzfuz (talk) 13:37, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It's not that a huge amount of material needs to be added, but some key points are missing.
For instance:
AIUI @
WP:UNDUE, the vast consensus from historians of medieval Anglo-Jewish history would allow for this to be added ("Wikipedia aims to present competing views in proportion to their representation in reliable sources on the subject"). Jim Killock (talk) 16:47, 3 January 2024 (UTC)[reply
]
Meantime, while the above items still need looking at, I've taken Edict of Expulsion through a GA review so that we have a longer version of Edward's actions and the consequences of them to compare with.
I've also edited and sourced the material for his wife Eleanor of Castile. This explains a lot of the political anti-semitism.
I've also added details of the anti-Semitism in the church, to the articles for Bishops
Little Saint Hugh Blood iibel including through the series of monuments known as the Eleanor crosses
. These are useful background for understanding quite how deep the anti-Semitic feeling was among England's political and religious leaders, and landed classes, and Edward's clear association with it.
I don't wish to be a disruptive editor on this page, so what I would propose is that I make some minor corrections as outlined above, for instance regarding loans and unpopularity, and whether the expulsion was precendented or not.
Where more detail is needed, I propose I first add the information as efn footnotes. Then the editors can think about what information ought to be presented in the main text. Jim Killock (talk) 10:34, 4 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I went ahead and edited the sections, making the corrections noted, and adding a couple of important points, such as what happened to those expelled; and Edward's sponsorship of a blood libel cult as part of his post expulsion propaganda. Overall, this has increased the section from 163 to 387 words. I have added a further 143 words at the Legacy section to reflect the opinions of Edward from researchers looking at Anglo-Jewish history, and of English antisemitism in the following centuries.
In comparison, the Henry III of England article, which is also a FA, has 600 words on his Jewish policies in a devoted section, with plenty of further mentions in the sections on the Baron's War and relations with Parliament. (It is perhaps missing some information in the assessment section.)
Given that Edward's impact on the history of English and European antisemitism is arguably greater than that of Henry III, and that these topics are clearly important from a modern perspective, and that there is a very active academic field studying it, I feel these changes are quite proportionate.
Apologies however for editing quickly and directly, if this has caused anyone any issues or worries. Jim Killock (talk) 21:47, 4 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As a PS, I did a quick check on what sub-pages are getting traffic, linked from this article. Edict of Expulsion and Eleanor of Castile are at the top, wih about 10% of the traffic each, as a rough guide as to what people may be looking for on this page. I know that isn't the same as following the sources regarding the content. Jim Killock (talk) 21:56, 6 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image of "Eleanor and Edward"

As noted on Eleanor of Castile, the statue featured at File:Edward I of England and Eleanor of Castile, Lincoln Cathedral.jpg was missing its heads and renovated in the nineteenth century. It would seem that it is not at all certain that it was originally meant to be of Eleanor and Edward, I've found references to the restoration and its controversy, but nothing to say that when it was remodelled, the intention was to depict Eleanor and Edward (which everyone seems to accept!). If kept, it should probably explain that the heads are nineteenth century conjectures made on the assumption that the statues were intended to be of the pair. Jim Killock (talk) 23:07, 4 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Other things that are missing from this article

Hi there, having spent some time reading this article thoroughly now, I think there are some fairly important omissions from it. Most would not require major fixes, but given this has a FA status I do think they need addressing. (There may be other issues, but these are the ones I am able to spot.) Most importantly:

  • Legacy section: While Scottish historians' views of Edward are discussed, Welsh ones are not. Edward is typically seen by Welsh medievalists as a coloniser, someone who did immense damage to Welsh society, culture and self-confidence, which produced a lasting anger. Something of this needs capturing. He has also been said to have been prejudiced against Britons (eg, the Welsh speakers of Wales and Scotland). The sentence included from Marc Morris doesn't touch on these points; even if domination is considered inevitable, that wouldn't preclude an assessment of Edward's methods or resulting reputation.
  • Ireland: Ireland is not covered in the article at all, except to mention he governed it and it provided him income. Irish historians will have something to say on him, even if he governed at a distance. Did he represent continuity or change in the process of England's colonisation of Ireland? Their assessment may need a mention in Legacy also.

These may be less urgent but would round out the article:

  • Religious views: I'm not sure this fully captures the nature of his devotion. It covers his piety as actions, rather than as a belief system. There is commentary about his and Eleanor's piety giving them a sense that they were doing God's work, which makes sense as Crusaders, and explains better his sense of certainty while doing morally reprehensible things.
  • Relations with Eleanor: particularly, the support of and the psychological impact of the loss of Eleanor and some of his key advisors around 1290 is often held to have impacted the latter part of his reign. This doesn't seem to be discussed. Likewise, he encouraged her to accumulate land wealth to reduce the call on his own funds, which was an important change for future queens but impacted a lot on domestic relations with the landed classes who were being dispossessed; it limited what he could do with taxation and was a driver in his policies towards the Jews. I've touched on this but it could do with discussion earlier.

Overall, I think several of these topics (and the related omissions on his Jewish policies) shows the danger of relying largely on historical biographies to construct a rounded picture of the subject. Other groups of historians have important views also, and are likely to express these in their own literatures, while biographies of English Kings will be written primarily from an English perspective focused on questions of English good governance and creating the foundations of the English nation. There's a temptation for the authors to hero worship, and to avoid or downplay difficult topics. For Wikipedia to reach a rounded and representative view as seen by all reliable sources, it is necessary to look for these other perspectives in their own literatures. Jim Killock (talk) 12:04, 6 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding next steps:
  • There are some good sources for Edward I and Wales, the period being a major topic of scholarship unsurprisingly. I have a 1988 textbook "Edward I and Wales" which covers many of the points. There is also in the references "The Age of Conquest: Wales 1063-1415" by RR Davies from 2001, and of course "Hanes Cymru" also in translation (A History of Wales). I note these were not found or considered in the FAC review although the question was brought up.
  • Similarly there are some good texts regarding Ireland and Edward I, although I am not familiar with this period of Irish history at all. The first place to look appears to be "A new history of Ireland Volume II 1169-1534", which contains a dedicated chapter on Edward's Lordship, "The years of Crisis, 1254-1315" and a further chapter on the wars that were provoked in the period "A Land of War", both by James Lydon. There is by Robin Frame, "Ireland and Britain 1170 to 1450", and other works that may be of relevance. The themes from Lydon appear to be: the early takeover by Edward and some squabbling with his father; Edward treating Ireland as a revenue source and little else; corruption and incompetence in the administrators Edward appointed and repeatedly sacked; over-taxation to meet his war demands; speculation over food exports during the Welsh and Gascon wars; problems emerging from the Edwardian weak administration including a revival of the fortunes of the Gaelic areas' leadership, leading to regular wars in the period and following centuries. So not a very pretty record, and one that has parallels in Wales in terms of the methods of government.
I can probably do the section on Wales without too much risk of serious error, but it's harder for me to approach the Irish history texts without some help and review. It seems to me that it may be sensible to take the article back through a FA Review, especially as there doesn't seem to be much interest here in making further changes, and I understand that @Unlimitedlead is in semi-retirement. External review would also mean that any changes I suggest or make regarding Wales or the prior changes regarding Anglo-Jewish history and anti-semitism got some oversight; likewise anything done on religious views etc. Jim Killock (talk) 21:28, 9 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We already have the article Conquest of Wales by Edward I. Why would we need a dedicated section here? Dimadick (talk) 23:28, 9 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the lack of clarity.[1] I mean, the missing observations regarding Edward's legacy in Wales as is missing at the section Edward I of England#Legacy. See above, (The sentence included from Marc Morris doesn't touch on these points; even if domination is considered inevitable, that wouldn't preclude an assessment of Edward's methods or resulting reputation.) and also at FAC review ("Do we have information about Welsh historians' view of Edward?"; "As far as I am aware, there are no authoritative works on Edward I written from a Welsh perspective") which as I hope you can see, is not the case.
[1] NB: there is a section Edward I of England#Conquest of Wales.
Jim Killock (talk) 00:09, 10 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've posted a short review of reviews of Edward I at Michael Prestwich#Biography of Edward I. Fairly similar criticisms could be made of this article, which I think was largely based on it, looking at the citations. While the reviews are complementary about his scholarship, they frequently observe an imbalance of subject matter. Other than the aspects listed above, these include:
  • Over-sympathetic treatment of his decisions, underplaying his mistakes and excusing his inconsistency and promise-breaking
  • Lack of attention to Edward's impact on Wales and Scotland (not just legacy judgements, but actions and results)
  • Inattention to the military tactics used
  • Lack of attention to social and religious aspects
  • Not consulting French language sources regarding Edward and Gascony
The reviews also raise an interesting question about the moral standards by which to judge Edward. On the one hand, he did what he felt he needed to do to be a strong and successful leader; on the other, his contemporaries knew and understood concepts like mercy, forgiveness and cruelty. This could be discussed in the legacy section.
These should be added to the things to look at during an FA review. Jim Killock (talk) 17:51, 13 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

FA review

Hi all, as mentioned above, I've put the page in for FA review so we can take another look at Welsh and Irish scholarship on Edward I, and perhaps review what is there about Scotland, Eleanor and a few other matters. I hope to put some work into this myself but especially given the lack of response or active editors here feel that I need some guidance making edits in these areas, some of which are less familiar to me. Jim Killock (talk) 07:52, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've added possible material from Welsh scholarship to the review for checking, if anyone wants to take a look. Jim Killock (talk) 14:20, 17 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]