Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Log/2008 November 11

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(WOO HOO! EDIT CONFLICT) Earlier in this deletion review, three editors asked me separately to cast a vote. I declined this suggestion and decided to recuse myself instead, since any Keep vote from me would naturally invite the retort, "Well, you would say that, wouldn't you?" However, I do wish to make a recommendation now. But first, some comments. Some of the criticisms in this review have been of questionable utility:

  • "there is naturally concerns about neutrality and what have you" -- hmmm.... what?
  • "article links two Jewish banking dynasties" -- in fact: Rothschilds Jewish, Bethmanns Lutherans
  • "you have written it in such a way that it is your work and would be difficult for others to change without having to rewrite the entire article" (in fact, every article on WP is open to arbitrary editing and rewriting, this one is no exception)
  • "no sources, including those mentioned here, have these families as a joint topic" -- in fact, numerous sources among those cited in the bibliography study the rivalry between the Houses of Bethmann and Rothschild in detail.

Holtfrerich in Frankfurt as a Financial Center refers to the Bethmanns 31 times and to the Rothschilds 30 times (Google Books preview); Corti in Rise of the House of Rothschild refers to the Bethmann 28 times (Google Books preview); Udo Heyn in Private Banking and Industrialization especially covers this topic, his book refers to Bethmanns 30 times and to Rothschilds 35 times, the rivalry between the two houses is addressed at several points including pp. 98, 109, 110, for example on p.98:

Foremost among the great private bankers in Frankfurt, the Gebrueder Bethmann opposed the Rothschilds throughout our entire period. From the early decades of the nineteenth century, the two kept clashing across the entire continent from Paris, Vienna and Berlin to Frankfurt and the German provinces...

(Google Books preview).

These three English-language sources are available online, which brings me to my next point. In

WP:OWNed
. If you do not live in Germany, you may not be able to get your hands on all the German books, but just the three above can serve as a juicy steak to sink your teeth into. I believe this conclusively takes care of questions of WP:NOTABILITY, WP:RELIABLE SOURCES, and WP:VERIFIABILITY.

Now, about WP:ORIGINAL RESEARCH, WP:TONE and WP:SYNTHESIS.

As to the first, full disclosure: I encountered Johann Philipp Freiherr von Bethmann (1924-2007) once and one of his sons attended the same high school as I. However, he was a grade ahead of me and we did not know each other at all well. I have not been in contact with any of the family since school days and in particular have not had any contact with them since I began writing these articles. What brought me to Wikipedia originally was the grotesque falsehoods promulgated by the author of a work of pseudohistory about, among numerous other topics, the Bethmann family (see my exchanges with that individual at Talk:The Jew of Linz#False claims about Jewish descent of the Bethmann family). In the course of that discussion, I decided to translate de:Bethmann (Familie) from the German Wikipedia, and having once begun, I discovered that I liked it and began writing some of my own articles. However, I am not employing any first-hand or privileged information whatsover but working solely from published secondary sources. I write without fear or favor and see no reason to suppress any information about skeletons in the Bethmann family closet that I encounter (see, for example, my footnote about the planned investment in the slave trade in the Johann Jakob Bethmann article.)

Next, the matter of WP:TONE. I realize that some of my descriptions of Simon Moritz von Bethmann (1768-1826) have been overly adulatory and hence stray from NPOV. In my defense, I would say that some historians describing him have likewise run afoul of that principle. Some historical personages are just bone evil, and others (like SMvB) are examples of humanity's finest. However, I realize that I went too far and have begun rewriting some of the descriptions. As to WP:SYNTHESIS, I am not aiming to develop a thesis here. My aim is to tell an exciting story but to tell it exclusively based on the already published accounts by reputable authors, without interference or embellishment. There is an element of complication because the Article combines two notable subjects into a single topic. However, there is precedent for that. Many dozens of Wikipedia articles are of the form "A and B", and some of them are highly rated. To see but a few examples, enter "Religion and" into the search box and see what comes up. Likewise for "Christianity and" or "Differences between". There even is an Article on the extremely contentious topic of Comparison of Windows and Linux that survived two AfD nominations. The trick in writing this kind of Article well, I think, is to avoid reduplication of content already in the "A" and the "B" article, and to limit oneself strictly to notable interaction between the two.

Finally, there is the question of the current condition of the article. I am well aware that there are many holes. Some of the sources I have yet to read, other sources that I read have yet to be worked into the Article. (I would hope that others join forces with me here.) The Article has been rated (not by me) as "C-Class", so that there is no danger of readers taking it as an example of the finest work that Wikipedia is capable of. Of course there is more work to be done, but that should not be a reason for deletion.

And that brings me to my recommendation. Based on what I wrote above, I recommend that the closing admin close this discussion not as a Keep/no consensus/delete, but by sending it back as a Dismiss to where it should be in the first place, namely the Article's Talk page, in line with

WP:ATD, which states:

The content issues should be discussed at the relevant talk page, and other methods of dispute resolution should be used first, such as listing on Wikipedia:Requests for comments for further input. Deletion discussions that are really unresolved content disputes may be closed by an administrator, and referred to the talk page or other appropriate forum.

--Goodmorningworld (talk) 13:59, 17 November 2008 (UTC)[reply

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Looks like you were three minutes too late for the AfD, however you can put all this at the talk page of the article so people see it.--Banime (talk) 14:02, 17 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]