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Criticism of Apple
missing/lacking?

Is there an equivalent criticism article for Apple, similar to

Criticism of Apple is simply a redirect to Apple Inc.? GobsPint (talk) 19:02, 28 April 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Through a series of page moves, the criticism section ended up at Apple supply chain. StreetcarEnjoyer (talk) 02:21, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I’ve retargeted the various criticism redirects back there. It seems one person changed all of them. The criticism page was moved to “Practices of Apple Inc.” then to “Apple supply chain”. StreetcarEnjoyer (talk) 02:34, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The only comprehensive discussion of criticism I see remaining are in Apple supply chain and that's not, for the most part, direct criticism of Apple. I remember Criticism of Apple Inc./Practices of Apple Inc. had some of this meat but this has been deleted so we can't see exactly what was pared out and by whom. I know there is more about Apple that has received criticism in reliable sources than issues related to supply chain. There is still a lead paragraph that mentions this but not much remaining in the body supporting it especially anti-competitive practices. Can we get some balance back into our coverage please? ~Kvng (talk) 19:13, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As per
Guy Harris (talk) 22:45, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Perhaps we should create a "Criticism" section, with subsections for supply chain practices and environmental impact, which would be short sections pointing to
Guy Harris (talk) 23:34, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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I suggest we start by undeleting Criticism of Apple Inc. As far as I can tell, there was never a deletion discussion. ~Kvng (talk) 14:28, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
It was discussed at
Guy Harris (talk) 23:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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@
astonishing place to direct readers interested in the topic. ~Kvng (talk) 14:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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It was a discussion that resulted in the deletion of "Criticism of Apple Inc." - which was not a criticism article; it was a redirect to
Guy Harris (talk) 17:26, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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The history of Criticism of Apple Inc. is visible at the present Apple supply chain, which was moved without redirect from Practices of Apple Inc.. See the diff of this page move ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 20:58, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Criticism of Apple Inc." was moved to "Practices of Apple Inc." with, as far as I know, a redirect. And "Practices of Apple Inc." was moved to Apple supply chain, but some redirect was created under the name "Practices of Apple Inc.", as "Practices of Apple Inc." was, like the redirect "Criticism of Apple Inc.", deleted after [Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 May 17#Practices of Apple Inc.|a discussion]].
I've recreated
Environmental impact of Apple ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 00:48, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks @Shushugah. Where did this material come from? Where can we see the original material you considered to be cruft or minute detail? ~Kvng (talk) 14:17, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Criticism about iPod design from 2006 or random blog about eco-packaging from a random year instead of a more thorough analysis of Apple’s eco practices would be two made up examples ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 19:04, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@
WP:CWW. Also it would be good to have a consensus on what material makes the cut and we can't do that if you're the only one with access to the source material. ~Kvng (talk) 23:03, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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I am not an admin and do not have any more or less access than you do. I recreated the article, without regard for what was there in the past. A fresh pair of eyes and assessing what would be relevant for a reader if we were to write this article from scratch. That said, the old history of Criticism of Apple Inc. is visible at the present Apple supply chain, which was moved without redirect from Practices of Apple Inc.. See the diff of this page move ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 23:11, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The history at Apple supply chain (no capital "s" in "supply") will show a bunch of history. See Talk:Apple Inc./Archive 10#Redirect to this page goes nowhere for a timeline as of 2024-01-25.

Summary:

(Do not assume from the current lack of a "Practices of Apple Inc." page that "Practices of Apple Inc." was renamed to Apple supply chain without a redirect; the redirect did exist at one point, otherwise a request to delete it would probably not have been made in the first place and, even if it were made, would have been shot down rather quickly as "there's nothing to delete!".)

So what questions remain? All of the moving of stuff out of the criticism/practices page are in the history of

Guy Harris (talk) 00:03, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Thanks @
WP:BLARed
and then the redirect deleted without considering its history. That turns out not to be the case. All questions resolved.
Shushugah's new article is a great start but it is 8K with 13 references while the old article was at one point 130K with 237 references. I suspect competent coverage lies somewhere between. We also should have a Criticism summary section in this article (Apple Inc.) with {{Main}} to Criticism of Apple Inc.. ~Kvng (talk) 02:50, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry that history was a bit hard for me to follow. Yeah, the bulk of it is 21 edits by User:DFlhb, moving stuff into other articles, along with two renames and removal of the redirects left behind by those renames.
I suspect competent coverage lies somewhere between. Not all of the topics in the old article are covered yet. There's nothing abut the often-criticized App Store policies, for example.
Guy Harris (talk) 03:11, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Even though there is lots more criticism to add, it looks off to a good start! It was hard to read the last time I saw it before the splits and eventual deletion. 173.217.111.76 (talk) 01:03, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I recall several discussions on moving criticism to relevant articles and balancing out coverage of Apple throughout our articles (to follow
WP:CSECTION), though those discussions are probably hard to find by now and I no longer care. DFlhb (talk) 13:35, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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It would be nice if someone who still cares would help us find those discussions.
WP:CSECTION contains a paragraph that I think applies here: In some situations the term "criticism" may be appropriate in an article or section title, for example, if there is a large body of critical material, and if independent secondary sources comment, analyze or discuss the critical material. ~Kvng (talk) 14:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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I found
WP:CRIT essay (by a now-indefinitely-blocked editor) and incomplete discussion about additional reorganization. User:DFlhb's core argument for the reorganization is that Criticism of Apple Inc. and similar articles become a dumping ground that overwhelms readers and editors and can't be fixed. ~Kvng (talk) 15:21, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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Semi-protected edit request on 30 April 2024

 
2600:8804:A80:60C0:C5AF:71FB:99CC:24CC (talk) 22:23, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
no Declined You have not specified what to be changed. Myrealnamm (💬talk · ✏️contribs) at 23:08, 30 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Criticism of Apple Inc." listed at Redirects for discussion

The redirect Criticism of Apple Inc. has been listed at redirects for discussion to determine whether its use and function meets the redirect guidelines. Readers of this page are welcome to comment on this redirect at Wikipedia:Redirects for discussion/Log/2024 May 17 § Criticism of Apple Inc. until a consensus is reached. InfiniteNexus (talk) 18:44, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

international business

a) For the chosen Fortune 500 company, identify the primary industry and the international operational network in which it operates. 106.214.125.61 (talk) 08:01, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, we cannot do your homework for you. Have a read at
Apple and unions for the economics of Apple. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 13:36, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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History section

This section is way too long, especially considering that a sub-article History of Apple Inc. exists 68.133.31.122 (talk) 16:07, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Concur. This is why I strongly oppose splitting history sections from main articles, because WP editors rarely take the time to synchronize edits between the two. The result is that the history section in the main article then either fails to accurately summarize the history article or, as occurred in this case, the history section becomes way too detailed. --Coolcaesar (talk) 07:21, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 23 June 2024

I would like to add that Apple was founded in 1976 and incorporated in 1977. It was founded as a business partnership, but after beign incorporated, it became a corporation. CSZS129 (talk) 09:23, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Charliehdb (talk) 10:03, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
here is the information from Apple's official website under "Apple Corporate Info":
[1]https://investor.apple.com/faq/default.aspx
This clearly states that Apple was incorporated on January 3, 1977 in California.
CSZS129 (talk) 19:41, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So, just as User:Charliehdb said, given that, as of 2024-06-21, two days before your edit request, the article says, in the third paragraph:

Apple was founded as Apple Computer Company on April 1, 1976, to produce and market Steve Wozniak's Apple I personal computer. The company was incorporated by Wozniak and Steve Jobs in 1977.

and says, in the "1976–1980: Founding and incorporation" section:

Apple Computer Company was founded on April 1, 1976, by Steve Jobs, Steve Wozniak, and Ronald Wayne as a partnership.

and

Apple Computer, Inc. was incorporated on January 3, 1977, ...

what is it that needs to be edited? Repeating information that was in the article before the edit request was made does not answer that question.
Guy Harris (talk) 02:18, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply
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