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Snow Bowl (1985)
- ... that the Tampa Bay Buccaneers players wore white uniforms during a snowy NFL game, which made them extremely difficult for their quarterback to see?
- Source: USAToday.com
- Reviewed: Dreamtime (climb)
« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:38, 11 June 2024 (UTC).
- Looks great. QPQ done, sourcing good, no copyvios, no image issues. Length is good for both article and hook. New enough. Hook is interesting, but I did tweak the sentence it comes from. Good to go! ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:04, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Na O-mi
- ... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by "I Dream of Naomi" by the Israeli duo Hedva and David?
- ALT1: ... that South Korean actress Na O-mi was cast by Shin Seong-il after placing second at a pageant that he judged? Source: http://www.cine21.com/news/view/?mag_id=22004
- Reviewed:
- Comment: The citation for the first hook doesn't actually mention the name "Hedva and David", but it does say "the name Naomi comes from the hit song 'Naomi in a Dream,' sung by an Israeli mixed duet at the time." (Of course, I'm translating this from Korean, so the title won't match up 100%, but 꿈속의 나오미 is what the song was titled in Korea) Also I could cut the "South" in South Korean if it's obvious enough she's not from the North.
Wuju Daisuki (talk) 16:54, 11 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Korean-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. I strongly prefer the original hook over ALT1. I do not think that the lack of an explicit mention of the Israeli duo's name in the original Korean source is a significant problem. If the promoter does deem it so, however, the hook could be reworded like so:
- "... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by the song 'I Dream of Naomi'?"
I also added "the song" and "singing duo" to the original hook for clarity's sake.
- "... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by the song "I Dream of Naomi" by Israeli singing duo Hedva and David?"
I hope this nomination succeeds. Yue🌙 21:50, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Yue I think the modified version you listed here (not the one you modified for clarity on the top, I think that one is too wordy) is nice to me. I also re-added the filmography. Wuju Daisuki (talk) 17:00, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
1940 NFL All-Star Game (January)
- ... that all of the players on the Green Bay Packers were selected for the 1940 NFL All-Star Game?
- Source: PFR.com
- Reviewed: Traverse (climbing)
« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:33, 11 June 2024 (UTC).
- As a Lions fan, am I allowed to just reject this outright? (kidding) Article is new enough, long enough, and well sourced. Earwig appears to be down, but a spot check of sources showed no issues. QPQ done. Hook is interesting, but I worry that in going for "hookiness" it might go too far towards being misleading. The Packers were one of the teams in the game, but is that the same as the players being "selected" for the game, as those for the actual all-star team were? What about wording it something closer to
- ALT1: ... that the entire Green Bay Packers team was chosen to play in the 1940 NFL All-Star Game?
- @Gonzo fan2007: What do you think of this? It's still "hooky" while hewing a little closer to fact, in my opinion. But despite my joke earlier, I'm not deliberately trying to be difficult and am open to other suggestions. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 23:27, 12 June 2024 (UTC)]
- DrOrinScrivello, that actually was going to be my original hook, but then I questioned whether "played" was factually correct. There aren't a lot of great sources for an 84 year old game, and I can't be certain that every player actually "played" (there were at least 2 injuries for Packers players noted before the game). "Select" is kind of the word used by the NFL for being chosen to the Pro Bowl and is consistent with List of Green Bay Packers Pro Bowl selections. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:33, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- All that to say I don't really mind either ALT if you think ALT1 is fine. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:36, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that "select" is what you usually expect to see in most Pro Bowl situations, but it seems to me that on this particular occasion the players themselves weren't "selected" per se. Maybe a way to get around the "play" issue would be to say,
- ALT1b: ... that the entire Green Bay Packers team was chosen to compete in the 1940 NFL All-Star Game?
- I think this is mostly hair splitting, though, and would not argue if the promoter choses any of the three options. Assuming my suggestions didn't alter the original enough for this to be considered approving my own hook (in which case I'm fine with another reviewer being requested), I think this is good to go. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 23:53, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that "select" is what you usually expect to see in most Pro Bowl situations, but it seems to me that on this particular occasion the players themselves weren't "selected" per se. Maybe a way to get around the "play" issue would be to say,
) 14:06, June 18, 2024 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the Green Bay Packers once defeated a team of all-stars chosen from the rest of the league? DrOrinScrivello, are you satisfied with this hook? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 13:56, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- I am. I know it's not quite what you wanted, but I think this is still an interesting hook and at least your good work on the article will still get featured. ALT2 is good to go. DrOrinScrivello (talk) 14:20, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Nederlandsche Kultuurkamer
- ... that, of the three presidents of the Chamber of Dutch Culture, two were arrested and one was assassinated? Source: Goedewaagen arrested: "Dr. T. (Tobie) Goedewaagen" (in Dutch). Parlementair Documentatie Centrum. Archived from the original on 10 January 2023. Retrieved 11 June 2024.; Reydon assassinated: "Mr. H. Reydon Overleden" [Mr. H. Reydon Dies]. Nieuwsblad van het Noorden (in Dutch). Groningen. 25 August 1943. p. 1.; De Ranitz arrested: "Jhr.Mr. S.M.S. de Ranitz" (in Dutch). Parlementair Documentatie Centrum. Archived from the original on 27 January 2022. Retrieved 11 June 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the ISBN 9789060125502.
- ALT2: ... that the poet Adriaan Roland Holst wrote that he would greatly appreciate the disapproval of the Chamber of Dutch Culture? Source: "Kultuurkamer – Kunst en Cultuur in de Tweede Wereldoorlog" [The Kultuurkamer – Art and Culture in the Second World War]. Historiek (in Dutch). 6 October 2022.
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:44, 12 June 2024 (UTC).
- Approving all hooks on good faith. Article is long enough and created day before DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. All hooks are interesting and sourced, though in Dutch. QPQ done. Good to go, thank you for your nomination Chris Woodrich! Kimikel (talk) 19:36, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
J. D. Arteaga
- ... that J. D. Arteaga, best friend of Alex Rodriguez, did not foresee Rodriguez's talent?
- ALT1: ... that J. D. Arteaga is friends with both a prolific New York Yankee and Boston Red Sock?
- Reviewed:
TarheelBornBred (talk) 16:34, 12 June 2024 (UTC).
- @TarheelBornBred: Article is long enough and created same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copy-vio free. No QPQ needed. Hook-wise, I prefer ALT0, although I would edit it for contextual sake, and to better reflect the article's content:
- ALT2: ... that J. D. Arteaga, a close friend of MLB All-Star Alex Rodriguez, did not foresee Rodriguez's talent?
- Please let me know your thoughts. Kimikel (talk) 03:00, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Your version of the hook sounds fine to me; I'm more than willing to submit the article under your revised hook. TarheelBornBred (talk) 01:53, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approving ALT2. All good to go, thank you TarheelBornBred! Kimikel (talk) 14:48, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
How to Be Perfect
- ... that in his book How to Be Perfect, Michael Schur sought to "wade into some deeply confusing and painful applications of moral philosophy ... but in a fun way"?
- Source: "...Schur makes good on his promise to 'wade into some deeply confusing and painful applications of moral philosophy, stretching and straining and chewing on really tough questions that plague us in our daily lives, that cause us anxiety and anguish and often lead to loud arguments with our closest friends and family. But in a fun way!'" Kirkus Reviews
- Source: "Down to the musical cues and audio cast (which includes the actors Ted Danson, Kristen Bell, Manny Jacinto, and Jameela Jamil), How to Be Perfect could be considered a companion piece to the author's recent hit, The Good Place." Modak, Sebastian. The New York Times Book Review. March 13, 2022. pg 9.
DrOrinScrivello (talk) 13:47, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
- Approving both hooks, with preference to ALT0. Article is long enough and moved to mainspace 2 days before DYK submission. Article is presentable and copyvio-free; if possible, I would recommend adding URLs for the sources that don't have them. Hooks are interesting and sourced well; I think ALT0 is more interesting. QPQ done. Other than that, nothing to comment. Thank you for your submission DrOrinScrivello! Kimikel (talk) 02:33, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Music Sounds Better with You
- ... that the vocalist on the dance song "Music Sounds Better with You" was in a punk band that disapproved of his collaboration with electronic musicians?
- ALT1: ... that Thomas Bangalter declined an offer of over $3 million from Virgin Records to make a Stardust album after the success of their song "Music Sounds Better with You"?
lunaeclipse (talk) 21:33, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Since I am a relatively new user (est Dec2023), I am not sure if ALT0 violates NPOV. But regardless, I prefer ALT1 JuniperChill (talk) 22:08, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Tobie Goedewaagen
- ... that Tobie Goedewaagen (pictured), a minister under the Nazi occupation government, fled the Netherlands with his belongings in a bedspread?
- Source: "Dr. T. (Tobie) Goedewaagen" (in Dutch). Parlementair Documentatie Centrum. Archived from the original on 10 January 2023. Retrieved 11 June 2024.
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 668 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.— Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:19, 12 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: I am assuming in good faith that the Dutch refs adequately support the text and that there is no plagiarism. I've done a general search myself as to the subject of the bio in English sources. There were some deletions made to the article of the word Nazi here; restoring the word would help make this properly neutral in accuracy, and I would be happy then to pass this final item of the qpq. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:FD8F:5C17:CABB:9E61 (talk) 20:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
@DYK admins: I started working on this, but my comments so far are not showing up .. am I doing something wrong in format? 2603:7000:2101:AA00:FD8F:5C17:CABB:9E61 (talk) 20:29, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- gotta have the status field filled in :) theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 21:00, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
- Hi 2603. I've moved "Nazi" back in front of "German occupation". — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:16, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. Looks good. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:900D:526B:7A29:78AD (talk) 02:06, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Harriette Cooke
- ... that Cornell College professor Harriette Cooke started the Cornell’s Ladies Battalion in 1889, and the women held drills in skirted uniforms while using wooden wands in the place of rifles?
- Source: Rexroat, Dee Ann (February 17, 2021). "Pioneering women: The top moments in women's history at Cornell College". Cornell College News Center. Retrieved June 13, 2024.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/List of historic places in Gore District
- Comment: The DYK check is wrong when it says that the article has not been expanded at least 5x. It was 810 characters of prose prior to expansion, and it is now 4,059 characters of prose. 810 times 5 is 4,050.
SL93 (talk) 09:40, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
- If the hook must be independent of the subject, I have -
- ALT1 ... that Cornell College professor Harriette Cooke was also a deaconess? SL93 (talk) 01:10, 26 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approving ALT1. Article is long enough and 5x expanded on the day of DYK submission. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. QPQ done. Both hooks are interesting and sourced; however, I feel ALT0 is a little verbose and could be worded in a way that flowed better. Other than that, all good to go. Thank you for the nomination SL93! Kimikel (talk) 19:49, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Shirt (song)
- ... that fans on TikTok were behind the name choice for one of SZA's singles?
- Source: American Songwriter: "Surfacing in 2020 on Instagram, the song gained traction on TikTok and became a viral soundbite. It soundtracked a popular dance craze on the platform and fans gave the tune its name."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Album covers of Blue Note Records
- Comment: Open to alternative hook suggestions.
PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 01:26, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
- Approving nomination. QPQ done. Article is long enough and passed GA review 7 days before nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced and copyvio-free. Hook is interesting and well-sourced. Thank you for the submission PSA! Kimikel (talk) 18:38, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Ghost in the Machine (song)
- ... that one critic interpreted a SZA song as being about her fears about the growing influence of AI in the music industry?
- Source: American Songwriter: " For most of the track, SZA smoothly croons about the disheartening taste in the music industry. As she notices the growing influence of artificial intelligence on the pop landscape, evident in the Robot got future, I don't lyric, she looks to her lover to distract her from her worrisome reality."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/WRLH (New Hampshire)
- Comment: Open to hook suggestions.
PSA 🏕️🪐 (please make some noise...) 01:35, 20 June 2024 (UTC).
- @PSA and Dylan620: Please provide a QPQ. Z1720 (talk) 15:57, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Z1720: D'oh! Apologies for the oversight and thank you for catching that – I've added an older review of mine as a QPQ. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 16:31, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Approving nomination. Article is long enough and passed GA review 7 days prior to DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copy-vio free. The hook is interesting and sourced well. QPQ is done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for the submission PSA and Dylan620! Kimikel (talk) 03:48, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Narragansett Pier Railroad
- ... that owners of the Narragansett Pier Railroad included a family of industrialists, a dentist, a systems analyst, a lumberyard, and the founder of Textron? Source: A Short Haul to the Bay: A History of the Narragansett Pier Railroad by James N. J. Henwood. Dentist supported by [1] Bangor Daily News, December 28, 1979, page 2.
Trainsandotherthings (talk) 20:10, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
- Approving on good faith. Article is long enough and promoted to GA four days before DYK nom. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. Hook is interesting, source is acceptable on good faith. Image meets criteria. QPQ done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for your nomination Trainsandotherthings! Kimikel (talk) 03:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- File:Narragansett Pier Railroad 11.jpg is a technically superior image; if we run an image, I strongly suggest we use that instead. On the other hand, while both images are marked CC-BY-SA-4.0 on the https://provlibdigital.org/ site where they came from, I have my doubts as to whether that's legitimate. @Trainsandotherthings and Nikkimaria:. RoySmith (talk) 20:55, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Mindustry
- ... that the real-time strategy, tower defense and factory management game Mindustry (pictured) is freely licensed under the GPLv3?
- Source: From article. For license see license from repo; for rest, see Bolding, Jonathan (December 5, 2020). "The factory-building tower defense of Mindustry gets a huge 6.0 update". PC Gamer. Archived from the original on April 2, 2023. Retrieved June 10, 2023.
jp×g🗯️ 01:26, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
- I had to add the '(pictured)' to the hook as required. Other than that its good for DYK. New enough, long enough, no copyvio, QPQ done. JuniperChill (talk) 22:25, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Chicken of Tomorrow Contest
- ... that most broiler chickens around the world descend from the 1948 winners of the Chicken of Tomorrow Contest?
- Source: "rbor Acres White Rocks’ white feathered birds beat the competition in the purebred category, but Red Cornish crosses from the Vantress Hatchery definitely outperformed them. And as it happens, those two breeds would eventually be crossed and become the Arbor Acre breed – whose genetics now dominate poultry farms worldwide."
"Before long, Arbor Acre’s parent stock had supplied all the major broiler companies in America."
Modern FarmerThriley (talk) 02:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC).
- Review underway... Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 15:46, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Newly created in mainspace on 13 June, the day of nomination, by moving from Draftspace.
- Length is acceptable, at just over 2,000 bytes. Correctly rated Start-class.
- No obvious close paraphrasing or copyvio noted in spot-checks of sources, but I tweaked a couple of phrases which could have been considered too close to the source.
- The image is PD because copyright has expired. If used, the hook would need to have something like (White Rock chicken pictured) appended. It is used in the article, so no issues there.
- Sourcing and referencing is fine: everything is referenced, and to decent-quality sources.
- No issues with neutrality, POV etc.
- The hook fact is sourced and interesting – in fact quite remarkable. Length of the hook is fine.
- QPQ review has been done.
An interesting story. Verified and good to go. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 19:11, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Sebastiaan Matheus Sigismund de Ranitz (1901–1987)
- ... that the Dutch Nazi collaborator Sebastiaan de Ranitz was defended at the Special Court of Justice by his nephew?
- Source: "Tegen Jhr. de Ranitz Negen Jaar Geëist" [For Jhr. de Ranitz Nine Years Demanded]. Trouw (in Dutch). Amsterdam. 16 December 1948. p. 3.
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 20:44, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
- Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 07:13, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492 and Cunard: Question: how do we know he was defended by a nephew? The translated source says
The defender, Mr. H. de Ranitz, cousin of the suspect
Bruxton (talk) 18:33, 21 June 2024 (UTC)- @Cunard and Bruxton: Looking into it, neef is one of those lovely words that mean two completely different things (nephew or cousin, even the Dutch Wikipedia page is basically a dab). Without more on his family, "relative" is the best we can do. How about ALT1 ... that the Nazi collaborator Sebastiaan de Ranitz abandoned his office following Mad Tuesday, leaving his department in turmoil?
- That's supported by both Wesselink, Claartje (2014). Kunstenaars van de Kultuurkamer: Geschiedenis en Herinnering [Artists of the Kultuurkamer: History and Memory]. Bert Baker. and the PDC. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 10:52, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
- Verified that the hook is sourced in the article and is interesting. The article notes: "Claims that Breda had been liberated were broadcast on 5 September, leading many Nazis to flee the Netherlands for Germany. De Ranitz left the Hague for the Kultuurkamer's regional office in Groningen, and though work continued, his absence caused the institution and its parent department great difficulty."
"were broadcast" links to Dolle Dinsdag, which is Mad Tuesday. Cunard (talk) 08:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- I cannot find the hook in the article. Bruxton (talk) 20:40, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- It was in the sentence Cunard quoted. I have explicitly used the phrase "Mad Tuesday" after 5 September. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:45, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- I cannot find the hook in the article. Bruxton (talk) 20:40, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
- Verified that the hook is sourced in the article and is interesting. The article notes: "Claims that Breda had been liberated were broadcast on 5 September, leading many Nazis to flee the Netherlands for Germany. De Ranitz left the Hague for the Kultuurkamer's regional office in Groningen, and though work continued, his absence caused the institution and its parent department great difficulty."
- @Crisco 1492 and Cunard: Question: how do we know he was defended by a nephew? The translated source says
Beijing Watermelon
- ... that plans to shoot the Beijing-set portions of the 1989 Japanese film Beijing Watermelon were cancelled after the Tiananmen Square protests and massacre occurred mid-production?
- Source: 1
Morgan695 (talk) 18:23, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
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QPQ: - Not yet complete
Overall: Nominator still needs to complete QPQ, but otherwise it looks good. It might be good to add in the Production and release section that it had a theatrical re-release in 2024, distributed by Kani Releasing. AdJHu 胡 00:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @AdJHu: QPQ has been completed. Morgan695 (talk) 17:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- QPQ has been completed, so I'd say this is good to go. AdJHu 胡 17:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Pigeon statues in Wellington
- ... that after a pigeon sculpture in Wellington went missing, members of the public created a shrine for it?
- ALT: ... that after a pigeon sculpture in Wellington went missing, people of the city created a memorial for it?
- ALT2: ... that people in Wellington mourned for a missing pigeon sculpture in Reddit by creating a memorial for it?
―Panamitsu (talk) 08:36, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
- This is indeed a very interesting article and the hook is also interesting. The source is notable and I don't see any issue in the article. The main issue is the hook itself. The hook is telling us that people built a shrine after the statue was stolen. But what the source given for it says is slightly different. The news article says "On Reddit, Wellingtonians mourned Cub St’s missing bird by laying flowers and candles at its former perch". It is not even a shrine. The reporter didn’t call it a shrine, the reddit post calls it a shrine and we shouldn’t take the reddit as the reliable source. So @Panamitsu: you need to edit the hook a little bit. Or you can propose alternative hook. Or search for sources directly mentioned it as a shrine. Then ping me and I continue my review. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 13:20, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Mehedi Abedin: The source shows a Reddit post saying "Someone's set up a shrine for the missing pigeon". I've also looked up shrine in the Oxford dictionary, which says "a place associated with or containing memorabilia of a particular revered person or thing", so I personally think that it is fine to call it a shrine even if the source doesn't (directly) say it. What do you think? ―Panamitsu (talk) 01:43, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Panamitsu: Well I guess we don't have to be so perfect. Although I think that using the word "memorial" would be better. By the way, I am gonna pass this hook anyway. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 03:05, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Mehedi Abedin: The source shows a Reddit post saying "Someone's set up a shrine for the missing pigeon". I've also looked up shrine in the Oxford dictionary, which says "a place associated with or containing memorabilia of a particular revered person or thing", so I personally think that it is fine to call it a shrine even if the source doesn't (directly) say it. What do you think? ―Panamitsu (talk) 01:43, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: The hook is good to go. However if the promoter has any issue with the word "shrine" then they can replace it with "memorial". I am going to add ALT hooks here in case any other issue occurs. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 03:09, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Luna (Feid and ATL Jacob song)
- ... that the Colombian singer Feid collaborated for the second time with an American hip hop producer in "Luna", and it was called "an effort to take the genre to the global level"?
- Source: "Feid le regaló al público un nuevo EP por fin de año: «FERXXOCALIPSIS»". Billboard Argentina (in Spanish). 2023-12-01. Retrieved 2024-06-13.
Santi (talk) 04:48, 13 June 2024 (UTC).
- Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 16:26, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Nom is three days after GA promotion, passed a GA review, all good. ミラP@Miraclepine 16:33, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: Would it be appropiate if we change the ALT due to the performance at the 2024 Copa América? Santi (talk) 04:36, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Pollosito: Actually, you're supposed to add an ALT1 separate from the original ALT0. Once you do that, I'll decide whether to approve and which one is preferred. ミラP@Miraclepine 19:37, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: That's what I meant, only for me adding another alt and having it approved is equivalent to changing it in some way. I'm sorry for making you think I was literally going to change what's above. Well, here it goes:
ALT1: ... that the Colombian singer Feid performed "Luna" as the only song at the 2024 Copa América opening ceremony, but there were several technical issues in the transmission? Santi (talk) 20:24, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Pollosito: I've checked the sourcing in the new additions, and they're in accordance with DYK guidelines. Hence, I Approve ALT1, which I prefer more. ミラP@Miraclepine 20:56, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: Then the hook is ready now. Thanks for picking this! Santi (talk) 21:20, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: That's what I meant, only for me adding another alt and having it approved is equivalent to changing it in some way. I'm sorry for making you think I was literally going to change what's above. Well, here it goes:
18th Lok Sabha
- ... that post enforcement of Women's Reservation Bill in India in the next few years, 33% of women MPs will be required although new Lok Sabha has only 14%?
§§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:42, 13 June 2024 (UTC). General eligibility:
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Overall: Approved only for ALT hook proposed by me. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 11:43, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
Parengyodontium album
- ... that Parengyodontium album is only one of four known species of marine fungi that is capable of degrading plastics? Source: https://www.nioz.nl/en/news/fungus-breaks-down-ocean-plastic
- ALT1: ... that the marine fungal species Parengyodontium album only breaks down polyethylene plastics that has been exposed to UV light?
- Reviewed:
- Comment: Recently created. I think the refs and the content needs a quick double check for verifiability and copyvio. However, I think it should be ok.
- Approving both hooks. Article is long enough and created 2 days before DYK nomination. Article is presentable, sourced, and copyvio-free. Both hooks are interesting and well-sourced. QPQ not needed. Good to go overall. Thank you Classicwiki and Chiffre01. Kimikel (talk) 19:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Benjamin Jackson (sailor)
- ... that Benjamin Jackson was likely paid at least $300 to fight in the American Civil War as Lewis Saunders?
- Source: Pages 197 and 198 of this book detail how Benjamin Jackson enlisted in the Union Navy in May 1864 as a substitute for a US citizen named Lewis Saunders, who was drafted, but had the opportunity to pay for a substitute to take his place. The fee Jackson received was likely at least $300. Because Jackson served as a substitute, he was enlisted under the Saunders name.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Space Babies
- Comment: Thank you in advance for reviewing my nomination!
Dugan Murphy (talk) 22:35, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Can't find any mention of 300 dollars in the book, accepted in good faith. TheNuggeteer (talk) 07:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Brunel University lecture centre
- ... that Brunel University's lecture centre (pictured) was planned to be part of one of the biggest engineering teaching complexes in Europe?
- ALT1: ... that Brunel University's lecture centre (pictured) has been described as "imposing" and "frightening", but also as "an expressive centrepiece" and "a brutalist classic"? Source: "imposing", "frightening" and "a brutalist classic", "an expressive centrepiece"
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dagmar Skálová
- Comment: I personally prefer ALT1.
Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 22:19, 14 June 2024 (UTC).
- Review underway... Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 16:02, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Created (moved from draftspace) on 14th June.
- Long enough, and graded at B-class.
- Decent sources: NHLE listing particulars (extensive), a journal article with more than a passing mention, book about the university (I have checked this via WebArchive) and a couple of newspaper pieces. No issues around notability.
- QPQ review has been done and is awaiting action from the article's nominator. (Edit to say that this is one of the DYK nominations affected by the blocking of the article nominator Evrik as detailed here, which I hadn't realised until checking WT:DYK today. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 12:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC))
- Re. The lecture centre was finished in 1966 or 1967: surprising that Historic England has not been able to pin down the completion date, but I have checked the listing particulars and other sources and it is indeed the case.
- Image is suitably licensed, was taken by the article author, is used in the article and looks fine at thumbnail size.
- All statements are sourced. No issues with neutrality.
- No copyvio or close paraphrasing noted. There are a couple of phrases which cannot really be reworded without losing their meaning.
- Hooks: both are fully verified. ALT1 is better; I wonder if it might be worth including a reference to the building's use in A Clockwork Orange to grab attention. Something like: ...that Brunel University's "imposing" and "frightening" lecture centre (pictured) featured in A Clockwork Orange? (another editor would need to sign off that hook).
- Happy to mark this as verified. Note to prep builders: see my comment above on a possible ALT2 hook which I have suggested. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 21:09, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
Joan (Alexander McQueen collection)
- ... that the flaming finale of Joan by Alexander McQueen has been read as an image of violence, transcendence, resurrection, and resilience?
- Source:
- Bethune, Kate. "Encyclopedia of Collections". In Wilcox (2015), pp. 303–326. (Violence)
- Spooner, Catherine. "A Gothic Mind". In Wilcox (2015), pp. 141–158. (Transcendence/Resurrection)
- Fairer, Robert; Wilcox, Claire (2016). Alexander McQueen: Unseen. (Violence/Resurrection)
- Wilson, Andrew (2015). Alexander McQueen: Blood Beneath the Skin. (Resilience)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Homeworld: Vast Reaches
- Comment:
♠PMC♠ (talk) 23:51, 15 June 2024 (UTC).
- The article is long enough, new enough, and neutral. The hook is directly cited. I assume good faith on the references that I cannot read. A QPQ has been completed. Ready. SL93 (talk) 00:26, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I can send screencaps of anything if anyone does want to check the sources (GBooks has Unseen and Blood Beneath, I think). I just tweaked firery -> flaming as I think it flows more nicely. ♠PMC♠ (talk) 00:53, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Gmac Cash
- ... that rapper Gmac Cash attempted to gift a pair of Cartier glasses to Michigan Governor Gretchen Whitmer, but she declined?
- ALT1: ... that rapper Gmac Cash coined the nickname "Big Gretch" in a song for Michigan Governor Gretchen Whitmer? Source: ‘Big Gretch’ discusses nickname, potential run for White House. October 24, 2023, WNEM-TV.
- Reviewed:
reppoptalk 08:02, 18 June 2024 (UTC).
- Checked the references used for the first hook. It looks good and it's a funny story. Ready to go unless someone wants to come over and overrule me. Ominae (talk) 13:13, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
Timeline of Partygate
- ... that after he attended a birthday party on 19 June 2020 (pictured), Boris Johnson became the first serving Prime Minister of the United Kingdom to be found to have broken the law?
- Source: "Mr Johnson is the first serving PM to be sanctioned for breaking the law." BBC News
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zhang Zhenglang
- Comment: The best time to run this would probably be 19 June, but I recognise that I may have missed the boat on that date.
A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 20:44, 15 June 2024 (UTC).
- Comment not review As this is an article featuring election candidates, it should not appear on the main page until after 4 July, see ]
- New enough and long enough. QPQ present. This is a unique contribution to DYK as it is three paragraphs and a list; even though one paragraph does not end in an inline citation, I am treating it as a lead-section paragraph. All the list bullet points contain at least one inline citation. The hook fact checks out and is included. Image is OGL-licensed and acceptable for the Main Page. Good to go after 4 July per above. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:49, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the review, Sammi! If you've got concerns over the amount of prose in this article, I've expanded the lead with another paragraph. Let me know if you think this has improved things. Thanks, A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 15:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Gloria Dickie
- ... that environmental journalist Gloria Dickie did her thesis on how cities in Colorado changed garbage laws to prevent bear incursions?
- Source: "The Bear In Your Back Yard" - The New Yorker
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dick Walker (astronomer)
- Comment: The article was moved from draftspace to mainspace with this edit.
SilverserenC 20:18, 15 June 2024 (UTC).
- Newly moved article long enough and on notable topic. Subject passes GNG. No apparant copyvios. QPQ done. Hook is interesting and ready to go. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 12:23, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
The Servile State
- ... that in The Servile State, Hilaire Belloc (pictured) criticized socialism for being too similar to capitalism?
- Source: "The [socialist] experiment is thoroughly suited [...] to the Capitalist society which it proposes to replace. It works with the existing machinery of Capitalism, talks and thinks in the existing terms of Capitalism, appeals to just those appetites which Capitalism has aroused, and ridicules as fantastic and unheard-of just those things in society the memory of which Capitalism has killed among men wherever the blight of it has spread." p. 78 NB that Belloc earlier defines socialism and collectivism as the same thing (p. 7) which is why the source calls it collectivism.
- ALT1: ... that in The Servile State, Hilaire Belloc (pictured) traced the history of capitalism to the Protestant Reformation instead of the Industrial Revolution? Source: For the Reformation claim, see page 25; for the Industrial Revolution being incorrect see pp. 41–42
- ALT2: ... that although it was written in 1912, George Orwell once described The Servile State as "foretell[ing] with remarkable insight" events that occurred from the 1930s onward? Source: "The Servile State is written in a tiresome style, and the remedy it suggests (a return to small-scale peasant ownership) is for many reasons impossible: still, it does foretell with remarkable insight the kind of things that have been happening from about 1930 onwards."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Oen Boen Ing
- Comment: Open to other hooks; this page has plenty of DYK opportunities.
ThaesOfereode (talk) 23:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
- Approving ALT0 and ALT1. Article is long enough and expanded same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. Hooks are all interesting and sourced; I prefer the first two ALTs because ALT 2 requires prior knowledge of who George Orwell was, and because it just isn't as aesthetically pleasing due to the brackets. QPQ done. Image meets criteria. Overall, great nomination, thank you ThaesOfereode. Kimikel (talk) 20:16, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories
- ... that early in his career Terry Pratchett had published short stories in newspapers, which remained unknown until they were posthumously discovered and republished in the 2023 book A Stroke of the Pen?
- Source: "A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories – Like any collection of juvenilia, for committed fans only, but there's plenty here for them to enjoy". Kirkus Reviews. 2023. Archived from the original on 2023-10-12.
- ALT1: ... that Terry Pratchett's earliest Discworld stories were discovered by two fans and republished in 2023 in the posthumous book A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories? Source: "A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories". Publishers Weekly. 2023. Archived from the original on 2024-06-08.
- Reviewed:
Al83tito (talk) 04:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC).
- Article - Created 16 June, nominated 19 June: 4688 words: sources reliable, including source of hook: article is presentable. Hook - meets criteria of verifiability, interest and format. Good to go.Smerus (talk) 13:11, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Zhou Wennan
- ... that in order to re-marry, Zhou Wennan had to request Mao Zedong for permission?
- Source: 1942年,弟媳周文楠要求再婚,毛主席:我没意见,但是有一个条件
- ALT1: ... that for 38 years, Zhou Wennan never knew the fate of her son who served as a soldier in the Chinese communist-led Eighth Route Army? Source: 毛泽东侄子被谁秘密处决?30年后才真相大白
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Voyager 2
Toadboy123 (talk) 16:01, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
- New, long, & neutral enuf; interesting. AGF on refs, which are all in Chinese, & so both hooks. Earwig finds nothing. GTG. Johnbod (talk) 13:37, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
Banana (2024 video game)
- ... that a video game consisting solely of a clickable image of a banana became the second most played game on Steam?
Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 18:11, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
- @Generalissima: Article looks good, QPQ is done, etc. When I first saw the hook I wasn't sure if "second most played" referred to a concurrent count, or of a number of purchases in the past month or all time. I think it might be better to add something to the effect of "concurrent". You passed me in DYKs :(. ―Panamitsu (talk) 03:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Oh yeah, maybe "reached the second highest concurrent player count on Steam?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Yup that looks good to me. ―Panamitsu (talk) 03:22, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Oh yeah, maybe "reached the second highest concurrent player count on Steam?" Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
- Comment I do have some major doubts about this "game"'s notability. Mainly, I think it fails WP:SUSTAINED, as it appears to be a flash-in-the-pan phenomenon that quickly drops off the radar and there is nothing to really talk about with regards to its content. I am not sure if DYK articles are required to pass notability criteria (the guidelines simply say "reliably sourced") but it risks coming off as advertising if a non-notable gimmick reaches the main page. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 05:38, 18 June 2024 (UTC)]
- @Zxcvbnm: I feel the article pretty plainly meets GNG. It's covered in-depth in a wide variety of reliable sources for a month now, including Forbes. Even "gimmicks" are notable if they get significant, reliable coverage. (And no, notability is not a DYK thing. If it gets AFD'ed thats another issue.) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:49, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- The only sources in the article are from a 2-week timespan from the beginning of June to a few days ago. That, to me and likely most other editors is not a sustained span of time in which the "game" is discussed. That goes into the realm of Wikipedia as ]
- @Zxcvbnm: But lots of games have articles relatively soon after release. How can we say *any* game will or won't have coverage? Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:22, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
- Usually games have some degree of pre-release announcements and whatnot even before it comes out, with release day only cementing its notability. I'd say literally any game article that is created shortly after a game is announced is frowned upon for being WP:TOOSOON. I'm not saying it should be deleted now, but it does risk being deleted at a later date if its popularity fails to last. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 06:32, 18 June 2024 (UTC)]
- Usually games have some degree of pre-release announcements and whatnot even before it comes out, with release day only cementing its notability. I'd say literally any game article that is created shortly after a game is announced is frowned upon for being
- @Zxcvbnm: I feel the article pretty plainly meets GNG. It's covered in-depth in a wide variety of reliable sources for a month now, including Forbes. Even "gimmicks" are notable if they get significant, reliable coverage. (And no, notability is not a DYK thing. If it gets AFD'ed thats another issue.) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:49, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
Oen Boen Ing
- ... that Dr. Oen Boen Ing used his own money to pay for some patients' prescriptions?
- Source: Lie, Ravando (2017). "Dr Oen Boen Ing: Patriot Doctor, Social Activist, and Doctor of the Poor" (PDF). Wacana. 18 (2): 478. . – "Whenever Dr Oen knew a patient could not afford to pay for medicine, he would sign and stamp the prescription. [...] A prescription bearing Dr Oen’s signature meant that the doctor himself would pay for it out of his own pocket."
- ALT1: ... that Dr. . – "The report also said that Dr Oen was able to assist more than 200 patients a day and more than half of them did not have to pay a single penny. ... When a series of anti-Tionghoa upheaval erupted in Surakarta, Dr Oen was supposed to be evacuated to a safe place by the Republican government. However, after hearing such a plan, people in Surakarta submitted a petition rejecting the idea and hoping Dr Oen would remain in Surakarta to assist the poor."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Grace A. Johnson
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:04, 16 June 2024 (UTC).
- Excellent article. Neat guy.
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Overall: Earwig marked ~40% for the Wacana PDF, but a spot check indicates that it's probably due to the foreign language element and particular phrasing like "fun fairs"; I didn't see any serious issues. Promoter, feel free to double-check my work; this is my first QPQ review. ThaesOfereode (talk) 21:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks. I reviewed Earwig, and changed "decided to move" to "moved", but most of these are proper names or direct quotations. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:44, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
Frances Darlington
- ... that although sculptor Frances Darlington was known for her painted relief panels, she also designed a railway poster?
- Source: "(An Ilkley Borough Council committee was formed) ... to bring before the public the advantage of Ilkley, and in answer to an advertisement for designs in posters to be placed at various stations on the different railways, some thirty or more competed for same in colour. (After consideration) they awarded the first prize to Miss Frances Darlington, of Ilkley" - plus loads of sources in the article for her being a sculptor.
- Reviewed: Max Weil
- Comment: Created over some months in userspace, then moved to mainspace 17 June 2024
Storye book (talk) 10:03, 19 June 2024 (UTC).
- New article, well written and high quality (likely suitable for a GA nomination). No copyvio issues found. Hook is interesting, cited in the article, and of appropriate length. My one concern is the licensing of the image. Without the photographer's identity and thus death date, and without proof that it was first published prior to 1929, the claimed license is not valid. PD-old-assumed would be valid given that the image is >120 years old, but an appropriate US copyright tag would still be needed. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- I have done some further research and updated the licence. Storye book (talk) 09:13, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Storye book: Good work figuring out the photographer! Unfortunately, US copyright is tricky - proof of pre-1929 publication (or other scenarios) is still needed for it to be public domain in the US. I'm sorry to be pushy about this, but I've seen other hooks get pulled last-minute for similar issues and I don't want that to happen to you. If you're not able to find original publication information, then the hook would be fine without the image, or with one of her artworks (maybe File:Frieze by Darlington (9b) History the Sublime Hymn and Astronomy.jpg). Pi.1415926535 (talk) 22:11, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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- Note: I always do my best to cooperate on DYK templates, whether as reviewer, creator or nominator. However I also claim the right to an opinion. In this case, you will see that I am doing my best to cooperate. However, in the (nearly) 20 years that I have been a WP contributor, I have never seen a 120-year-old UK photo refused at DYK on those grounds. This image was a carte de visite, as were most photographs in the UK in 1897. They were purchased in batches and used as visiting cards, and were left at the addresses of acquaintances and businesses in the way that we leave our contact details today. Unlike our contact details today, cartes de visite were expected to be shared around by those who received them, because privacy was not an issue in the way that it is today, and cartes de visite were used as a form of advertisement. If that is not a form of publication, I don't know what is. Storye book (talk) 09:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- @Storye book: If it's a carte de visite, then I would consider it to have been published. I do think the fireze might be more interesting as a DYK image, since there are a lot of portraits there, but either image is just fine. Great work! Pi.1415926535 (talk) 21:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- I have done some further research and updated the licence. Storye book (talk) 09:13, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
1969 Progressive Conservative Party of New Brunswick leadership election
- ... that the 1969 leadership election for the Progressive Conservative Party of New Brunswick was blacklisted by the American Federation of Musicians because one of the candidates was indebted to them?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jacob Green Jackson
- Comment: Hook could be much better, but the article title is just excessively long. I'm open to rewording it upon suggestion.
B3251(talk) 13:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
- Approving hook. Article is long enough and created the same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. Hook is interesting and well-sourced, not sure if there's a better way to word it. QPQ done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for your nomination B3251! Kimikel (talk) 04:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
Radcliffe Telescope
- ... that the Radcliffe Telescope was the largest telescope in the Southern Hemisphere when it was completed in 1948?
http://www.royalobservatorygreenwich.org/articles.php?article=915
https://adsabs.harvard.edu/full/1951ASPL....6..170K- Reviewed:
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Overall: The article is new, the article is properly sourced, the article is neutral and plagiarism free, the hook is properly cited, the hook is interesting, and you don't require a QPQ, good to go! TheNuggeteer (talk) 11:14, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Joseph Tetley
- ... that Joseph Tetley, a member of the New Zealand Legislative Council, defrauded several investors to the 2017 value of NZ$7 million?
- Source: The Prow, a website run by several New Zealand libraries, says: "Adjusted to 2017 rates, Tetley ran off with under $7,000,000 NZD." And the same source mentions the appointment to the Legislative Council.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Ōsakishimojima
- Comment: Right, so this has just been on the main page as a minor link and got attention by 12 editors during the 24 hours on DYK (which is quite a bit for a New Zealand topic). The major expansion during that period was by HotMess. I've done some more expansion since and it's gone from 753 bytes of readable prose (prior to 17 June when expansion started) to 4753 bytes; more than the required 5x expansion.
And whilst we do have a mugshot for the subject, it's of poor quality and thus not worth including in this nomination.
Schwede66 06:39, 22 June 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing now. Aszx5000 (talk) 14:18, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good to go. Aszx5000 (talk) 14:29, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- 👀👀👀 (this is mildly exciting) 🔥HOTm̵̟͆e̷̜̓s̵̼̊s̸̜̃🔥 (talk・edits) 02:48, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Band of Angels (novel)
- ... that literary critic Leslie Fiedler called the novel Band of Angels "operatic in the worst sense of the word"?
- Source: Fiedler, Leslie A. (1955-09-26). "Romance in the Operatic Manner." The New Republic, vol. 26. pp. 28-30.
- ALT1: ... that Pulitzer Prize winner Robert Penn Warren wrote a novel called Band of Angels about a woman who is enslaved in order to pay her father's debts? Source: "Band of Angels" Review (1955-08-01). Bulletin from Virginia Kirkus' Service. New York: Kirkus Media, LLC.
- ALT2: ... that Robert Penn Warren's novel Band of Angels was adapted into a film starring Clark Gable and Sidney Poitier? Source: Band of Angels. Turner Classic Movies. Accessed 2024-06-16.
- Reviewed:
MattMauler (talk) 03:37, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Looks good, thanks for expanding the article! I'm partial to the initial hook, but either of the ALTs will work too. ThaesOfereode (talk) 23:12, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
Kho Ping Hoo
- ... that Kho Ping Hoo, despite writing numerous stories based on wuxia, could not read Chinese?
- Source: Sawega, Ardus M. (22 July 1994). "Asmaraman Kho Ping Hoo: "Saya Telah Iklas Pergi ..."" [Asmaraman Kho Ping Hoo: "I've Accepted My Departure ..."]. Kompas (in Indonesian). Jakarta. p. 20.
- ALT1: ... that .
- ALT2: ... that .
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hock burns
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:08, 17 June 2024 (UTC).
- / Leaning more towards original and ALT2; I'll leave the choice up to another reviewer. Great work here! --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 18:52, 20 June 2024 (UTC)