Wikipedia:Peer review/Automated/October 2007

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The Tell-Tale Heart

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Feeder discography

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The Joy of Sect

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Catherine de' Medici's building projects

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Skateboarding

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Anberlin

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Super Smash Bros. Brawl

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Rogers Act

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Royal Rumble (1994)

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Frederick Law Olmsted

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Bradford City A.F.C. seasons

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Battle of Gondar

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Snuffy's Parents Get a Divorce

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David Petraeus

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1999 Sydney hailstorm

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Hamlet

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SR Merchant Navy Class

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Metroid Prime

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FC Steaua Bucureşti

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Jane Zhang

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Robert Dean Frisbie

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WrestleMania III

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Transformers (film)

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Steve Lukather

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Opera (Internet suite)

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The Thriving Cult of Greed and Power

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Pauline Green

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Ed Hochuli

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The Preuss School UCSD

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Manchester Airport

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Joey Santiago

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Gillingham F.C. seasons

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Portal (video game)

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Electromagnetic spectrum

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Shaktism

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Brownhills

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Montgomery Canal

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A Very Merry Unauthorized Children's Scientology Pageant

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List of Washington Redskins first-round draft picks

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Thunder Bay Transit

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James Milner

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Space opera in Scientology scripture

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Castlevania: Dawn of Sorrow

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List of Bristol Rovers F.C. managers

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York City F.C. seasons

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Prayer

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Lance Bass

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Cowboys-Redskins rivalry

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European Union

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Universitario de Deportes

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List of films that received the Golden Film

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My response to these automated comments:

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Alpha Kappa Alpha

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Jerry Lawler

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Devi Mahatmya

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List of Washington Redskins players

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List of Ipswich Town F.C. players

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Washington Park Race Track

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London Borough of Croydon

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Chetwynd, British Columbia

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Blue Harvest (Family Guy)

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USA PATRIOT Act

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Chinua Achebe

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Takeshi Kawamura

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William Stacy

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William Gibson

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Holden

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Barbara Gordon

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Demoscene

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San Marino national football team

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List of York City F.C. players

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B-52 Stratofortress

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List of municipalities in Lycoming County, Pennsylvania

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Alanya

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Harry and the Potters

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Ethiopia

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Berkley Bedell

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University of California, Riverside

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Windows Mobile

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Florida Atlantic University

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Ashdod

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Pilot (One Tree Hill)

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List of Norwich City F.C. players of the year

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Canberra

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Kunichika

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Joseph Priestley

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Digital divide

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Kingdom of Mysore

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Duquesne University

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Attachment therapy

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Alan Keyes

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Middle Road, Singapore

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Papa Stour

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Final comment - I am a bit concerned about the coverage will this be good even for FA?

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University of Dayton Ghetto

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Death of Edgar Allan Poe

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 Not done "The Poe Toaster" is a title, "The" seems necessary. (Anyone disagree?) --Midnightdreary 03:36, 5 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Cleomenean War

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Naucratis

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Dharma

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Calgary Tigers

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